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    Just Some Brag

    If you don't know by now, OutWrite is the dopest
    If you don't flow high brow, your eye brows will lose focus
    I'll let ya hype die down and put my weight on ya shoulders
    Half you cats that try me don't even hold diplomas
    I get a hundred for a track, you pay fifty for some bogus
    I've made a living off serving MC's and some smokers
    Slowly taking over, I know ya moms and ladies noticed
    I eat you jokers for breakfast with OJ and pastry toasters
    And since you know this, you know to avoid gettin roasted
    And to avoid getting roasted your gonna have to quit postin
    And you know if OW wrote it, its guaranteed to be golden
    And i know that if you spit dope shit, its guaranteed to be stolen
    And if you want flows this hot, you're gonna have to take notes, kids!
    Your verses sound phoned in, you're tone deaf, and bloated
    Bull in a china shop, I walked in, then I broke shit
    I told you i flow the dopest..........word to ya noses....
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    Re: Just Some Brag

    i need two links of good feed back bro.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Ahhhh! my nigga!

    Slowly taking over, I know ya moms and ladies noticed
    I eat you jokers for breakfast with OJ and pastry toasters
    This flowed like the Mississippi river my guy! nice flow throughout the whole thing really, the only think I noticed was the excessive use of "And" lol Who's outwrite though?
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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Lol!

    That's been my name for 12 years. I JUST changed it like 2 weeks ago.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    oh lmfao my bad my bad
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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Up.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Spartacus, brag pieces aren't normally my thing. I love starved egos. I know its a part of rap though, the whole brag thing and I'm more open to it than I was. But I gotta' hand it to you, because, apart from the 'In ya face' imagery, which kicks ass, the flow here haemorrhaged like a haemophiliac. No clotting of unnecessary words, just stunning melodical flow.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Dope fucking flow! Sound like Eminem!
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    Re: Just Some Brag

    pretty good, worth reading, IDK why the pastry toaster line sounded dope but yeah lol

    don't leave feed on mine it's freaking retarded

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    Lol... Brag... Smh

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    You did well to keep the end rhyme going for the most part. Was all a bit safe content wise, i think yu could of step it up with different internal rhymes or schemes. If its a brag push yourself, thats the point It was decent but nothing wow. Flow was pretty smooth and it wasn't a bad piece overall though.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    "Braggadocio my dude. I'm going to do a little spin off this Sparty."(I typed this months & months ago but never submitted it, the forum still saved it in the message box though.)
    I wrote a remixed version of this but I can't find it...
    Anyways
    @OutWrite
    You already know you had that infectious flow on here. You need to stop playing around on other accounts & pen up some dope shit on here again lol. Cmon bro
    You got the young king over here making legendary stuff now
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ctric-Egomania

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    I enjoyed this piece. When I go over old instrumentals, or versus or even songs that I've written I'm reminded of all of the artists who have made popular music in the past. You see, every artist reaches a point where they just can't make hits anymore, and it appears to us in the future as if they, at one time, we're just reaching into The ether and grabbing the songs from the universe, and somehow lost the ability to do so. I am also reminded that jet fuel cannot melt steel beams, and when I remember that cold September morning in 2001 when George Bush flew his plane holograms into the world trade center, I remember him reading that children's book to that class of elementary school students and right as his security member came in to inform him of the attacks, one particular six-year-old, named Tyler, was correcting him on his pronunciation for the fifth time that day.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    For when the next explorers come to investigate this website which used to harbor life, as a sort of reference point, right now 'Epstein didn't kill himself' memes are peak and we still have racism. And the Nazis are back.

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    Re: Just Some Brag

    LoL… That's crazy you were outwrite - I always knew you as Spartacus cause every time I saw your name I'd think of that 300 movie - "This is SParrrtaasaaa! Nice writing as usual. You ever go thru fuck it spouts? Like your writing not on point like it used to be? @Spartacus
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