Mafioso. (1-0) vs Meters (1-0) Meters wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 8

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[Mafioso.]

oh yea MOB bitch lets make this gd my nigga....16???

[Token]

meters is deducted 3 votes for missing 3 links

[Meters]

check

[Meters]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
you're dumb as a rock, fuck the Mob. your wording is plainer than shit
so what I don't run in your Family, the down syndrome needs all the lanes it can get
this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
This cats at the top of the Mob, shit. he's the topic of homo chatter
I heard he's a 'Made Man,' but I also heard 'Bitch' before it 'n 'Like Chaz Bono' after
when it comes to Maf there's no removal, ayo he's slightly gay on the low
they should call him 'Oso Bucco, the way the rider hangs off the bone
Maf's life is over, forget it. even in the end he'll be mad poor
kids like a clumsy magician - destined to be found dead in the Trap door
I wish this faggot was never born, it's clear this kid would be better gone
I'd go back to the 80's 'n ask Kool G Rap to retire just so Mafioso rap never spawns
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows
'now he strut her on the street proud she give dome like her mama
but it ain't political ambition when your daughter lower on polls than Obama

[Mafioso.]

2003?

DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT
its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch
I'm too slick, I got a slughterhouse flow, plus woman think im fine
while woman only compare u to Royce cuz ur short and ur dick is 5" 9
this guys blind, henceforth??? LMAO, I guess all the rumors are true kid
u made a crew before GOW even knew bout text, AND his WHOLE crew blew before u did
your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.
I gotta hot pen, meters is jus washed up wit a style thats bland ass fuck
so if his verses can talk, they'd probably scream "help" right afta yellin "dam we suck"
this mans a duck, I heard he cant get it up, sex is his new survival
so he decided to pop viagra and talk to his penis threw his usertitle
my crews a idol, but after dealin wit this bitch im done wit fools.
I told him " chase ya dreams"...now his dumbass sleeps wit runnin shoes.

N shout out to all the vets returnin we're RUSTY, but u ALWAYS dropped played shit
so if we compare u to Alien, its only cuz u like havin Black men as ya avatar U GAY BITCH!

[Mafioso.]

smh we dropped early for this lmao...

[Mafioso.]

yoo wtf im high ass fuck and i wnna see some votes...

[Bongkers]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
wordings off, but cool concept
you're dumb as a rock, fuck the Mob. your wording is plainer than shit
so what I don't run in your Family, the down syndrome needs all the lanes it can get
lol decent
this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
OK
This cats at the top of the Mob, shit. he's the topic of homo chatter
I heard he's a 'Made Man,' but I also heard 'Bitch' before it 'n 'Like Chaz Bono' after
na forced
when it comes to Maf there's no removal, ayo he's slightly gay on the low
they should call him 'Oso Bucco, the way the rider hangs off the bone
nah
Maf's life is over, forget it. even in the end he'll be mad poor
kids like a clumsy magician - destined to be found dead in the Trap door
lol dece
I wish this faggot was never born, it's clear this kid would be better gone
I'd go back to the 80's 'n ask Kool G Rap to retire just so Mafioso rap never spawns
ehh is aight
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows
lol nice
'now he strut her on the street proud she give dome like her mama
but it ain't political ambition when your daughter lower on polls than Obama
naaaah played




DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT
ok
its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch
lol, aight
I'm too slick, I got a slughterhouse flow, plus woman think im fine
while woman only compare u to Royce cuz ur short and ur dick is 5" 9
nah
this guys blind, henceforth??? LMAO, I guess all the rumors are true kid
u made a crew before GOW even knew bout text, AND his WHOLE crew blew before u did
ok
your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.
lol aight
I gotta hot pen, meters is jus washed up wit a style thats bland ass fuck
so if his verses can talk, they'd probably scream "help" right afta yellin "dam we suck"
nah corny
this mans a duck, I heard he cant get it up, sex is his new survival
so he decided to pop viagra and talk to his penis threw his usertitle
lol ok
my crews a idol, but after dealin wit this bitch im done wit fools.
I told him " chase ya dreams"...now his dumbass sleeps wit runnin shoes.
nah corny again
N shout out to all the vets returnin we're RUSTY, but u ALWAYS dropped played shit
so if we compare u to Alien, its only cuz u like havin Black men as ya avatar U GAY BITCH!
meh


decent battle.. I think meters needs to get his wording right and mafioso needs to try some more creative concepts.. I got meters edging this one I think he had a few harder hitting lines..

v- meters

[The Gwapfather]

METERS:

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with

^haha nice..

you're dumb as a rock, fuck the Mob. your wording is plainer than shit
so what I don't run in your Family, the down syndrome needs all the lanes it can get

^eh, wording needs to be better, not too bad though

this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street

^I was gonna do a concept like this, not worded like this but the concept, glad I didn't know, shit would have been played aha, I'm sure the concept has been used lately anyways though, this was an okay attempt at it..

This cats at the top of the Mob, shit. he's the topic of homo chatter
I heard he's a 'Made Man,' but I also heard 'Bitch' before it 'n 'Like Chaz Bono' after

^naw, concept has been used up lately as well and this wasn't worded well enough to hit..

when it comes to Maf there's no removal, ayo he's slightly gay on the low
they should call him 'Oso Bucco, the way the rider hangs off the bone

^naw, n that whole "they should call em" set up to a punch is played out/basic..

Maf's life is over, forget it. even in the end he'll be mad poor
kids like a clumsy magician - destined to be found dead in the Trap door

^this is some old school shit haha, "kids like a clumsy magician", thats on some 06 shit homie, no hate, just sounds a bit corny..

I wish this faggot was never born, it's clear this kid would be better gone
I'd go back to the 80's 'n ask Kool G Rap to retire just so Mafioso rap never spawns

^decent..

I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows

^okay..

'now he strut her on the street proud she give dome like her mama
but it ain't political ambition when your daughter lower on polls than Obama

^played out homie..


MAFIOSO:

DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT

^decent personal, a bit simple/statementish though..

its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch

^haha, same as first bar, nothing super original or creative but a decent personal..

I'm too slick, I got a slughterhouse flow, plus woman think im fine
while woman only compare u to Royce cuz ur short and ur dick is 5" 9

^naw..

this guys blind, henceforth??? LMAO, I guess all the rumors are true kid
u made a crew before GOW even knew bout text, AND his WHOLE crew blew before u did

^same as first two bars again, personals are def what can win battles, but most of these are a bit too simple/basic, not bad, but could have maybe flipped these personals better..

your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.

^haha, cool shit..

I gotta hot pen, meters is jus washed up wit a style thats bland ass fuck
so if his verses can talk, they'd probably scream "help" right afta yellin "dam we suck"

^naw..

this mans a duck, I heard he cant get it up, sex is his new survival
so he decided to pop viagra and talk to his penis threw his usertitle

^dont ever spit a bar even remotely close to this again, kapeesh? hahaha..

my crews a idol, but after dealin wit this bitch im done wit fools.
I told him " chase ya dreams"...now his dumbass sleeps wit runnin shoes.

^naw..

N shout out to all the vets returnin we're RUSTY, but u ALWAYS dropped played shit
so if we compare u to Alien, its only cuz u like havin Black men as ya avatar U GAY BITCH!

^eh, not really hittin..


OVERALL:

Both were hit n miss for sure, more misses then hits, no hate.. Meters has some solid concepts, he just needs to word/flip them a bit better, Maf needs more creative concepts and also to flip his concepts better, close battle to call, but I'm going with Meters, felt he was just a bit more consistent I guess, misses didnt miss as hard..



VOTE: METERS

[miracle]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
-wording was iffy but i'm feeling it
Maf's life is over, forget it. even in the end he'll be mad poor
kids like a clumsy magician - destined to be found dead in the Trap door
-this was iight
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows
-cool

vs


its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch
-iight
this mans a duck, I heard he cant get it up, sex is his new survival
so he decided to pop viagra and talk to his penis threw his usertitle
-cool

vote/meter ...i thought his verse just connected better n read smoother

[Chrit.]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows

vs

your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.
DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT

Meters came pretty cool here. You can still see the rust. Smooth wording despite the length of some of the lines. The lines I quoted were nice. Maf seemed to actually feed from Meters' opener. Maf had a few big misses as well like the viagra punch. I just wasnt feeling many of the concepts. The wording wasnt too bad, but wasnt enough to save the verse.


v/Meters

[The Archetype]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
you're dumb as a rock, fuck the Mob. your wording is plainer than shit
so what I don't run in your Family, the down syndrome needs all the lanes it can get
this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows

vs

its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch
your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.

the shit i didn't quote from maf wasn't wack, but it just came off as corny... closer than the quotes say...

vote Meters

[Knux]

Take me off the roster idiot. either you're desperate or just don't get it
homie, I didn't take The Mobs vow of silence by never mentioning you fucks to begin with
Nice
you're dumb as a rock, fuck the Mob. your wording is plainer than shit
so what I don't run in your Family, the down syndrome needs all the lanes it can get
Lol Cool
this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
Hah aight
This cats at the top of the Mob, shit. he's the topic of homo chatter
I heard he's a 'Made Man,' but I also heard 'Bitch' before it 'n 'Like Chaz Bono' after
Meh
when it comes to Maf there's no removal, ayo he's slightly gay on the low
they should call him 'Oso Bucco, the way the rider hangs off the bone
Lmao nice id b wary to do this cuz idk if every1 knows what osso bucco is, hope everyone gets it
Maf's life is over, forget it. even in the end he'll be mad poor
kids like a clumsy magician - destined to be found dead in the Trap door
Meh
I wish this faggot was never born, it's clear this kid would be better gone
I'd go back to the 80's 'n ask Kool G Rap to retire just so Mafioso rap never spawns
Mmm nah
I heard your daughter taught at home hittin crack pipes 'n straight with info
shit, Maf sent that bitch to boarding school by making her plank the windows
Aight
'now he strut her on the street proud she give dome like her mama
but it ain't political ambition when your daughter lower on polls than Obama
Ok

2003?

DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT
Ok Personal
its tragic, I thought you'd have some heat and bring some new shit
but after readin ur verse frm last wk...I dont even want u in my crew bitch
Nah
I'm too slick, I got a slughterhouse flow, plus woman think im fine
while woman only compare u to Royce cuz ur short and ur dick is 5" 9
Mmm whats the 9 about after the 5 inches...aside from royce the 5'9
this guys blind, henceforth??? LMAO, I guess all the rumors are true kid
u made a crew before GOW even knew bout text, AND his WHOLE crew blew before u did
Ok
your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten.
Meh
I gotta hot pen, meters is jus washed up wit a style thats bland ass fuck
so if his verses can talk, they'd probably scream "help" right afta yellin "dam we suck"
Nah
this mans a duck, I heard he cant get it up, sex is his new survival
so he decided to pop viagra and talk to his penis threw his usertitle
Ok
my crews a idol, but after dealin wit this bitch im done wit fools.
I told him " chase ya dreams"...now his dumbass sleeps wit runnin shoes.
lol ok
N shout out to all the vets returnin we're RUSTY, but u ALWAYS dropped played shit
so if we compare u to Alien, its only cuz u like havin Black men as ya avatar U GAY BITCH!
Meh not to hard hitting

I got Meters taking this by a good amount, just had an overall better verse with stronger concepts and execution

V-Meters

[King]

this jobless faggots a deadbeat daddy, wastes his days resting on concrete
an Occupation, forget it. Maf was homeless before it was trendy on Wall Street
I wish this faggot was never born, it's clear this kid would be better gone
I'd go back to the 80's 'n ask Kool G Rap to retire just so Mafioso rap never spawns
'now he strut her on the street proud she give dome like her mama
but it ain't political ambition when your daughter lower on polls than Obama

vs

DAM, its time to call it quits, and just end ya wack habit
you've been doin this for 8 yrs, and havent EVEN MADE CONTENDER MATCH FAGGOT
your stupid, jus get it threw ya big ass head..YOU WILL NOT WIN
we got a betta chance seein megatron maintaining his spot in top ten

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