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    sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    You can use your coldest weapon and learn this oldest lesson
    at your own discretion and live the hollow dream
    donald pleaseance in halloween is how i tend to follow eve
    and el cause i drink from the eternal spring
    so try to think in depth end to the ent follow me
    connected i can disect your whole square in under five seconds
    for them kids who try hard to die harder followin
    the stereo to give them the type its hood like gettin high
    gettin a vision of christ show the grimace of life
    a blemish that binds intercepting the lines throw a wrench into time
    and screw up events that destine design of your defenseless mind

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...226/index.html http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...198/index.html
    Last edited by brokenhalo; April 7th, 2011 at 10:39 PM Reason: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/first-rhymes-448198/index.html

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    Re: sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    love it. multis kick ass, vocab kicks ass, i love the shit you painted in my head; my pineal is tickled haha keep it up bro, i like your style a lot

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    Re: sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    thanks alot

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    Re: sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    this'll get closed if you dont leave your links...

    to me your structure is all over the place... id work on that
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    Re: sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    i have no structure just form i respect your opinion

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    Re: sumthin new havent wrote in a minute

    nice vocab
    pretty good

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