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Your name is Illustrious, yet nobody's herd of ya/
after this battle i'll leave you like soulja boy, nobody respecting ya/
as a baby you where confiscated, because your mother was bad like britney spears/
and you still don't know who your father is, even after all these years/
soon as you where conceived, out the brothel he disappeared/
so you use the excuse of no father figure, to be like George Michael a raging queer/
suck and fuck so much cock, constantly shitting cum out your rear/
your a jessie who'll be buzzing for woody, for light years/
I have battles that are real, where i put in the work/
i'm known at events, whilst your always sat on here battlin nerdz/
pearl harbor your country was crippled by planes/
it shows you Americans are so dumb when September 11th came and it happened again/
I fuckin’ hate you faggot! You aren’t even close to being a text rebel
I LOL’d when I found out you got banned for talking shit to “The Next Level”
You won’t be on that level & you won’t ever be considered a text guy
Cuz it seems like you keep getting more wack next try after next try
Just die! I’ll be happy to assist you when I hit you & solve the issue
This scotish fuck will be so bloody bloody he’ll probably need a lot of tissues
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of time
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
You do nothing productive on this site & you try to talk tough, but what for?
That’s only gonna leave you dragged in the water like a fuckin’ duck tour
I’ll slap & kick you, faggot nobody will miss you…you’re just a grain of sand
Because the only way you can be hot is when the sun hits you man
bumppp. ill have links later
Your name is Illustrious, yet nobody's herd of ya/
after this battle i'll leave you like soulja boy, nobody respecting ya/
as a baby you where confiscated, because your mother was bad like britney spears/not a good punch
and you still don't know who your father is, even after all these years/
soon as you where conceived, out the brothel he disappeared/again, not a good punch
so you use the excuse of no father figure, to be like George Michael a raging queer/
suck and fuck so much cock, constantly shitting cum out your rear/again, not a good punch
your a jessie who'll be buzzing for woody, for light years/
I have battles that are real, where i put in the work/your punches are not that effective but you are managing to diss you opponent...
i'm known at events, whilst your always sat on here battlin nerdz/
pearl harbor your country was crippled by planes/you used whilst in a rap battle
it shows you Americans are so dumb when September 11th came and it happened again/
vs.you have a descriptive and a runon sentence style of writing... you should focus your punches into two lines or one line instead of having one flow through the whole verse
I fuckin’ hate you faggot! You aren’t even close to being a text rebel
I LOL’d when I found out you got banned for talking shit to “The Next Level”
You won’t be on that level & you won’t ever be considered a text guyi dont like this
Cuz it seems like you keep getting more wack next try after next try
Just die! I’ll be happy to assist you when I hit you & solve the issuethis was weak but you managed to diss your opponent
This scotish fuck will be so bloody bloody he’ll probably need a lot of tissues
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of timeyou could have worked this into a better outcome.. not a good punch
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
You do nothing productive on this site & you try to talk tough, but what for?ok diss but not a strong punch
That’s only gonna leave you dragged in the water like a fuckin’ duck tour
I’ll slap & kick you, faggot nobody will miss you…you’re just a grain of sandweak wordplay on this one
Because the only way you can be hot is when the sun hits you man
again, weak wordplay
this was a weak battle but if i have to vote then my vote is for Mc
Vote Mc. for dissing his opponent more than his opponent dissed him
Love Life Live
Lol
god damn uppin this shit. leave links!
Your name is Illustrious, yet nobody's herd of ya/
after this battle i'll leave you like soulja boy, nobody respecting ya/
played reference, didn't really hit for me. kinda funny though
as a baby you where confiscated, because your mother was bad like britney spears/
and you still don't know who your father is, even after all these years/
where confiscated? proofread bro.. not too creative of a concept didin't hit hard
soon as you where conceived, out the brothel he disappeared/
so you use the excuse of no father figure, to be like George Michael a raging queer/
again with the where. but better concept
suck and fuck so much cock, constantly shitting cum out your rear/
your a jessie who'll be buzzing for woody, for light years/
decent.
I have battles that are real, where i put in the work/
i'm known at events, whilst your always sat on here battlin nerdz/
heard it
pearl harbor your country was crippled by planes/
it shows you Americans are so dumb when September 11th came and it happened again/
decent concept not a the best closer
I fuckin’ hate you faggot! You aren’t even close to being a text rebel
I LOL’d when I found out you got banned for talking shit to “The Next Level”
lol nice personal.
You won’t be on that level & you won’t ever be considered a text guy
Cuz it seems like you keep getting more wack next try after next try
decent. doesn't hit too hard seems fillerish to me
Just die! I’ll be happy to assist you when I hit you & solve the issue
This scotish fuck will be so bloody bloody he’ll probably need a lot of tissues
'probably'? i think if you used more decisive wording this would hit better
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of time
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
decent. nothing special
You do nothing productive on this site & you try to talk tough, but what for?
That’s only gonna leave you dragged in the water like a fuckin’ duck tour
ha this is dece
I’ll slap & kick you, faggot nobody will miss you…you’re just a grain of sand
Because the only way you can be hot is when the sun hits you man
ha decent
i didn't like constel's wording, he had a few decent concepts but the punches didn't connect for me.
illustrious's concepts were pretty generic in general, but he connected more than costel.
illustrious takes this for me
Your name is Illustrious, yet nobody's herd of ya/
after this battle i'll leave you like soulja boy, nobody respecting ya/
Alright, I guess
as a baby you where confiscated, because your mother was bad like britney spears/
and you still don't know who your father is, even after all these years/
Seen it
soon as you where conceived, out the brothel he disappeared/
so you use the excuse of no father figure, to be like George Michael a raging queer/
It's a decent punch, but still not feeling it enough
suck and fuck so much cock, constantly shitting cum out your rear/
your a jessie who'll be buzzing for woody, for light years/
I liked this one
I have battles that are real, where i put in the work/
i'm known at events, whilst your always sat on here battlin nerdz/
Fillurr
pearl harbor your country was crippled by planes/
it shows you Americans are so dumb when September 11th came and it happened again/
Nice line, don't know if it's such a good finisher tho
versus
I fuckin’ hate you faggot! You aren’t even close to being a text rebel
I LOL’d when I found out you got banned for talking shit to “The Next Level”
Could've done more with this one, I think, still decent tho
You won’t be on that level & you won’t ever be considered a text guy
Cuz it seems like you keep getting more wack next try after next try
It's okay
Just die! I’ll be happy to assist you when I hit you & solve the issue
This scotish fuck will be so bloody bloody he’ll probably need a lot of tissues
Nice use of multiples, punch was alright
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of time
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
Liked that one
You do nothing productive on this site & you try to talk tough, but what for?
That’s only gonna leave you dragged in the water like a fuckin’ duck tour
I think it will. Funny line
I’ll slap & kick you, faggot nobody will miss you…you’re just a grain of sand
Because the only way you can be hot is when the sun hits you man
Little bit disappointed here, it's good that you connected the grain of sand to the last line, but still, I've seen the last line a lot, even in my own language.
Mcostel had four lines I digged, Illustrious had six. Mcostel came a bit basic in my opinion, that's why my vote goes to Illustrious.
let's get some real votes
Lmao^....this fucking site right? Here ya golet's get some real votes
Your name is Illustrious, yet nobody's herd of ya/
after this battle i'll leave you like soulja boy, nobody respecting ya/
No rhyme.
as a baby you where confiscated, because your mother was bad like britney spears/
and you still don't know who your father is, even after all these years/
In the future, avoid using "like" too much. drains the creativity from your punch, unless its really original. so the setup wasnt creative, and the punch was played and ineffective.
soon as you where conceived, out the brothel he disappeared/
so you use the excuse of no father figure, to be like George Michael a raging queer/
This is ok. Kind of.
suck and fuck so much cock, constantly shitting cum out your rear/
your a jessie who'll be buzzing for woody, for light years/
Cool wordplay. Whack punch.
I have battles that are real, where i put in the work/
i'm known at events, whilst your always sat on here battlin nerdz/
Decent.
pearl harbor your country was crippled by planes/
it shows you Americans are so dumb when September 11th came and it happened again/
Not feeling it man.
I fuckin’ hate you faggot! You aren’t even close to being a text rebel
I LOL’d when I found out you got banned for talking shit to “The Next Level”
Not bad
You won’t be on that level & you won’t ever be considered a text guy
Cuz it seems like you keep getting more wack next try after next try
Basic but okay.
Just die! I’ll be happy to assist you when I hit you & solve the issue
This scotish fuck will be so bloody bloody he’ll probably need a lot of tissues
Lol
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of time
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
Nice wordplay, solid punch.
You do nothing productive on this site & you try to talk tough, but what for?
That’s only gonna leave you dragged in the water like a fuckin’ duck tour
ehh. aight.
I’ll slap & kick you, faggot nobody will miss you…you’re just a grain of sand
Because the only way you can be hot is when the sun hits you man
A bit played and predictable but its still a decent punch.
Overall Ill was way more consistent, not a dope verse but some good disses and wordplay and all of his bars atleast demonstrated a good attempt to throw a punch. Mc, work on combining creativity/originality with dissing your opponent. You need both in every punch or it ends up flat.
Easy vote for Ill
nothing. i wasnt feeling anything from mc. shit wasnt rhyming, punches werent connecting n the sting wasnt there
vs
My quick keys are fresh while your hourly writtens are just a waste of time
Because whenever you say something is dope it just means it’s a basic line
-this was ok
v/- Illus .. i thought his verse was more polished n his hits connected better
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