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The Last Level
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and ext please
The Last Level
bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
you need to get skinnier too, cause your girl aint prettier dude
King couldnt get his hands in a honey if he were winnie the pooh.
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
u had the tag belt in a sick spot,then GoW killed u w/ quick drop
So Arch replaced your worn out ass faster than a tire in a pit stop
Last edited by A.T.; August 20th, 2011 at 08:48 PM
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last couple battles left u abused n discarded n i'm saying its fateOriginally Posted by Marvelous' Crew Bio
cuz everyone knows sicilians have a history of being invaded n raped
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
...next
The Last Level
Marv
bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
descent bar here. i may have heard this concept before but still quotable
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
rofl
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
i thought this was pretty dope
king
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
lol ok
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
this was cool
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
this was my favorite bar of the battle.
Descent battle. Marv homie you def did not go at it as dope as usual you had some bars in there but you just werent that consistent. King was consistent tho. and had some harder hitting punches. GJ gents
v/King
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bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
its more self hype - doesn't hit hard enough imo
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
lol
you need to get skinnier too, cause your girl aint prettier dude
King couldnt get his hands in a honey if he were winnie the pooh.
meh
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
iight
u had the tag belt in a sick spot,then GoW killed u w/ quick drop
So Arch replaced your worn out ass faster than a tire in a pit stop
meh
vs
last couple battles left u abused n discarded n i'm saying its fate
cuz everyone knows sicilians have a history of being invaded n raped
ight
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
lol
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
nice, wording was a lil off tho
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
meh
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
nice
v/king
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
vs
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
Marv came nice but I seen him drop some heavier stuff before. To be honest I gotta go with King here for a more consistent verse.
v/ King
MARV
You made the battle personal wit that last bar. And u started of strong wit that first bar. I didn't like how u wasted more than one line talkin about his bitch in such a short verse.
KING
Started srtong as well, wit da little history lesson. But u fell off, The rest of the verse juz didn't hit hard enough imo.
Structure/Flow: MARV
Pubchlines: KING
Overall Effectiveness: MARV
It was a fairly close battle, but i'd give the W to MARV
bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
good, clever opener
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
good punch, makes perfect sense, i got a laugh out of this. haha i can take a joke, lol
you need to get skinnier too, cause your girl aint prettier dude
King couldnt get his hands in a honey if he were winnie the pooh.
nice.
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
lol i dunno why but i thought te 2nd line in that bar was funny
u had the tag belt in a sick spot,then GoW killed u w/ quick drop
So Arch replaced your worn out ass faster than a tire in a pit stop
ouch, good closer
vs.
last couple battles left u abused n discarded n i'm saying its fate
cuz everyone knows sicilians have a history of being invaded n raped
ehh, okay opener
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
good punch
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
wording seemed a lil off here, but good
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
mehh
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
good closer
v - -marv- for harder punches. King in my opinion started off slow but picked it up at the end. no hate, good battle.
bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
seen this concept before but was flipped nicely
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
haha sooo true
you need to get skinnier too, cause your girl aint prettier dude
King couldnt get his hands in a honey if he were winnie the pooh.
ok
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
cool np
u had the tag belt in a sick spot,then GoW killed u w/ quick drop
So Arch replaced your worn out ass faster than a tire in a pit stop
ouch personal
vs
last couple battles left u abused n discarded n i'm saying its fate
cuz everyone knows sicilians have a history of being invaded n raped
aight
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
cool nightmare line
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
kinda wordy but aight
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
aight but kinda irrelevant..(cud be said to anyone)
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
lol cool
Both came decent here .. but King had some punches that were ehh..Marv was consistent with good punches which i thought gave em the win. good battle
v-Marv
bitch is a frozen dead beat,no problems beatin this textcee
cause i'll keep king in check, without moving a chess piece
cool, good opener
ya lines never left me hurt, to fight youd have to tempt me first
b/cause King is a bigger failure than a punch in a jeffry verse
ok, funny
you need to get skinnier too, cause your girl aint prettier dude
King couldnt get his hands in a honey if he were winnie the pooh
pretty good
i drop bombs my music is sick, fire spits no ones as rutheless as this
i bring heat, see king, <<and those missles will kill you nd ur bitch
good, creative
u had the tag belt in a sick spot,then GoW killed u w/ quick drop
So Arch replaced your worn out ass faster than a tire in a pit stop
good closer
vs
last couple battles left u abused n discarded n i'm saying its fate
cuz everyone knows sicilians have a history of being invaded n raped
good opener
he's a loser, hangin' outside of schools n playgrounds durin' the night
running Nightmares like Freddy Krueger, a pedophile that got burned in life
good
n ya girl hates u, but she does have something in common with u as it were
which is that ur making it 9x for me, n i'm doing my 3rd xxx movie with her
nice, creative
i'll break in his place n get violent with ease, so its about time he retreats
or get his face smashed on the TV so many times he'll need to sign a release
liked it a lot, overall pretty good
he'll never suceed in leagues, cats in LLL n tournys would rip this clown
marv will only ever be a threat in FL...cuz there's so many high school kids around
ok closer
Close, though overall I felt King was a little more creative/original at times. Still close though because Marv, you had some good bars as well, heat seeking was nice too but in the end I was feeling more damage was done by King.
v/King
A poem should curve
like the bell of a tulip,
or a pistol grip.
~Joel Dias-Porter
shits a champ battle, and its taken this long to get votes? LMAO
anyway
^^ LMMFAO, i thought this was funny but it wasnt super hard hitting
^^ BOTB for me
it was really really close til almost the very end but King whipped out that closer, and won it IMO
good battle
V/ King
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