Goodnight Wave

[Cody Nash]

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Rock performance - not comformin'...
same old cat that has to wake up every mornin'
to sing the same song and -
killin' 'em with thought's breath...
happy I'm alive, but what's iller is I'm NOT dead
honest... plotless, the show goes on...
the people all ignore, but they know what's wrong
without atonement.. God... where would I be?
honestly, it's obscene, it's there in my free's
a panda stance... yea, cuddly & ferocious
broken & hopeless, yet open to the hope with
no place to go.. 'cept for off the ground
a girl grabbed my heart in the lost and found
I'm sloth come down from the top of a beam,
for the last time, yes, it's just not what it seems
clothes don't fit, gettin' popped at the seams..
ridin' like a pirate with gallapagos dreams -
pause for a second - is that not what this means?
can I get a good rhythm without droppin' the beat?
head boppin', asleep.. pickin' up from the top
my plane crashed down, but I wasn't as lost..
take it stride, time to stomach my loss
all m-m-my life I been jumpin' across...
it's all for nothin' - it's on...
yo, my lovin' is raw -
tell me just once... DO YOU LOVE IT OR NOT, UHN!
sing me a love song - beastin' the drops cuz
most my fuckin' life I been rippin' apart, WHAT?!?
GOT SOMETHIN' TO SAY??? WANT THIS DROP IN YOUR FACE!?!
can I get it across? am I droppin it plain??
it's almost awkward to say, but I'm dark as this heart
tryin' to let go.. it's gettin' harder stop...
yeah, that harbor is harsh - but the ocean is home,
I always ride the tide - today I'm hopin' I don't

wave ya hands in the air...


wave... wave...

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...724/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07333&posted=1

[djb]

not a bad drop man. Seemed like you rushed a couple lines, but lyrically this was dope. Delivery is getting more polished and your sounding more and more confident each time. I only heard the vocals clip once when you said WHAT. A couple words sounded a bit muddled, but pretty nice drop man. You're elevating rather quickly.

Please return the favor and hit up my link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...614/index.html

[I-M-E]

this wasnt bad man, cool beat on it...flow is pretty good...delivery needs a bit more to it....lyrics are good, def like when u do get a little mad sounding....

[Andrewert]

i feel like ive heard this beat before.. overall it was good. good vocab, good flow i could see this on my ipod. The only thing i dont like is that you build suspense but you dont follow :|
but i really enjoyed it, its soothing and is just giving me inspiration to write my rap

[Cody Nash]

The beat is an instrumental by "The XX" and The Blue Scholars also remixed it.. the beat was too short lol and I dunno how to loop that shit or I would've kept rippin' that thing up haha.. thanks for the feed all.

I'll hit links tonight/tomorrow.

[EBCB]

diggin this.... good lyrics... flow is good... diggin the beat.... overall cool track here...

[KANNON]

the beat is not my type of joint...the lyrics at times seems forced...like u were tryin to rhyme syllables...i mean u pulled of the multies but u lack content...or correct content...the flow is on for the most part...delivery i thought was good...i just think u need to make the perfect rhyme instead of trying to rhyme alot...this was cool tho...justs needs stronger content

[J-min]

if you want me to loop the instrumental for ya just hola brah!

vocals are dope bro realling feeling it...
beat is emotional man sounds like some sorta track ud get at the end of a hood film man dope!

rtf http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...607/index.html

[Rishi P]

hitting u back fam....cool intro on beat here....aiigh u coming in...hmm flow is cool but i really think you coulda came with a bit of anger or some more emotion i feel your lyrics but i really wanna feel them man get mad get sad let them fuckin know....aiigh you picking it up as the tarck goes on....breaths are getting a bit loud watch taht breath control

overall i liked this man good for like an intro or interlude for mixtape or sumtin

[Cody Nash]

thanks all! =)

[Soule]

My only issue is the quality in your voice kind of out does the beat itself. But other than that, dope as hell track dude. Vocabulary was clean cut. Delivery was smooth. there were maybe one or two lines that seemed like you got ahead of yourself or tongue tied. Beat kind of reminds me of Limp Bizkit for some reason. Don't ask, lol. Cool track though. Way to represent the NW homie.

[JoeyOnslaught]

^^^ haha it reminded me of Limp Bizkit too oddly enough. I completely agree...nice lyrics but your flow was a bit choppy...seems you forced some lines out when you shouldve kept riding the beat smoothly throughout and then on other parts you lacked that "umph" to finish off your lines. It improves when the beat switches up midway though...quality was a little off...good track regardless man. Keep going your thing

RTF when you get a chance.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...799/index.html

[Well Versed]

hmmmm not bad...

[.Mimic.]

This is really dope!
WOW, those lyrics are powerful and the change of tempo in your voice was amazing!
i think the mixing can be improved, but the flow and emotion in this was incredible.
I think you need to make it longer but this time include a hook, it would really bring this peice together! Nice dope drop bro!