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it's bin a minute..
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
enjoy what? ur wretched with writtens and I wish u’d die now
u pull wool over voters eyes w/ verses that make me want to gouge mine out
like incarcerated scarfaces I keep it R rated busting on sluts from tv
thats an action shot, now a days 13 yr old girls won’t even fuck w/ PG
p has a rapist vibe that make females cry n carry guns, ur severely stunned
so any bitch who has had a grave encounter, wants to have him buried in one
i got hoes who swallow loads that are down to give profound head
if u ever fuck w/ a bj it’s jerkin to that trany ryan posted in the lounge thread
ur into weird shit, a faggot whose whack u should start facing the facts
that any dude that’s engrave has done that with their name in his back
peep the rankings loser, I douse w/ ether so theres no doubt I’ll beat ya
you are such a pathetic fairy i will drown you with the one in south korea
WD40
Should I dig facts on Sal or Hush, you scared bitch
Cuz using a personal focused on you is pointless, when your posting their shit
Your concepts are pre historic, who thought that your nice
Alpha hails straight out Vancouver, BC <--no wonder everything is Before Christ
Leave this jerk stretched, how you steal lines hurts rep
With that being said, I'm surprised you haven't found a way to 3d print a verse yet
Leave you hurt vet & drop on the first form of contact
Just Cuz Borax like a legend, his concepts seemed to have overdosed on that
Stop stealing schemes & trying to search for dirt
give those wins & achievements to the artist who originally wrote your work
In a marathon for gold, alpha you've lost a step
Cause if your Carrying Bombs it's more of a Hoax then this years boston threat
v/Packed. He was more consistent and had LOTB with 3d printers. This battle was okay but I wasn't a huge fan of Alpha's verse. I've seen him come much better before.
p has a rapist vibe that make females cry n carry guns, ur severely stunned
so any bitch who has had a grave encounter, wants to have him buried in one
i got hoes who swallow loads that are down to give profound head
if u ever fuck w/ a bj it’s jerkin to that trany ryan posted in the lounge thread
ur into weird shit, a faggot whose whack u should start facing the facts
that any dude that’s engrave has done that with their name in his back
vs
Your concepts are pre historic, who thought that your nice
Alpha hails straight out Vancouver, BC <--no wonder everything is Before Christ
In a marathon for gold, alpha you've lost a step
Cause if your Carrying Bombs it's more of a Hoax then this years boston threat
pretty good battle overall. PG had some good bars but a few played joints that ive seen time n time again on Alphabet so they lost sting imo. ALpha had some flips i havent seen yet and that lounge shot which was funny af cause i rememer seeing that ugly ass picture. close battle and will go either way but i gotta give it too....
vote alpha
Alphabet: Wool over eyes/ gouge flip was cool, but I've seen similar concepts so its a lil played. 13 yr old girls/PG was harsh.. grave encounter nameplay flip was decent.. ryan tranny pic was lol.. in grave/name in his back was lol.. fairy/ferry was iight, but it was missing something to add to the overall sting of it. Decent verse most of your bars hit, a couple of them were harsher than others but nice verse overall.
PG: Biting from sal or hush... if its tru its pretty nice, but if not then its comlpetely irrelevant. pre historic/BC was a cool personal/fllip.. 3d print a verse was dope. borax was cool. again with the biting punch, did I miss something? lol. boston threat was cool af.. Decent verse PG..
Basically, if PG's bars about Bet biting and shit a true, he takes this imo.
v/PG
Alphabet:
Opener was played, didn't have a fresh enough flip too it. PG was a cool flip, even tho I've seen that concept used on him every time, I personally liked yours probably the most. Grave Encounter was ok, I think GOW used that concept on him in their FL battle. Lounge thread was eh, IMO. Engrave was nice. Closer was weak.
vs
Packed Graves:
Opener had potential, your execution was lazy, tho. BC concepts are pretty played but you tied it in w/ His location, so ok, I still think you could have executed the concept differently, tbh, it lacked Harshness. 3D print was cool, I liked it. Borax/Bore Acts, I'm assuming his alias Boredom? Yea... I think you could have did more rather then the "Overdose" concept. Achievements was cool, but redundant considering you started your verse with that same exact concept. Closer was off too me, wasn't feelin' it at all.
Overall: I think wording hurt PG a lot here. He had some col concepts but was lazy w/ the executions. Not the best that I have seen from Alphabet, then again dude may be rusty from not writing for 3 weeks, lol. But all in all, I got Alpha with the PG/Grave Encounter/Engrave (All name plays, which is weird.) vs PG's 3D Print/Borax/Achievements. 3 vs 3 Quotes in which I'm being pretty liberal. I compared the other bars and Feel Alpha's misses were just a tad bit better then PG's due to execution. PG had ok'ish concepts but lacked the "Harsh" execution as where Alpha worded his concepts pretty smoothly which just came off better, IMO.
v/Alpha - BARELY, could go either way, IMO.
enjoy what? ur wretched with writtens and I wish u’d die now
u pull wool over voters eyes w/ verses that make me want to gouge mine out
this was cool
like incarcerated scarfaces I keep it R rated busting on sluts from tv
thats an action shot, now a days 13 yr old girls won’t even fuck w/ PG
ehh played on him
p has a rapist vibe that make females cry n carry guns, ur severely stunned
so any bitch who has had a grave encounter, wants to have him buried in one
dope
i got hoes who swallow loads that are down to give profound head
if u ever fuck w/ a bj it’s jerkin to that trany ryan posted in the lounge thread
nah didn't like this one
ur into weird shit, a faggot whose whack u should start facing the facts
that any dude that’s engrave has done that with their name in his back
someone just used engrave against him
peep the rankings loser, I douse w/ ether so theres no doubt I’ll beat ya
you are such a pathetic fairy i will drown you with the one in south korea
cool
vs.
Should I dig facts on Sal or Hush, you scared bitch
Cuz using a personal focused on you is pointless, when your posting their shit
this was ok
Your concepts are pre historic, who thought that your nice
Alpha hails straight out Vancouver, BC <--no wonder everything is Before Christ
so played
Leave this jerk stretched, how you steal lines hurts rep
With that being said, I'm surprised you haven't found a way to 3d print a verse yet
this was cool made me laugh
Leave you hurt vet & drop on the first form of contact
Just Cuz Borax like a legend, his concepts seemed to have overdosed on that
cool
Stop stealing schemes & trying to search for dirt
give those wins & achievements to the artist who originally wrote your work
ehh could have been better
In a marathon for gold, alpha you've lost a step
Cause if your Carrying Bombs it's more of a Hoax then this years boston threat
nah not feelin this
enjoy what? ur wretched with writtens and I wish u’d die now
u pull wool over voters eyes w/ verses that make me want to gouge mine out
p has a rapist vibe that make females cry n carry guns, ur severely stunned
so any bitch who has had a grave encounter, wants to have him buried in one
peep the rankings loser, I douse w/ ether so theres no doubt I’ll beat ya
you are such a pathetic fairy i will drown you with the one in south korea
vs.
Leave this jerk stretched, how you steal lines hurts rep
With that being said, I'm surprised you haven't found a way to 3d print a verse yet
Leave you hurt vet & drop on the first form of contact
Just Cuz Borax like a legend, his concepts seemed to have overdosed on that
v//alpha
3-2 @Alphabet
enjoy what? ur wretched with writtens and I wish u’d die now
u pull wool over voters eyes w/ verses that make me want to gouge mine out
Iight
like incarcerated scarfaces I keep it R rated busting on sluts from tv
thats an action shot, now a days 13 yr old girls won’t even fuck w/ PG
Kinda played concept on him..but worded nice
p has a rapist vibe that make females cry n carry guns, ur severely stunned
so any bitch who has had a grave encounter, wants to have him buried in one
Iight
i got hoes who swallow loads that are down to give profound head
if u ever fuck w/ a bj it’s jerkin to that trany ryan posted in the lounge thread
Lol.. Ok
ur into weird shit, a faggot whose whack u should start facing the facts
that any dude that’s engrave has done that with their name in his back
Iight
peep the rankings loser, I douse w/ ether so theres no doubt I’ll beat ya
you are such a pathetic fairy i will drown you with the one in south korea
Lol.. Ok
Vs...
Should I dig facts on Sal or Hush, you scared bitch
Cuz using a personal focused on you is pointless, when your posting their shit
Lol.. Ok
Your concepts are pre historic, who thought that your nice
Alpha hails straight out Vancouver, BC <--no wonder everything is Before Christ
Like this
Leave this jerk stretched, how you steal lines hurts rep
With that being said, I'm surprised you haven't found a way to 3d print a verse yet
Lol.. Iight
Leave you hurt vet & drop on the first form of contact
Just Cuz Borax like a legend, his concepts seemed to have overdosed on that
Ok
Stop stealing schemes & trying to search for dirt
give those wins & achievements to the artist who originally wrote your work
Iunno kinda ok kinda weak
In a marathon for gold, alpha you've lost a step
Cause if your Carrying Bombs it's more of a Hoax then this years boston threat
Didn't like this...
Iunno this is close I feel alpha came pretty nice but also feel packed tried to get at him more on a personal note.. I also don't feel alphas biting styles but damn yo I honestly IMO like alphas execution more here.. Good battle but I got al by a punch like his attack more... Good shit to read tho...
Vote alphabet
Man I thought alphabet had consistency like a motherfucker, i thought each line was nice. glad to see u back alpha and putting nice shit out. the grave encounter may have been played but i havent seen it as i havent seen many pg battles. i think pg came ok but was off a place or to or didnt hit as hard like i didnt like the 3d print i thought it didnt really have an impact he prolly thought it would and i didnt like the boston bar either...packed got to work on consistency imo
v/alpha
4-2 @Packed Graves ..... thanks for the votes so far
enjoy what? ur wretched with writtens and I wish u’d die now
u pull wool over voters eyes w/ verses that make me want to gouge mine out
I died laughing..
i got hoes who swallow loads that are down to give profound head
if u ever fuck w/ a bj it’s jerkin to that trany ryan posted in the lounge thread
it was okay
vs
nothing
maybe Im being harsh here but didn't feel any of PG's lines this week.. a lot of personals that don't apply to Alphabet as far as I know really so they kind of missed. Alpha went the nameplay route which we all know that about a week into a dudes time text battling, his name becomes played out lol. The fairy line was a bit forced and I didn't like how it was executed. PG just had a lot of misses here and nothing really stood out to me.
v/Alphabet.
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