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    In The Stars

    http://soundcloud.com/montanas2cold/in-the-stars

    "In The Stars"
    (motivational track)


    leme know!

  2. #2

    Re: In The Stars

    The beat and hook are pretty cool on this track. The verses don't sound very good. They are too loud and not mixed very well at all in my opinion. The lyrics are decent and the flow is on and off in some places. If it was mixed better, it would be much better because the small mistakes wouldn't be noticable at all. Keep at it!

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  3. #3

    Re: In The Stars

    I agree with the above comment...i like the lyrics, its got a message, i also like your voice, but it needs to be mixed down better, also, work on delivery. you def got potential though.

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