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    Picture Perfect- November '11


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    Re: Picture Perfect- November '11

    I've been calling myself
    a Jack of all trades for so long
    that I've forgotten how to think
    outside

    the box, wherever that is.
    I take it to mean that I've got to get out more
    but every day I wake
    in the same body
    with the same thoughts
    and it scares me to think
    that I could one day look back,
    having seen it all,
    yet understood nothing.

    To think others see it as just a game,
    the ride
    the trip
    makes me wonder if they're missing out
    or I'm just losing.
    There's no room here for trophies though,
    when your ego takes up the room
    like a jealous rumour
    that loves to hear its own voice
    and you keep saying it
    "Me,
    Me,
    Me"
    but no one's listening, 'cause it's their rumour too.

    It's what everybody wants,
    until it comes true.

    You are the box.
    Last edited by spokenoh; November 16th, 2011 at 08:57 PM
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    Re: Picture Perfect- November '11

    memories of a place
    knee deep in pain
    where the lack of comfort is high as well as usual
    & often considered normal.

    moving out is a dilemma
    hunger is for dinner
    and starving for words from a mute
    suits the mood
    for deuces - even if they're useless.

    a dress is worn
    torn and jaded;
    rockin' blue faces until it's transparent in action,
    matching the walls down packed into the pattern -
    and cold to the touch.

    the old isn't much
    but it all still sits here with me
    in this hidden doll house.
    Artificial.Intelligence

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    Re: Picture Perfect- November '11

    A land In the distant future
    ruled by kings, knights and ice queens.
    She is the threading moonlight
    suppressed by the screams
    of sun shrivelled vines
    in a universe that parallels ours.

    Her ambition is caged in a small box
    called space; under skyline dreams
    and twilight streams
    pouring out of the eyes of a woman deferred.
    Yet, her essence still glows
    with a glimer of hope.

    That someday,
    she too will find a place to call home.

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