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@Smog
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When the shot gun blast you’ll be evaporated n nobody would care
Cause they’d think I was in rush hour traffic the way I’d put smog up in the air
These punches are rare, yours don’t flare, u got the swag of dope fiends
After I dissect this bitch, he’ll get left in more boxes than the Netflix home screen
ima vet bytch that'll grab the tek quick, ure just a damn boy
Ya spirit will be floatin in a galaxy after I squeeze my hand like its an app by Andriod
Kp stay with bars for weeks, have voters in deep contemplation
Only time people mention Smog lines…. It deals with vehicle registration
im a Bozz wit patiences n u verbally signed up for this death drive
u best fly cause you’ll be found dead over a cliff n a ditch like you’re Left Eye
I'll supply this cat food for thought, believing its needed,
Feedin him a properly heated thesis, no stopping me, knowp,He's caught between talking mean n often seekin Jesus after a piece of me was wanted so eagerly I fronted my penis now he reeks of pee, I piss on week emcees, save my shit for competition but since its non existing I keep some tea, on my hip n, bottled water so after all this slaughter I can easily leak, introducing u to agony teaching to greet L's respectfully while meeting defeat, I'm poppye, eating my greens, I see ya, leaning towards beens n tor tillas the way u stink up the mic n seem to bore me like a scenic tour I've already seen before, multiple times, I'm the clothing of hulk on the mic, rippin it then stickin it in ur gapped hole like a dike......
v/know p
smog u got a nice flow and everything but you need to work on forming more creative punches. this was just flowing dissing statements. know p u used a left eye line...for shame. smh...
RTF
Ok keep going
v/knowp.. i feel like he had better bars and it read out a lot smoother the 1st 2 punches stuck out the most.. smogs verse was alright but read out more like a freestyle than a battle verse had a few good bars in there but not good enough to win in my opinion.. good shit to both tho
KnowP took this one easily. Nice flow with multies, wordplay off opponents name. Punches on point. Overall a dope verse except for the closer
When the shot gun blast you’ll be evaporated n nobody would care
Cause they’d think I was in rush hour traffic the way I’d put smog up in the air
These punches are rare, yours don’t flare, u got the swag of dope fiends
After I dissect this bitch, he’ll get left in more boxes than the Netflix home screen
vs.
One of the longest run on sentences ever.
v/KnowP
smog you gotta separate your bars man, that shit is hard to read. You did have a coule decent concepts, but just keep at it and keep elevating.
know p took this easy better mutis and he had punchlines the other do didnt really have any
the lines i like from know p When the shot gun blast you’ll be evaporated n nobody would care
Cause they’d think I was in rush hour traffic the way I’d put smog up in the air
These punches are rare, yours don’t flare, u got the swag of dope fiends
After I dissect this bitch, he’ll get left in more boxes than the Netflix home screen
ima vet bytch that'll grab the tek quick, ure just a damn boy
Ya spirit will be floatin in a galaxy after I squeeze my hand like its an app by Andriod
vs nada
keep writing smog
uppings
Hey mordy it been ten years since I battled... Just warming up... That was like a ten min free write while driving...
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