10- 12 lines
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Wicked 2
Smog
10- 12 lines
Due Sunday by 11 59 est time
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you ever heard of a label named simple & sleeved
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gonna drop 12, you should do same to make it fair, it should always be a certain amount never 10-12 or whatever, alright..
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Just saw ur check so give me bout an hour so in ill write Something up
Bitch ur whorable, that means I'm able to lable u as a whore,
Unfaithful too,
Left a site cuz his back is sore from being cracked in fourths, now he's back 4 more ,
Ill crash this corse, faggot this is chicken, fast dont match wit force,
With that being the case, I'm a fuckin tractor trailer punk, n this cats a Porsche,
I'm flexing fo real, u a boss?, what u flossing there yo,
Please, smogs fart'll blow ur smart car off of the road,
Ur wickedly wack ,eight shy of fifty,now this be a costly matter,
Ill battle u 31 times in a row,so u reach the fifty mark in the loss column faster,
Fuckin coward lackin punchin power, u suck jerk n get fucked? Word ,
Simplifies why these ass beatings be leaving u all butt hurt,
Ill flash a stack a c-notes in ur face n drop u, before im done son,
Those eyes looked ambitious, thought they might a wanted to get lumped some,
Here we go...
My flow is mental, but this dude is gentle, we've seen this clown fail vs the whole sites stout rhymers..
You have no potential, "forget to pick up the slack", he'd have to be "downtrailed with Alzheimer's..
Now im a sick guy, that'll leave ya wig fried, he wished that pigs fly so we could finally witness him battle'n very greatly..
I'm clappin him with the trey bee, so watch me put "gremlin in a box"- like Mattel factories in the 80's..
The hell makes you think you're any better than others?, Fuck a punchline after the set up this vet's gutter..
I'll rape your Eskimo mother, while shes fixing a casserole of whale intestines and blubber..
Literally dude you suck, catch this homo on the floor-cuffed with a sore butt..
In the streets he gets torn-up, you hear Smog riding out?, Its dudes pushing the tour-bus..
Your flows pretty lame, my lines are raw like Chris Farley's cocaine..
He aint a buyer, cause we wouldnt see a "fire ball" in Mario's game..
Not doing a last diss, your not worth it, i'll do the voters job instead, work on punches, you need production..
Your structure is trash, wordplay is ass, hell i recommend you bite like vampire instructions..
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Should have went smaller font, anyways uppin..will post my 3 links soon..thanks
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Smog
Simplifies why these ass beatings be leaving u all butt hurt,
Ill flash a stack a c-notes in ur face n drop u, before im done son,
Those eyes looked ambitious, thought they might a wanted to get lumped some,
still displaying ur punches as audio format fam no hate man but the punches aren't really coming off hard text wise the way they are worded would be dope in audio though. those last two hits were ok but even they would of came off good if in audio. you gotta peep some text battles see how the format is displayed.
Wicked
Now im a sick guy, that'll leave ya wig fried, he wished that pigs fly so we could finally witness him battle'n very greatly..
I'm clappin him with the trey bee, so watch me put "gremlin in a box"- like Mattel factories in the 80's..
The hell makes you think you're any better than others?, Fuck a punchline after the set up this vet's gutter..
I'll rape your Eskimo mother, while shes fixing a casserole of whale intestines and blubber..
Literally dude you suck, catch this homo on the floor-cuffed with a sore butt..
In the streets he gets torn-up, you hear Smog riding out?, Its dudes pushing the tour-bus..
Your flows pretty lame, my lines are raw like Chris Farley's cocaine..
He aint a buyer, cause we wouldnt see a "fire ball" in Mario's game..
Not doing a last diss, your not worth it, i'll do the voters job instead, work on punches, you need production..
Your structure is trash, wordplay is ass, hell i recommend you bite like vampire instructions..
some decent punches here some nice metaphorical content as well good creativity also.
V/Wicked he just had better punches more text formatted and more creativity.
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Bitch ur whorable, that means I'm able to lable u as a whore,
Unfaithful too,
Left a site cuz his back is sore from being cracked in fourths, now he's back 4 more ,
ehh not a very good opener, rhyme scheme was iight though
Ill crash this corse, faggot this is chicken, fast dont match wit force,
With that being the case, I'm a fuckin tractor trailer punk, n this cats a Porsche,
mehh not feeling it
I'm flexing fo real, u a boss?, what u flossing there yo,
Please, smogs fart'll blow ur smart car off of the road,
lol not great but kinda funny
Ur wickedly wack ,eight shy of fifty,now this be a costly matter,
Ill battle u 31 times in a row,so u reach the fifty mark in the loss column faster,
I kind of liked this actually, not bad imo
Fuckin coward lackin punchin power, u suck jerk n get fucked? Word ,
Simplifies why these ass beatings be leaving u all butt hurt,
ehh I see what you're going for but could have been worded better.
Ill flash a stack a c-notes in ur face n drop u, before im done son,
Those eyes looked ambitious, thought they might a wanted to get lumped some,
Not a bad closer
Smog, I felt you were on and off in this, you had a couple bars that were pretty good, and the rest were not good at all. Try and keep it more consistent.
My flow is mental, but this dude is gentle, we've seen this clown fail vs the whole sites stout rhymers..
You have no potential, "forget to pick up the slack", he'd have to be "downtrailed with Alzheimer's..
Mehh not a great opener
Now im a sick guy, that'll leave ya wig fried, he wished that pigs fly so we could finally witness him battle'n very greatly..
I'm clappin him with the trey bee, so watch me put "gremlin in a box"- like Mattel factories in the 80's..
Not to bad, not great either though
The hell makes you think you're any better than others?, Fuck a punchline after the set up this vet's gutter..
I'll rape your Eskimo mother, while shes fixing a casserole of whale intestines and blubber..
Not bad, kinda funny to
Literally dude you suck, catch this homo on the floor-cuffed with a sore butt..
In the streets he gets torn-up, you hear Smog riding out?, Its dudes pushing the tour-bus..
haha decent
Your flows pretty lame, my lines are raw like Chris Farley's cocaine..
He aint a buyer, cause we wouldnt see a "fire ball" in Mario's game..
not bad
Not doing a last diss, your not worth it, i'll do the voters job instead, work on punches, you need production..
Your structure is trash, wordplay is ass, hell i recommend you bite like vampire instructions..
Hehe interesting concept, not a bad closer at all
Wicked you had a par verse, it had some decent concepts, but with some better wording I feel some of them could have hit harder.
Wicked had the more consistent harder hitting verse.
v/Wicked
Sorry havent been on in almost 2 days, i will post 2 links by end of tonight, thanks.
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