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  1. #1
    Soule
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    Eye C U

    Wake up. Wake Up Aaron.

    You're whole life you've been typing on a keyboard.
    Talking to people you dont even know, it's funny.
    This is another game, one point wins; can you score?
    The view from where I am if you lose will be stunning.
    Running out of time, Aaron you might want to hurry
    Before that imagenation becomes real, times slipping through
    Now find the key, you dont want to die now surely
    Here's a clue, open the box; and Eye C U


    Tik, Tok, Tik, Tok.

    Lets play a game, imagine that millions are watching a tape
    But only one man counts, that would me you Aaron Nash
    And the people that dont get the answer right, R 2 late
    So look closely, you really might want to think fast
    The past is through, you're life is at stake for once
    But the eye's of the beholder are lying in front of you
    Remember from before, you must survive this plus
    You must do it alone, because I only give one clue
    Roses are red, violets are blue; might want to think that through
    I'm sick of people that are not greatful for their own lives
    The kind of people that waste their own bodies for joy
    These very people are the one's that never do survive
    The pleasure of them dying by everyone of my new toys
    I watch them kill them selves, news call me a serial killer
    I'm just a man with cancer, that hates the people that complain
    About not having the life they want, like Amanda; I didn't kill her
    She killed her self in the making of life, trying to steal my name
    You're out of time Aaron, you're rotten life has jsut gone lower
    Eye C U, but it's too late; sorry my friend but it's game over.
    Last edited by Soule; November 25th, 2006 at 04:18 PM

  2. #2
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    Bump, enjoy the image.

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    Re: Eye C U

    rofllll

  4. #4
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    Like?

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    Re: Eye C U

    lol you killed cry roflll

  6. #6
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    I'm afraid so.

  7. #7
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    Upps!

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    Re: Eye C U

    I hate to say it.. but u and cry are like some school girls, all you do is bitch back and fourth.... tisk tisk... it not worth feeding bro... sorry... you had good fundamentals but stupid topic...
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  9. #9
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    Fucking retard.! it was about the guy from the beginning of Saw 2. I just mixed it up a bit. The only thing that was meant to be funny was the opic. I was serius about the peicve

  10. #10
    Soule
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    Re: Eye C U

    Upp.

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    Re: Eye C U

    This was coo. but simplistic...you covered the bases of a o-m.... I really didn't enjoy it but it was meh...Your vocab was way to simple...ya structure was coo.. but this really didn't have that effect that really grasp the reader...It was like you weren't taking this serious...This is my first piece I read from you and I'm not that empressed...The topic I didn't like..because I'm more into orginality myself...but when I read the title I thought that you'd have a different take on it..but you really didn't show me anything....I think that you to should read the tutorial as well not that youre wack but to grasp new Ideas because it work for me but everything doesn't work for everybody...keep that in mind... overall like I said I didn't really like it but...keep writing..RTF....on Her Love Flows I just bumped it up in O-M....it's under my alais......*


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  12. #12
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    Re: Eye C U

    This isn't the first peice you've read from me retard. I'm Blind Sences.

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    Re: Eye C U

    Aw I didn't know..... Like I have a alais reading mind.. Your dope.... but what happened with this one...was it just a quick key...or did you not take it serious...from a writers standpoint...


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  14. #14
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    Re: Eye C U

    Took me like 10 mintues. I just wanted to get the topic off my chest so people could be amazed with such a diope sig in the middle

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    Re: Eye C U

    fuck your face bastard.

    i'll kill you.

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