Kontext (1-1) vs Essen (1-1) Kon wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 6

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

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[Kontext]

chizeck

[Essen]

Check and goodluck

[Kontext]

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
I seen this man in Essence, Centerfold, posing with grace
A long dress n lips red, Dickhead, they should've put a Mag over yer' face
Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got
E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500
your crew want it? I'll murder them too, cus' I see that they frail
been Losing for 10 seasons or calling shit Even, so its fitting to call em' TnL
bringing hell, people like me are left to get rid of you geeks
& by the Texture dropping, how can you Feel the need to write every week
I'll break your jaw bitch cus' yer not a star, more like a broken fixture
see, the way my punches Move E he'll have a feature in the next motion picture
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle
I mean Ess is not even manly...Women, Guns, Sports..he really hates it
fag looks soft, I bet when he's playing FootBall...he's merely tryna get acquainted

[Essen]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre....html?t=215868
^^His crew he tried to start ‘Pure Talent’, ‘you must have some to be in it’.. I notice you don’t have that in your sig anymore..


Let this be counseling, you’ve ended Pure Talent, you had your fun
But you’re progressing quickly! Done with the first step, admitting you have none.
Out of your element now, but I’m here to help turn things around,
Ya can’t win when your punches lack fire and a verse all watered down.
Punch already knocked you out once, so with me, consider this a resurrection,
With my jabs, you’ll have no choice but watch this from the nosebleed section
You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up
Cool User Title… how can you win with it? It’s got me a bit rattled
I guess it makes sense, it’s how you get people to vote for you in a battle
Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.
Welcome back buddy, sucks you’re punches haven’t worked – out, you’re a bust
Some vets need to shake the rust, with you it’s like you drank a shake of rust.
Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.
So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.

[The Gwapfather]

KONTEXT:

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen

^flow was good, the whole "give an L" stuff is played out, so this was just decent..

I seen this man in Essence, Centerfold, posing with grace
A long dress n lips red, Dickhead, they should've put a Mag over yer' face

^again, decent, this bar is actually better then the first, but its just nothing hard hittin, solid flow and build up n shit..

Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got

^eh, not feelin it..

E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500

^really liked the concept, could have been worded a bit better and the build up could have been a lot better, still a solid bar/punch..

your crew want it? I'll murder them too, cus' I see that they frail
been Losing for 10 seasons or calling shit Even, so its fitting to call em' TnL

^solid flow n shit, wasn't wild about the punch though..

bringing hell, people like me are left to get rid of you geeks
& by the Texture dropping, how can you Feel the need to write every week

^hmmm, solid concept but need to word it differently/better to work..

I'll break your jaw bitch cus' yer not a star, more like a broken fixture
see, the way my punches Move E he'll have a feature in the next motion picture

^again a solid concept but needed to be taken farther, as is its too simple..

Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle

^pretty dope here, good punch/nameplay, def the best bar so far of yours, most of your bars have had the potential to be on this level though..

I mean Ess is not even manly...Women, Guns, Sports..he really hates it
fag looks soft, I bet when he's playing FootBall...he's merely tryna get acquainted

^naw not hittin really homie..


ESSEN:

Let this be counseling, you’ve ended Pure Talent, you had your fun
But you’re progressing quickly! Done with the first step, admitting you have none.

^this could have hit harder, needs a bit of work on this bar, not bad though..

Out of your element now, but I’m here to help turn things around,
Ya can’t win when your punches lack fire and a verse all watered down.

^kinda basic, not bad but not great, concept just doesn't come off very original..

Punch already knocked you out once, so with me, consider this a resurrection,
With my jabs, you’ll have no choice but watch this from the nosebleed section

^solid concept but needed to be used better, more complex, seems too basic as is..

You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up

^lol @ daiquiri, who needs henny when you got daiquiris haha.. cool bar though, concept might not be super original but I haven't really seen it like this, pretty cool..

Cool User Title… how can you win with it? It’s got me a bit rattled
I guess it makes sense, it’s how you get people to vote for you in a battle

^eh, decent..

Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.

^haha, nothing super hard hitting but it was cool..

Welcome back buddy, sucks you’re punches haven’t worked – out, you’re a bust
Some vets need to shake the rust, with you it’s like you drank a shake of rust.

^I see the concept and all of which you tried connecting but still didn't work, "drank a shake of rust" just seems a bit forced and really doesnt hit hard..

Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.

^decent..

So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.

^woah way played out homie haha, build up needed to be better as well, no hate..


OVERALL:

Both seem like vets that have just came back to text after a while, just for the fact both have some good concepts that just aren't taken far enough, or are using some pretty played out concepts, once you guys "shake the rust", I'm sure both will be quite a bit better, this was a solid battle still, neither sucked or anything, just felt both could have done better, just with the concepts they used here alone at times, felt Kontext missed just a bit less, or atleast didnt have as big of misses, and also had the lotb, so I'm going to give my vote to Kon..


VOTE: KONTEXT

[Joe Boston]

Kontext

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
the letter punches are a little played but cool idea u came with here

I seen this man in Essence, Centerfold, posing with grace
A long dress n lips red, Dickhead, they should've put a Mag over yer' face
ok not really hardhitting concept was there but felt youve coulda flipped this finisher diffrently

Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got
kinda statementish to me here when it comes to ur finisher


E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500
this was a cool concept with the track record and indy 500 idea but setup coulda been on the same relevance as the finisher

your crew want it? I'll murder them too, cus' I see that they frail
been Losing for 10 seasons or calling shit Even, so its fitting to call em' TnL
ok this was a cool punch


bringing hell, people like me are left to get rid of you geeks
& by the Texture dropping, how can you Feel the need to write every week
i like how u flipped the concept here coulda worded this finisher better but overall it was good


I'll break your jaw bitch cus' yer not a star, more like a broken fixture
see, the way my punches Move E he'll have a feature in the next motion picture
again nice concept just finhser needs better wording


Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle
nice punch here great concept

I mean Ess is not even manly...Women, Guns, Sports..he really hates it
fag looks soft, I bet when he's playing FootBall...he's merely tryna get acquainted
nah

Eseen



Let this be counseling, you’ve ended Pure Talent, you had your fun
But you’re progressing quickly! Done with the first step, admitting you have none.
this wasnt bad lol the finisher couldve been worded better but liked the idea u was on


Out of your element now, but I’m here to help turn things around,
Ya can’t win when your punches lack fire and a verse all watered down.
concept was basic for me

Punch already knocked you out once, so with me, consider this a resurrection,
With my jabs, you’ll have no choice but watch this from the nosebleed section
ok i liked this


You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up
ok lol

Cool User Title… how can you win with it? It’s got me a bit rattled
I guess it makes sense, it’s how you get people to vote for you in a battle
lol this was a cool concept with the KON reference


Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.
lol


Welcome back buddy, sucks you’re punches haven’t worked – out, you’re a bust
Some vets need to shake the rust, with you it’s like you drank a shake of rust.
u coulda developed this finisher with better wording it woulda been funny

Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.
nice lol

So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.
played concept


Well i really thought this battle wasnt bad at all both had their ups n downs through it when it came to misses and the overall wording of punches. I was really feeling that Lioness punch from KON it was very creative and thats the only line i really seen that stood out to me but overall he did some some decent ideas along with his concepts. Essen gotta differ my opinion here i thought his concepts hit a little better due to the KON line, the physics major line and i thought the personal line with rupture was cool.

V/Eseen just thought his concept ideas hit a little better

[Fatal.]

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
pretty good opener, name play
I seen this man in Essence, Centerfold, posing with grace
A long dress n lips red, Dickhead, they should've put a Mag over yer' face
alrightt
Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got
decent
E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500
cool
your crew want it? I'll murder them too, cus' I see that they frail
been Losing for 10 seasons or calling shit Even, so its fitting to call em' TnL
ehhh
bringing hell, people like me are left to get rid of you geeks
& by the Texture dropping, how can you Feel the need to write every week
mehhh
I'll break your jaw bitch cus' yer not a star, more like a broken fixture
see, the way my punches Move E he'll have a feature in the next motion picture
not badd
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle
goood
I mean Ess is not even manly...Women, Guns, Sports..he really hates it
fag looks soft, I bet when he's playing FootBall...he's merely tryna get acquainted
mehh closer

vs

Let this be counseling, you’ve ended Pure Talent, you had your fun
But you’re progressing quickly! Done with the first step, admitting you have none.
not bad opener
Out of your element now, but I’m here to help turn things around,
Ya can’t win when your punches lack fire and a verse all watered down.
ehhh line
Punch already knocked you out once, so with me, consider this a resurrection,
With my jabs, you’ll have no choice but watch this from the nosebleed section
seen this concept before
You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up
pretty good
Cool User Title… how can you win with it? It’s got me a bit rattled
I guess it makes sense, it’s how you get people to vote for you in a battle
decent
Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.
mehh
Welcome back buddy, sucks you’re punches haven’t worked – out, you’re a bust
Some vets need to shake the rust, with you it’s like you drank a shake of rust.
mehh simple
Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.
decent
So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.
ok closer

this was a pretty close battle, but i think Essen came with a few too many simple/played lines. Kon's punches were slightly better overall.

v/Kon

[Slowhands]

kontext

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
- forced feeling
I seen this man in Essence, Centerfold, posing with grace
A long dress n lips red, Dickhead, they should've put a Mag over yer' face
- meh
Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got
- ok
E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500
- ok, alot of potential
your crew want it? I'll murder them too, cus' I see that they frail
been Losing for 10 seasons or calling shit Even, so its fitting to call em' TnL
- meh
bringing hell, people like me are left to get rid of you geeks
& by the Texture dropping, how can you Feel the need to write every week
- meh
I'll break your jaw bitch cus' yer not a star, more like a broken fixture
see, the way my punches Move E he'll have a feature in the next motion picture
- ok ish
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle
- ok
I mean Ess is not even manly...Women, Guns, Sports..he really hates it
fag looks soft, I bet when he's playing FootBall...he's merely tryna get acquainted
- lol

overall - kon man, your forcing alot of shit, take your time with wording and try not to do so many name concepts



Let this be counseling, you’ve ended Pure Talent, you had your fun
But you’re progressing quickly! Done with the first step, admitting you have none.
- meh
Out of your element now, but I’m here to help turn things around,
Ya can’t win when your punches lack fire and a verse all watered down.
- NOPE
Punch already knocked you out once, so with me, consider this a resurrection,
With my jabs, you’ll have no choice but watch this from the nosebleed section
- no
You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up
- nah
Cool User Title… how can you win with it? It’s got me a bit rattled
I guess it makes sense, it’s how you get people to vote for you in a battle
- meh
Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.
- meh
Welcome back buddy, sucks you’re punches haven’t worked – out, you’re a bust
Some vets need to shake the rust, with you it’s like you drank a shake of rust.
- hell no
Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.
- decent because it's true lol
So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.
- decent close

overall - your verse looked like a throw back, with your concepts being PLAYED for the most part, if you came with the creativity as your last 2 lines you would have demolished him. LOTB is your closer



vote - both need some work on wording and/or concepts, get ORIGINAL and stop looking at their username and title and trying to make a punch, thats FL shit. Kontext takes this is an ever so ugly win lol. LOTB goes to Essen with his closer, i chuckled

[Flash]

Even in the Checkin your soft, Tbh only Rup showed a flash he was hot
so just check in N drop,
cus' Good Luck is what Ive had with the OTHER matchups I've got
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle

lol lioness was lotb cool.

vs.

So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.

ok..

the physics major was kinda obvious "forced" concepts hav been done a lot n u didn't really hit. kontext was a bit more consistent.

v-kon

[Rupture]

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle

Ehh some lines was pretty weak, but the nameplays were on point for the most part, wording was decent enough

vs.

Put it this way, GOW beat me and moved all the way up to the Top 10 with other vets.
When Rup beat you, he moved all the way up… when he checked in to battle Alphabet.
So even if you a thug who claps the tool, I’ll cook you with your own game, believe me,
Put the heater to this egghead, and make this battle over, easy.

Lottaaaa played concepts in there man, your verse showed potential though, just try to think outside the box more like with the egghead line, that was dope

v/ Kontext, kinda close

[Knux]

Meh battle tbh... Essen edged it out towards the end here for me... Both came with some played shit but both had like 1 or 2 standout bars.. For me Essen was more consistant, where as Kon had like 2 cool lines and the rest were straight wiffs... Essens closer was pretty decent, as well as the user title reference.. Kon's lioness flip was pretty tight but overall Ess took this IMO

V-Essen

[The Archetype]

E cant fuck with me, so even expecting to win is stupid, this guy's blunted
I rap better N going by your Track Record I can see your still Indy 500
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle


vs

Looking at your verses, I see a style that no one would want if you catered
Cause the amount of forced area in your lines couldn’t be solved by Physics Majors.

neither verse was bad... but both were full of old concepts... that was the biggest problem... Kon came a little fresher...

vote Kontext

[Vinzr]

the league knows your wack, so whats the reason for this mans aggression
fan neglect em, so I'll give an L to essen N watch how his chances Lessen
Ess is in trouble, he'll slip N then stumble cus he aint fit for the rumble
who you tryna impress? you Lioness, we all know you'd be a bitch in the jungle


vs

You’re over the hill, to remember you I’ll pour out a daiquiri from a solo cup
So past your prime, even the towel you threw in years ago is washed up

That Lioness line was dope. I gotta go with Kon for better hits here. I thought Essen didnt really come that hard and had a few misses.

v/ Kon

[ALIEN]

Voting from phone so cant do a quote vs quote here. But I thought both had some questionable lines with old ideas, but both also had pretty nice spins/wording on it. I think Kon was a little more direct. Thought that indy 500 flowed flawlessly and was line of the battle and just a stronger overall verse.
Vote - Kon