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jdro
Marv.J
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I'm new to this game, but don't show me a little bit,
I'm the Big Papi, and you're full of shit*
But battle me? fool you'll need some sort of miracle,
I pop rhymes, like yellow corn cereal,
Marv.J? what a catchy name!
That stupid abbreviation kills his shabby game,
He thinks hes all king like he runs this place,
But when its me against you its like guns against mace,
yeah you know you can't stop me from the moment I start,
but ill let you catch up cuz i know your flow ain't sharp.
* Big Papi is a player on the Boston Red Sox, Marv.J is a yankee fan..
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your goin at a real gangster its time the panic kid.
my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
broke ass nigga you trouble tryna find a chick.
they stop sayn hydro when they found u cant afford a dyme of it.
my lines is insane im gettin sick & tired of lames.
nigga marv's unstoppable n you lookn like thomas to train.
why is this loser her? known he gon be losin here.
nigga u got the shape of sponge bob plus krusty krabs in ur pubic hair.
one-shot.
is fuckn gay.
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your goin at a real gangster its time the panic kid.
my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
broke ass nigga you trouble tryna find a chick.
they stop sayn hydro when they found u cant afford a dyme of it.
Pretty one sides marv had a simple drop I've seen way harder but its fine cause it still did the job
Good flow by both but marv had some good word play and multies
My vote marv
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes
yeah you know you can't stop me from the moment I start,
but ill let you catch up cuz i know your flow ain't sharp.
was your best bar, but wasnt much
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my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
broke ass nigga you trouble tryna find a chick.
they stop sayn hydro when they found u cant afford a dyme of it.
was feelin the personal. the hydro word play concept was nice, jus a lil played
JDro jus want ready in this battle at all, but doesnt mean you cant get better
good battle, but vote goes to Marv easily.
peep the battles:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...588/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...644/index.html
Lack of personals on JDro's part really got him here... gotta come up with some better concepts and personals... no real sting in your punches.
Marv came with enough... he's first two bars were easily the best which comfortably got him this win... he came with better hits.
V/ MarvJ
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your goin at a real gangster its time the panic kid.
my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
why is this loser her? known he gon be losin here.
nigga u got the shape of sponge bob plus krusty krabs in ur pubic hair.
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Vote: MJ for his opener and the SpongeBob line. Honestly, all it took was one bar to get the W this time around. JDro came with weak statements that lacked punches and direction. You need to do some research and see what flies in FL. Otherwise you are simply slap-boxing against heavyweights. No hate to either, but keep elevating JDro...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...512/index.html
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your goin at a real gangster its time the panic kid.
my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
broke ass nigga you trouble tryna find a chick.
they stop sayn hydro when they found u cant afford a dyme of it.
vote-->marv for coming way harder. j u was to basic
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your goin at a real gangster its time the panic kid.
my cannons big & it'll get rid of JD quicker than janet did.
broke ass nigga you trouble tryna find a chick.
they stop sayn hydro when they found u cant afford a dyme of it.
vote-->marv for coming way harder. j u was to basic
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