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    Late Night Keystyle

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...293/index.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...913/index.html

    This skin i wear my cross to bear, how can things just seem this way
    Ask my parents is it fair? "Its just the way it is" they say
    Told to keep myself in line, keep emotions deep inside,
    Though i feel the need to cry I ball my fists and breathe a sigh
    I know that I can handle this, but I want to cross the bridge
    See another side to life not teeter on this cautious ridge
    No one else just seems to care, or too afraid to speak their mind
    We are all just one united people, dont our leaders think its time
    To change the way we interact, or is this just our destiny
    Brains ingrained to never change, i thought minds worked progressively?
    I cant believe the people around me all just seem to be content
    Poor and going hungry, hard to eat when you just feed the rent
    But being stuck together so creates a bond thats strengthening
    Even when the chips are down you know its not worth severing
    But why cant everyone see the big picture so we can utilize
    A strategy worked craftily to save us from our true demise
    And thats living how we're living now, believing dominant ideology
    Who gives them the so called right to call us the bottom of society

    Farewells are in order

    Mom... Dad,
    I know you dont approve of my words and actions, but honestly like it or not
    I choose to be this burden, and refuse, to accept this life and just rot
    And I do... bless and thank you for this present life that I got
    But my futures in my hands... and im about to cut the Gordion knot

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    Re: Late Night Keystyle

    pretty dope for a keystyle...

    had emoption behind it that ppl can relate to.

    nice verse
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    Re: Late Night Keystyle

    Quote Originally Posted by 2XL View Post
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    No one else just seems to care, or too afraid to speak their mind
    We are all just one united people, dont our leaders think its time
    To change the way we interact, or is this just our destiny
    Brains ingrained to never change, i thought minds worked progressively?
    These were my favourite lines.Good drop, it had emotion and complexity, more towards the end is where that kicked in. was a good read man, keep it up.

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    Re: Late Night Keystyle

    thankks for the feed bros

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