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    .These Are The Days.

    I'm at the venue posin' for pictures//
    Had to bless you by flowin' this scripture//
    I wrote for my niggas to feel//
    Try to relate, I rhyme out of hate//
    For ignorance, this the naked evidence//
    The case that E is in, corrupt judge//
    Biased juries is given guilty decisions//
    It's tough love, I feel this position is fucked up//
    But necessary, I'll step to every cop and bust slugs//
    When the prophet comes up from the cemetary//
    I'm mentioned every hour, this here's legendary power//
    Everybody fears God, especially the cowards//
    Wierd guys worship statues all day//
    Filling school buildings, classrooms, and hallways//
    But don't learn a thing while chrome burners ring//
    For dismissal of life like the missles that strike//
    At targets when a hateful man marks it//
    They say they wanna light the darkness//
    But they fight the heartless, overprice the market//
    I write this song so you niggas might respond//
    With a little feedback, this little nigga need that//
    Let's build, so I can chill a little, relax//
    We got problems that we deal with on our kneecaps//
    Long prayers in church buildings, earth's children//
    Lost laying in hearse chillin', dirt spillin'//
    For burial ceremonies, take the world to the grave//
    Jewelry forever on me, these are the days...//

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    .ZzZzZzZz.

    Don't sleep on this joint!

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    uppin this tight peace.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    nice flow, you could feel where the emphasis was put into the words and where the the sound popped.. str8 shit here, uppin' 4 mah boy..
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    aaaaaaaaaahahhahahah!
    Armageddon, oh my god!
    This is Camarac, i remember
    you showed me the ropes
    when i first joined here!
    SHIT! Anyways, great piece
    you have here, a couple of
    the bars were a little short
    and threw the flow a little,
    nice imagery though, a few
    more multi's, internals and
    externals and this would be
    better, but as it is, its a pretty
    stand out piece, i enjoyed
    reading it. Good drop 'Don.

    Holla at my piece, see if ive improved!

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    Rihanna, man, that was pretty sad,
    But I saw those naked pics, looks like he didn't beat her ASS too bad. - Cheese Man

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