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^ Handsome Hustler Intro - Ben Franklin
This is the intro for my upcoming mixtape "The Handsome Hustler"
nothing too serious, everybody around here likes it so I figured it'd be decent enough for an intro..let me know what you think..
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tight beat had some cool lines
flows good, u stayed on point throughout this
i think its a cool intro man. keep at it
this is nice... pretty good intro... makes me wanna listen to the next song... i like the flow and the lyrics were real good... delivery was nice, i could tell in a spot or two that u were runnin outta breath, but i dont think it hurt the song at all... overall, good work, nice intro...
Beat is tight, my fav line is 'fucking with the coke now her nose getting runny' your lines are okay, they are all pretty simplistic, but you still bring them on point and they sound nice, got a little swag game going in ya voice. But for an intro its pretty tight. Keep it up man, get some more complicated rhymes and you got it, your voice is pretty on point.
i used that intro as well.. Lol..u come in well..let me say this,and no offense homey.. ur mos def coming in with punches.. but ur punches and lines are a bit dated and cliche.. very street/pop-ish... sorta like fabolous.. u could try an do some dubs and add more energy for that type of beat.. its a strong beat and ur vocals are real laid back cool nigga shit.. i can dig the song on that level.. pz.
this is cool... some cool lines.. some iight ones.. decent shit here...not bad....
Woodbridge VA? thats cool.... I'm originally from Springfield...
good lookin so far yall, and yeah springfield is right up the street no bullshit
Hell yeah, i lived there for 17 years.. I went to Thomas Edison High School 2002-2004, then i moved and graduated where I'm at now.
I'm sure you know some people I know.
You got some lines up in here my dude. That's what really kept me listening, I had to keep throwing this ish on repeat and coming back to catch everything. Aside from that everything else was pretty much on point. Nothing mind blowing, but it was pretty dope. Keep up the good work Ben
I used the wrong sn lol damn
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Good look on the intro bro. Shit sounded nice, flow was on point, was something I was feelin. Really dug the bars on the track, something that should get somebody interested in the rest of the mixtape after hearin the openin.
Good stuff.
good lookin on the feedback I really appreciate it, I just got my equipment back up and running so imma keep throwin yall new shit
sounds tight bro...keep it up!
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i hate zhsare
it never lets me download or hear anything!
imma have some new shit up soon dont worry
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