Wrote this up a while back in a couple of hours. Needs work but I thought I'd get some opinions. Remember, I'm Australian so some words may not seem like the rhyme right
So you’re, locked up in your fortress of solitude
The game’s, knocked up but there’s a hole in the womb
On the run yeah there’s no stopping you
No lies yeah it’s the fuckin’ truth
Walls closing in, claustrophobic irrational here
You’re crying now and you don’t know if its passion or fear
Running for it, running as you’re smashing your cares
Slamming the door now, turn your back on your lab and your lair
Others have got it and you haven’t no fair
Eyeing them off, with your ravenous stare
They don’t know what’s cutting you deep inside
All they see is the pain that’s in them eyes
They don’t ask because they know all they’ll get is lies
You’ve forgiven but it’s hard to forget this time
Broken your spirit, your back this is the last straw
It’s hard to live it when life has dealt you a harsh draw
Others hurt but you know you hurt so much more
He’s robbed your spirit and you know all your stuff’s gone
You, punch his head just because he cut you off son
And I ain’t talking bout the car which cut you off once
Behind red eyes it’s hard to feign that you’re having fun
Ignored by life for a crime which you haven’t done
Being judged for a game which you haven’t won
Coming last in a race which you haven’t run
You didn’t volunteer for this, you didn’t sign up
You didn’t cheer for him when he went on the run
You ran yourself from the darkness deep within
You felt resentment, your bond broken when you speak with him
You’re a felon on the run and you’re knee deep in sin
You’re the garbage, a by-product of a septic bin
You're hurting now so you express it on your spouse
While she seeks respite with your best friend
She's selling the house, and has planned life for the next step
These deep issues have left you punching on with life
Tears seep in tissues as you transformed and you’re punching your wife
You’re now him and you leave your family abandoned in strife
You’re a spark’s flint what the fuck are you doing with life?
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