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    Hail Mary

    Hail Mary


    The day the world stood still…

    If my pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see.
    A story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
    It was the day the world stood still, innocence lost, and tragedy fill
    A day of ending and new beginning –
    Witnessed a war: righteousness vs. sinning.
    The day started as one of pride,
    I couldn’t imagine the secrets the night would hide.
    I couldn’t imagine the faith I would come to learn,
    Or the realities brought forth of souls doomed to burn.

    Don’t know the alpha or the omega, neither was in sight,
    but I do know the harsh reality of my bliss that night.
    Perhaps I'll never know why I was the only one in the room…
    And perhaps I’ll never stop wondering if ultimately it'd be my doom.
    Felt like an eternity standing toe to toe,
    All the while --- thinking to myself friend or foe?
    I looked at him and he looked back at me it seemed it was forever, paralyzed an eternity.
    But it wasn't the eyes of my enemy,
    More like a familiar stare I became aware that was long lost to me.
    But yes, the eyes were cold, they were dark, and they were piercing me,
    What courage it took for the angel who ran upstairs to rescue me,
    at that moment I realized a hero is way more than anything I could ever hope to be.


    I flew down the stairs, passed the quiet guard,
    jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
    And there I stood as if I was in this world alone,
    and I wasn’t snapped back until to the ground I was thrown.

    I think I was in awe, cause I realized the ramifications of what I just saw.
    “For by thee I have run through a troop; and by God have leaped over a wall”
    Literally!
    For this is the night I believe the angels carried me –
    The halos and horns I could see so vividly
    That is why I believe in my heart a martyr fell before we.

    Be still fear in our enemies with ignorance their disguise
    Behold the angels with the tears in their eyes.
    In that moment we all came to be one – there was no divisible sides,
    Together we stood and for a second coexistence won.
    There together to witness and mourn the wrong that has been done.
    And that is the true meaning of loss when you all wanna talk about “lost one.”

    And to he, at his last breath I think he took me too,
    And left a lasting impression too real and too true.
    For I felt the weight lifted when a spirit was called home and I knew it was accepted,
    Not left here to roam.
    It wasn’t at that moment I felt restored to reality
    But the world stood still did not move again until I felt that first snowflake touch me.
    Now, hail Mary
    Last edited by CLA919; March 3rd, 2014 at 05:18 AM

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    Re: Hail Mary

    Do you have a recorded audio version?


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    Re: Hail Mary

    really because i cant read this the way you would rap it
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    Re: Hail Mary

    I can get one... can you give me a few weeks?

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    Re: Hail Mary

    @Networth you wanna try to change this to an audio? If you're bored one day and you can change any line to make it fit. It's just a concept. I'm just trying to see if how I write is for people who flow or more just like poetry w a beat.
    @Daz or a few years.

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    Nah it's mine, they put Da instead of the and changed a word to Bliss. Sorry bitch watching your classmate get gunned down and a party shot up and then watching him die in my lap in the car at the ER isn't bliss. I can see how for you it would be though. Why hide? Why lie? Why try to defamate me? Who ever you are and what ever screen name you hide behind now.

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    @ILLunatic maybe - he would probably have to change a lot though
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    Re: Hail Mary




    If my.. pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see. [:31]
    A... story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
    I re..member the day the world stood still,
    it was,, innocence lost, and tragedy filled
    A day of ending and new beginning –
    when I Witnessed a war of righteousness vs. sinning.
    What a end, when we started the day as one of pride
    Couldn’t imagine all of the secrets the night would hide.
    Couldn’t imagine all of the faith I'd come to learn,
    Or the realities brought forth.. of all these souls doomed to burn.

    Dont know the Alpha or the Omega, niether in sight [1:00]
    But I know the Harsh reality of all I would see that night
    Perhaps I'll never know.. why I was alone in that room
    Maybe I'll never stop wonderin on ultimately be my doom
    But it felt..like.. an enternity standin toe to toe
    All the while my thought was just friend foe.
    We exchanged looks seemingly forever paralizin my energy
    These eyes lookin back at me's not the ones of my enemy

    But i became aware.. 1:24]
    That these cold dark eyes piercin me had long their familiar stare
    What courage it took the anngel to run up the steps and rescue me
    That moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be
    Oh the courage it took her to come and rescue me
    The moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be

    Then I flew down the stairs, and passed the quiet guard, [1:42]
    jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
    And it was there that I stood as if in this world alone,
    and then I snapped back onto the ground to which I was thrown.

    I was in awe... ramificattions of what I saw
    “For by thee I've run through a troop; by God leaped over a wall”
    Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
    Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!
    Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
    Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!

    Be still fear in our enemies ignorance they disguise [2:11]
    Coexistence is won, no divisible sides
    We came together as one to mourn the wrong that was done
    If u behold the angels you can see the tears in they eyes
    You lost ones..but real loss true
    lasting impression on his last breath he took mine too

    Felt that..weight lifted spirit was called home
    I knew it was accepted, no where left to roam
    Reality restored and your memories never buried
    Rest in piece this winter, you winner and Hail Mary!

    Last edited by Networth; November 15th, 2019 at 10:06 AM

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    Re: Hail Mary

    OMG that was so amazing but I liked it better on the parts you tweaked and made your own. THANK YOU!!!! I really do appreciate. You're quick too - I bet you perfect it some more it'd be beyond straight fire. @Networth you're good as fuck - hope you one of the ones that make it.

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    Re: Hail Mary



    If my.. pen was a paintbrush, I’d paint a picture to see. [:31]
    A... story in time; when da walls closed n on me.
    I re..member the day the world stood still,
    it was,, innocence lost, and tragedy filled
    A day of ending and new beginning –
    when I Witnessed a war of righteousness vs. sinning.
    What a end, when we started the day as one of pride
    Couldn’t imagine all of the secrets the night would hide.
    Couldn’t imagine all of the faith I'd come to learn,
    Or the realities brought forth.. of all these souls doomed to burn.

    Dont know the Alpha or the Omega, niether in sight [1:00]
    But I know the Harsh reality of all I would see that night
    Perhaps I'll never know.. why I was alone in that room
    Maybe I'll never stop wonderin on ultimately be my doom
    But it felt..like.. an enternity standin toe to toe
    All the while my thought was just friend foe.
    We exchanged looks seemingly forever paralizin my energy
    These eyes lookin back at me's not the ones of my enemy

    But i became aware.. 1:24]
    That these cold dark eyes piercin me had long their familiar stare
    What courage it took the anngel to run up the steps and rescue me
    That moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be
    Oh the courage it took her to come and rescue me
    The moment I realized a Hero is more than I'd ever be

    Then I flew down the stairs, and passed the quiet guard, [1:42]
    jumped over the porch landed on my feet into the yard,
    And it was there that I stood as if in this world alone,
    and then I snapped back onto the ground to which I was thrown.

    I was in awe... ramificattions of what I saw
    “For by thee I've run through a troop; by God leaped over a wall”
    Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
    Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!
    Wit halos and horns, we the angels carried
    Do I much bleieve a martyr fell for me? Very!

    Be still fear in our enemies ignorance they disguise [2:11]
    Coexistence is won, no divisible sides
    We came together as one to mourn the wrong that was done
    If u behold the angels you can see the tears in they eyes
    You lost ones..but real loss true
    lasting impression on his last breath he took mine too

    Felt that..weight lifted spirit was called home
    I knew it was accepted, no where left to roam
    Reality restored and your memories never buried
    Rest in piece this winter, you winner and Hail Mary!
    Last edited by Networth; November 16th, 2019 at 06:48 PM

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    Re: Hail Mary

    I wouldn't want to think he fell for me... I just met him and he had a baby on the way. It was horrible.
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    Sorry the tape/song wasn't horrible, him dying... the recording was hot - I will listen again when I feel better. @Networth
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    Re: Hail Mary

    @Networth my boy said that shit was straight fire. Thanks so much for doing that for me.
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