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    King vs. God 0f War (GOW WINS)

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    Due: September 8th, 2011.
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    30 Lines, no more no less.
    Both opponents must compliment Token in check ins or will be banned for 15 seconds.

    Good Luck.. and may the winner be declared almost as good as Token

    Extended to September 12th

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    check

    token is pretty!

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    token has cool usertitles.


    thats it, thats all i got for you. lmao
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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    Verse edited out and sent to token.
    Last edited by King; September 12th, 2011 at 11:28 PM
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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    double

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    rofl

    yall clowns kill me


    none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
    its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
    i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
    if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
    cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
    f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
    n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
    if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
    nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
    ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
    ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
    so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
    n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
    it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
    your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
    if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
    i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
    when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
    you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
    the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
    ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
    cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
    in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
    the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
    n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
    you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
    n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
    so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
    im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
    so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
    Last edited by Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere; September 13th, 2011 at 11:42 PM

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    Quote Originally Posted by Gow in FL Mag Last year
    New Emcee Of The Week
    lyrisic
    this dude is a problem
    Quote Originally Posted by Gow in LLL mag
    SuthHighLander 9:03 pm
    (9:03:25 PM): ne surprises outta nowhere for someone rookie wise outstagin some big wigs?
    ThaGrowth24 9:03 pm
    (9:03:41 PM): lyrisic i think is gona be a problem
    ThaGrowth24 9:05 pm
    (9:05:50 PM): lmao naw jus think the kid is dope n just coming into his own
    Quote Originally Posted by Gow in Gauntlet chat
    but yo i wanna say props to king for bringing one of the best verses personal wise i seen against me in the past few months

    the cbj line was classic so was the type like htis shit

    You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
    N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
    His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
    Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
    Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
    I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
    He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
    We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
    I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
    If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
    I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
    Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
    ...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
    He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
    N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
    Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
    Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
    N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
    Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
    I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
    Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
    Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
    Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
    Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
    If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
    He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
    I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
    Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
    He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
    The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
    He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
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    God of War
    none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
    its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
    ^Nothing special.

    i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
    if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
    ^Okay.

    cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
    f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
    ^Well, your just throwin little jabs that are just barley clipping him.

    n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
    if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
    ^Nah.. Again with a little jab.

    nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
    ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
    ^Tight. I liked this. Finally hit em with a 'straight' that connected

    ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
    so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
    ^"ills ove the tourney" - I don't overstand so I can't hold this against you.

    n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
    it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
    ^Okay.. a jab.

    your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
    if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
    ^Damn. That's a violent, fucked up thing to say about someones mom. Wordplay on 'cut' was alright. Not that clever. Kinda like a head bump if this were a boxing match.

    i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
    when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
    ^Not feeling this.

    you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
    the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
    ^Nice hit. Another punch connected.

    ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
    cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
    ^Played concept that has been flipped to hell in the past.

    in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
    the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
    ^Aight. Little self glory here, like a dance move mocking the opponent. Prematurely though, so it's not that affective.

    n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
    you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
    ^Uh... this concept could have worked way better if you had a different approach. But you just grazed him with this.

    n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
    so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
    ^Okay. little jab at the three second mark.

    im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
    so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
    ^Ugh. Weak closer.

    VS.

    King
    You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
    N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
    ^Alright good start.

    His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
    Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
    ^Eh.

    Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
    I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
    ^Okay. Just a jab.

    He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
    We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
    ^I'm not sure how Warren SAP relates to him. But the 'rushing lines' concept is okay

    I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
    If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
    ^Alright. Another jab.

    I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
    Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
    ...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
    ^Really extended set up that lost its flow because of the lack of multiple rhyming words. Good attempt at a personal but it fails because of wording problems.

    He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
    N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
    ^Okay. You threw another jab.

    Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
    Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
    ^Kinda funny. This one counts.

    N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
    Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
    ^Eh. Not affective.

    I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
    Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
    ^Uh, barley grazing him with this line

    Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
    Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
    ^I don't know who Brandon is so I can't hold this against you.

    Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
    If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
    ^Yo, you just made me look up the words "Warsaw ghetto' so I can overstand this line. It was a pretty fucked up place in Germany a long time ago. But besides that, this nameplay line was just 'okay'.

    He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
    I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
    ^This is not bad.

    Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
    He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
    ^Eh

    The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
    He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
    ^alright...

    Bottom Line
    So this was close. After I broke down the verses I had to read them again. My conclusion is that I liked Kings verse and I leaned toward King on this battle because he only needed ONE haymaker in place of one of his missed punches to take over this battle. But ultimately it came down to my two favorite bars in the battle. Which were; usertitle/lacking a G, and Straight Jacket/faggot off me. Both came from God of War... So thats who I vote for.

    Vote: God of War
    Last edited by Stat.; September 16th, 2011 at 07:25 PM
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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    vote god of war

    I cant be fucked breaking all those lines down
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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    lol. Yeah the verses shoulda been shorter. Damn, that was 30 lines a piece. But I had just smoked some krypti-chronic-kutta-like weed.. And me being high while reading causes me to over analyze shit sometimes. I don't even know how long that took to break down lol...
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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
    its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
    good opener
    i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
    if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
    eh...
    cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
    f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
    lol... cool
    n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
    if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
    ok
    nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
    ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
    rofl... good one!
    ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
    so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
    personal I'm missing, I guess...
    n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
    it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
    ok
    your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
    if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
    cool
    i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
    when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
    decent
    you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
    the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
    cool
    ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
    cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
    lol...
    in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
    the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
    nice
    n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
    you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
    lmao... I liked this!
    n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
    so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
    nice
    im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
    so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
    kind of a reach, but ok...

    vs.

    You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
    N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
    lol... good opener
    His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
    Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
    decent
    Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
    I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
    roflmao... nice!
    He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
    We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
    ok
    I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
    If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
    decent
    I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
    Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
    ...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
    lmao... good hit
    He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
    N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
    cool
    Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
    Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
    lol... this was cool, too
    N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
    Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
    lol
    I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
    Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
    pair/nuts been played... this was okish
    Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
    Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
    nice
    Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
    If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
    decent
    He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
    I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
    decent
    Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
    He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
    lol
    The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
    He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
    cool


    Fuck, this is close! Both of y'all had some nice hits, both had one good miss, the rest were decent... let me re-read. Smfh... can I call a tie?
    King had a played concept that really stuck out, GoW's closer reached a bit and had that miss... that is really the only difference that I can see. So I gotta vote king for coming one bar better, I guess. I hate voting on close battles, but props to both for showing up on this!

    vote- King
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    none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
    its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
    cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
    f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
    nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
    ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
    ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
    cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
    n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
    you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
    n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
    so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at

    vs.


    You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
    N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
    He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
    We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
    I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
    If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
    He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
    N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
    I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
    Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
    Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
    Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit



    Close battle.

    I've been reading this over and over for about 20 mins making sure I get it right.

    GOW you can with the usual gow quality stuff didn't really step out of your comfort zone too much. Same style and blueprint to your verse. I quoted those lines because to me they were the ones that hit with it's all. In other words the whole bar was good setup was proper, wording was good, sting was there. I didn't like too much of the first half but you got it going nicely in the second half. Impressive amount of hits considering it is a 30 liner. Some lines seemed like so many you've done before. You made them hit though i can't lie.



    King You had an impressive amount of continuous hits. I really enjoyed your delivery in this battle. Your quotes were more of just hard hitting, some had wording issues in the set ups but all in all you had a consistent verse. To me though you used things from aim and other quotes. But you didn't use them to be the main most powerful part of your verse, when I use them i like them to be a reallly hard punch or else i just leave them out.


    I am voting as fair as possible. So I hope King doesn't think this is a hate vote.

    My vote is for GOW On the basis that he had no quotes or aim convos, yet was able to deliver as many quotes out of a 30 line battle. I think that takes very good writting ability, when it comes to punches atleast. This isn't close at all but i feel kings advantage wasn't taken correctly.


    V/gow.

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    v/ GOW

    Dude be killing the mid-tier on the reg niggaaaaaaaa

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    4-1 gow

    Token you can close this. Good shit gow.

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    Re: King vs. God 0f War

    gow wins

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