Arch (6-1) vs. King (7-1) ARCH WINS

[A.T.]

LLL Season 15- Week 8

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[The Archetype]

24?

[King]

word

[King]

FYI, Arch is an Oncologist (Cancer Doctor)

lol... nah... i figured i owed you a good battle

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
This should put me nearer to Legends, dropping fire to scorch lines
Cuz If u keep it close we might get nom'd...n u can fail to get in for a fourth time
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest

[The Archetype]

Well...

I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray


...blah...

[Vinzr]

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
ok
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
lol
n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
not bad
This should put me nearer to Legends, dropping fire to scorch lines
Cuz If u keep it close we might get nom'd...n u can fail to get in for a fourth time
nice personal
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
ok
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
not bad
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
lol cool
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest
ok

vs

I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
nice
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
cool
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
good
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
ok
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
nice
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
wow haha
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
ok
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray
not bad

good battle here guys, was pretty close and a hard decision...i think both went at each other's throats here but in the end Arch got a slight edge with harders hits tbh

v/ arch

[Rupture]

Lmaoo arch went IN

[Hush]

King had the remark and tumor lines which hit. the rest of the verse not so much. a lot of filler and bland lines mixed in. wordpad/doc is spoof played . that def hurt ur verse

arch had the duck bags personal which hit. that jug or not shit was morn. king closer line alsohit

the god opener and checkere lines were meh

but arch had morefirepower

v arch

[Slowhands]

king

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
- decent
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
- lmao
n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
- meh
This should put me nearer to Legends, dropping fire to scorch lines
Cuz If u keep it close we might get nom'd...n u can fail to get in for a fourth time
- ok
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
- cool
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
- lol good content all around
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
- nice
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest
- ok


only one punch didn't hit with me, the movie theater one, overall you had some good content, personals, and funny shit. a lot of laughs on a few of your lines. good verse



arch

I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
- cool flip on old content
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
- cool flip, wording kinda meh though
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
- ok
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
- lol cool
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
- ok
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
- lol
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
- no rhyme
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray
- cool

good verse, you had some cool flips on concepts that are expected. only thing i didn't like was how often you went back to the "king is fat" concept. still good drop






vote - this is close, king came with comedy and some cool flips on the typical Archetype punches. His verse was consistent and had a few good laughs. Archetype came with slightly less comedy, cool flips, and more creative content overall. This will be decided by preference of the reader imo. With me, I love comedy and King's punches and wording won it for me, so vote KING

[Meters]

king

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
(liked the wording on this actually, pretty good)
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
(lol, cool)
n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
(eh, coolish concept but execution not working)
This should put me nearer to Legends, dropping fire to scorch lines
Cuz If u keep it close we might get nom'd...n u can fail to get in for a fourth time
(lol, thought wording could've been slightly tweaked but nice)
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
(lol, dope)
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
(haha, okay)
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
(eh, wording make this weak to me)
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest
(heh)

arch

I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
(heh, nice)
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
(alright flip, not bad)
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
(pretty good)
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
(wording a lil off, cool though)
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
(alright)
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
(hah, made the concept w/ pretty good wording)
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
(thought you could've made this connect better w/ chess included, goodish though)
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray
(cool concept i don't really like this wording on bars, comes off like drake or weezy tbh, eh)

I got King taking this

[The Gwapfather]

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either


VS


I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size


OVERALL:

Good battle here, king had some nice lines through out, Arch started off dope n then his last few bars were just decent to me, but Arch had the harder hits, neither really had any misses, Arch just had a bit more sting to his punches overall..


VOTE: ARCH

[Beyond]

n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest

vs

I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray


Damn, dope battle. Thought King started off a bit slow with some statements. Thought the Abi line didn't really rhyme. He heated up really nice though. Remark from the back was dope. Open the Doc. up was crazy. Tumar was good. Legends/admin was statementish, but so brutal that I still quoted which is rare. Armor was a good closer too. Arch on the other hand killed this shit. Sacrificial lame was a good opener. Gravitational force was lol. Bags was cool. King of Pop was cool. Weight of the world was roflz. Jump King was good. Closer was a good too. Overall this was a pretty dope and close battle looking back at it, but Arch was the clear winner in my eyes. Props to both.

/v the archetype

[Bongkers]

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
ok
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
haha, cool
n When he brings heat, he still gets raped. Idk if it could be clearer
Shiiit, more dudes 'reem-Arc from the back' here than in a hood movie theater
nice
This should put me nearer to Legends, dropping fire to scorch lines
Cuz If u keep it close we might get nom'd...n u can fail to get in for a fourth time
lol okish
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
cool
n Damn, Arc sucks. When u said u'll retire it was met with cheers
So it makes sense ur removing urself, since u've been a tumor in text for years
nahh
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either
decent
n I drop ether, stay killin the best. Fuck ur Name recognition in text...
Don't matter if u go buy Arm or, Arch...the hollow points'll still rip thru ur chest
dope!


vs



I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
dope!
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
haha, cool
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
okish
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
dope
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size
decent
The pressure to champ is getting to him. I know this obese fag's starting to sweat
Cuz King has the weight of the world on his shoulders... and the mass of the sun below his neck
lmfao, cool
Your looks make ladies wretch, Bruh. So you're never leaving them sexed up
Any bitch making a move to jump King is just playing a game of checkers
decent
This fag'll do anything to champ so watch this lame hoe sway
But a bullet will stop King from going for his dream... James Earl Ray
okish


great battle here, and it could go either way id imagine. really tough to call.. but honestly imo I've got arch edging it out.. was realy feelin the juggernaut and lamb lines, while king had the reem arc and armour arch lines.. but I think the rest of arches verse topped kings.. real dope battle though and props to both

V - Arch

[Alphabet]

U got it backwards. Every bar u add makes ur chances wither
Yea u owe me a good battle...n I owe 3 GG champs to the fact u can't deliver
A rampant quitter, grenade-fucking, male nurse bitch could never win
I'd say u put the dic in medic, but I saw Abi n its clear u'd put dick in anything
I got a war mind. I'll grab his scalpal n show that he's not tough
This fag can't be Saved...cuz I aint using WordPad when I open the .Doc up
Ur a 9 year vet in here, Abi's been around 3. U should not see her
She's a noob by comparison...yet got admin'd n put in Legends before u got either


VS


I laugh when you war with Ron but the fact you're wack's the issue, Fam
Cuz it's funny how you bring beef to God but end up as the sacrificial lamb
My body has that black Adonis swag. It's known this fag's the weight of a horse
So we both pull bitches... but yours is through gravitational force
No surprise this ugly fuck ducked in NBL. We know if you showed you'd be dead
Cuz text sites mirror your sex life the way Bag's over your head
This fat bum thinks he's top tier but drops haven't shown that lately, son
So if we're trying to decide if you're a juggernaut... it's cuz your body's shaped like one
Stop acting like you're the Michael Jackson of text. You're just a buffoon that ruins lines
So if we call you the King of Pop... it includes all junk foods that balloon your size


i got arch taking the win here with more consistancy and the harder hitting quotables. this was a dope battle but arch went in

[Knux]

Arch Wins