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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Eviley's Avatar
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    pain of plane

    As they sat there waiting for her plane to arrive
    she was leaving him, Her soul her life
    as tears pour down her cheek like a waterfall of brokenheart
    she whispers softly into his ear that she loved him from the start

    they remember the times they had during her stay
    or that first time he kissed her cheek by the waterbay
    he told her all you can remember is the goodtimes we had
    now go back to your old life don't think of me and be sad
    i'm there in heart but not in touch, i will miss your presence here soo much

    they stood up and gazed into the doors of eachothers soul and saw eachothers heart which they both stole
    his hand glided across the water of pain on her face of sorrow
    even though there won't be a tomorrow
    they hugged eachother goodbye as the noise of a ladies voice who said her plane has arrived
    she kissed him and whispered i love you into his ear
    as she handed him her necklace without hesitant fear

    she slowly backed away and looked one last time into his eyes
    turning not looking back cause she feared her cries
    there fingers tips slipped away from eachothers
    so many tales they have heard of young lovers

    she handed her boarding pass to what she thought was hell
    not looking to which was once her heaven, soon after fell
    he watched her fly above his head till she out of sight
    and he felt empty and dead, water appeared without a fight

    a tear went down his cheek by just the thought of her
    his eyes watered and said it's not fair
    he walked to his car with nothing but silence,not even a word
    he place her picture on the car dashboard

    and drove away from what was pain
    and never looked back till they meet again.
    "Heaven sees no rage like love to hatred turn, no hell a fury like a Woman scorned

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    i peeped this in the poetry
    section...this shit was mad
    dope nah'mean. not similar
    to my style. cuz i am a g'd
    out thug. and my thugness
    leave no room for lovin. nah
    mean. nah but shawdy. this
    was tight on tha real. no
    joke.

    umm..ok im done talking
    like that....

    if you only knew the thoughts
    in my head as i read this fine
    piece. well. hopefully they will
    STAY in my head. lol. nice
    drop sweetie.....

    8.6-10

    it had a nice feeling of emotion
    in there. i liked it a whole lot!
    haha....pieces!
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    i really felt the emotion in this that is a gift to use words for visual effect mad props
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    upping for her....
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