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    Emotions in motion - part.13

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    Re: Emotions in motion - part.13

    the intro part when the bass comes in 3 of the bass notes are out of key bro need to tighten that up..

    when it drops its dope really like the acoustic sounds and keys intwined very nice addition . then the hook although it seems alit cluttered it works still nice work man ..
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    Re: Emotions in motion - part.13

    The out of key bass really makes the intro sound poor when it has so much potential, other than that quite nice overall, the sound over the chorus is real strange but nice untill the 2nd half of the chorus then you're over whelmed by instruments. The verses are dope though.

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    Re: Emotions in motion - part.13

    The main beat for the verse is actually dope

    You need to learn how to keep ur keys in tune, the bass is off like someone said

    maybe learn a bit about chord progression if you havent. The hook bit was a little weird, the "ghost" sound, i felt it was a little 2 dimensional, needed something else on it to make it fuller, n sharper.

    Some of the layers didnt really mesh well either near the hook, like that off key bass kinda messed it up

    Overall its a decent beat just needs to be polished in the tuning department.

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