Quote (6-0) vs Knux (5-1) Knux Wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 7

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
16 min and 30 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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[Token]

Negative 1 vote per missing link in next person's battle, INCLUDING THE LOSER

Make note of that, LOSER

[Knux]

Yup

[Token]

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression

[Knux]

Aight then..

Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it

Token vs. Chrit...Token...again PMs for voters, swaying as well...

the pm's for votes were all honest.
my mistake was swaying with chrit.
i can hype up my verse all i want unless I say something negative about his

Smh…

You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles

16.

[Cody Nash]

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
heh, good..
first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
eh, okay
had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
eh, cocky.. the diss here is weak imo
every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
cool
it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
eh, corny.. not feelin' it
this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
ouch, hah..
i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
lol, ok
either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression
good


token, good verse overall. a couple real good shots, a few eh ones... no big complaints though, it read smoothe and there were a lot of well executed ideas here. props.


vs


Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
eh okay
Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
hah, good.
This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
cool nameplay
You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
ha, dope..
Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
dece..
Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
this was dope, but the idea was used 3 times in a row now
Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
ehh... not feelin' it
Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles
eh okay


knux, pretty good verse. consistent. a couple really dope hits, with a bunch of "good" ones to accompany them. your misses were blah.



this was a good match.. neither of you did badly. I'm really on the fence who to vote for because one was definitely more consistent than the other, while the other definitely had stronger connects with his punches. tokens shots that connected just stung and were pretty creative.. knux's were good, not as creative, but he had more connects imo. It's really tough to call... hmmm... fuck man. I dunno. lets do quotables....


compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression

vs

Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’


^^when I'm really picky with the quotables this what I come up with here.. I exclude punches I thought were "just good" from both here.. I think using the messaging/aim concept could've been cut down on knux's part and another haymaker probably would've won him the match in my eyes.. this was soooo close... and as much as I wanna see token get dethroned I don't think Knux was the one to do it this week. props guys.



vote Token... pretty much via coin flip.

[Liquidity]

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
hits
first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
neh
had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
lol
every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
ok
it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
eh
this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
lol, cool
i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
nice
either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression
cool

vs

Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
nice
Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
lmao, cool
This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
nice
You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
decent
Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
cool
Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
ok
Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
i like it...
Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles
meh


Overall Score (Hit = 3, Decent = 1, Miss = 0)
Token 16
Knux 17

Ok, well this was a pretty cool battle. I feel Token definitely came way better last week. He came pretty cool this week but it wasn't what I was expecting. Knux I think came better last week as well, even though Knux only had 1 real miss. Knux started off an a roll with like 4/5 of his first punches hitting. Well, overall i expected more from both to be honest with ya dudes, and I also didn't expect my prediction to be wrong, but, I think it is...

V/ Knux

[ArchDevil]

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
^ haha, cool

first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
^ seen a grew on me/faggot concept before but this was flipped ok

had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
^ lol, tbh u used this nicely, liked the idea

every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
^ nice

it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
^ ehh, not really feelin this

this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
^ decent

i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
^ cool concept but not feelin the finisher as much

either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression
^ lol nice


vs.


Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
^ Q concept are really played, not really a fresh flip here

Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
^ kinda statementish, not bad

This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
^ not bad

You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
^ lmao dope

Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
^ lol nice, even though the aim concept is overused i thought this hit well

Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
^ lol cool personal jab

Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
^ nice

Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles
^ cool finisher



this is the 3rd time i've read this battle...first time i gave it to knux, then to token...now, both were consistent, just a couple misses or lines i wasnt feelin here and there, nuttin bad...knux took a bit more of a personal approach in his verse and he had good hits all around, while token dropped good punches aswell...overall, i think both had good hits and nice punches throughout the verse...but knux's smoke messages was lotb imo and it pretty much swung the balance in his favour...this was a REALLY close and dope battle
vote - knux by a hair

[Lethargic]

Quote

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up

Decent

first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot

Nah

had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you

Not feelin it man

every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself

Cool

it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector

lol

this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account

That was pretty stretched and didn't hit that hard for me

i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost

And you said I'M the wordy one, lol. Decent concept but the bar was a bit stretched

either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression

Likin that concept too. Only problem is that your line is stretched yet again. If you're trying something new, I'd not do it again. The stretched punch is killing it's effectiveness.

Knux

Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot

Okay

Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in

Niiiiice

This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it

That was sick

Quote:
Originally Posted by SmokaJoka
Token vs. Chrit...Token...again PMs for voters, swaying as well...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Quote
the pm's for votes were all honest.
my mistake was swaying with chrit.
i can hype up my verse all i want unless I say something negative about his

Smh…

You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island

Dope

Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing

Nice flip on a played concept..enjoyed that

Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’

Okay

Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you

Very nice

Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles

slightly streched, but decent


In all honesty, I think Token got smashed here. Toke definitely had some fire concepts, but the stretching of 3 of em brought down the harshness of the punches. I'm guessing, even though he's your boy, that you seriously underestimated Knux. Combine that with Knux coming in with something to prove, and it's game over. Knux had haymakers throughout almost his entire verse. It was an enjoyable read and both of you had great verses for sure, but Knux took this hands down.

V - Knux

[Slowhands]

quote

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
- kinda ok
first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
- nah, all statement ish
had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
- not really, i see what you went for, but, MEH
every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
- cool flip
it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
- ok
this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
- no, too long, horrible wording
i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
- meh
either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression
- ok kinda

overall - wording killed you, and some concepts where borderline wack, seem to stay on the Knuckle concept a few times too




knux

Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
- ok
Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
- lol
This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
- meh kinda pushin it
You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
- lol wording was corny though
Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
- lol
Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
- cool, but your stating to over do that 'personal'
Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
- lol nice flip
Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles
- meh

overall - decent verse, one of the better i've read from you. only thing was you over using the same concept on the IM for Votes shit. mix it up more



overall - wow, just read other votes and think this is more one sided than close. Knux took this pretty easy, Quote seems rusty, bad wording and meh concepts. While Knux had some good comedy and a few hard hits. Easy vote; Knux

[Slowhands]

dbl

[Letterman]

compared to me dude sucks, one punch n he'll be starin up at 2 nuts
shit the only time knux is at my eye level is when i'm puttin my dukes up
Cool...

first verse i read i wanted to slap kid cuz he dropped fuckin wackness
then I tackled him twice & he grew on me... then I realized he was a faggot
Uhh...not really feeling this!

had some haymakers against king cuz he's known to bring heat dude
but the way im droppin this K for the 3rd time..
..^ i could re-use that concept and STILL fuckin beat you
Nah...

every punch hits well so i'll throw em till my fuckin fists swell
n put knucks into his gut until HE can't even stomach himself
Ok...

it's the garbage man himself, and i'm the settled inspector
bitch i collect medals... ur just known as a fuckin metal collector
Lol not really hard hitting but it made me laugh...

this broke bitch hates to count cuz he never knows when his limit may amount
he'll be at the bar arguin over draft fees cause buyin those'll cause that on his bank account
Nope!

i got this faggot scared w/ a loss of hope the way i'm stompin hoes
so i'll just clinch my fists til knucks turn so fuckin white I'll look like I saw a ghost
Meh...

either ur showin choke impressions or you truly show regression
the way every comment proves ur expectin this loss it's like u suffer from post depression
Decent close!

vs

Try n throw hands wit me and the fifth shot’ll have this bitch rocked
Homie against the ropes bout to drop Q in the corner like a fucked up trick shot
Nah...

Our click’s hot, u grabbed blue, hens, mask n me cuz u know my fist test chins
Good job recruiting homie… you just put together a dope crew that your 5th best in
Lol cool...

This whiney bitch undefeated? I mean business, I’ll use fast wit to smash kid
When It comes down to it we all know quota bitch…I’ll just be the first one to pass it
Nice...

You Shady fuck..pull that shit wita boss this violent u’ll get tossed to the side kid
This dude blowin so much smoke in messages you’d think he was lost on an island
Haha ill...

Picked up fishy habits.. n been getting rattled lately since ur talents fading
Its become more like a sniper match….where you can’t win a battle without aim’ing
Alright...

Even after your IM’s I’ll bomb this joke, what u do’s got me astonished dope
Cuz every time Token Has Spoken, it’s been about his new great verse or an ‘honest vote’
Cool...

Gets DR’d and thrives off it,..i’ll hurt dude, whatever I blurts true
I dont gotta force words but Quote garbage…and its “plain, king” murked you
With better wording this could've been nice but im not feeling it, as is.

Finish u and ur family, the sight of me makes em hurl n tremble
Ironic, my punches makin this pussy cave, n after the kid…..
…..that’s exactly what ya girl’s resembles
Alright

IMO, Knux got this comfortably. There really weren't any hard hitters in Quote's verse...had alot of misses though! Cool concepts, nonetheless. Knux had a few misses in his verse but the majority of it was consistent. The hardhitters in his verse really put him over the top so...

v/Knux

[Letterman]

dbl

[Token]

knux wins