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    bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    this was just for fun but totally a punchline peace


    Hook:
    (makengknowcentz) yo i can do anything you do dont get it confused
    (i4eigni) nah you'll get you ego bruised challenging mine you'll lose
    (mkc) nah nah bar for bar you get out spit, this spic,
    will leave you r.i.p then autograph the tombstone in script.
    (i4eigni) chill holmes this mic fiend got 16's and bars,
    that will test you harder then when you wanted a green card.

    (i4eigni)
    Yo you aint el debarge, snorting... the only thing in you that’s hard,
    Against the rock, you end up an o.d. or murder charge.
    full bars leave you f.u.b.a.r.'ed, (YOU'LL FACE THE MUSIC)
    Every time the dj scratch; leaving your face with scars...
    Not up to par, get dispatched, you punch lines like you afraid to spar,
    Once I take, you are your cake... you will drop weight...
    Like you contracted sars.
    You the kind that will try an pirating the flows
    But won’t face the kraken,
    Make you a bad joke...breaks your bones ...like what is cracking.
    Man what happened? Did something go wrong?
    Sounding like you ran out of lyrics or made a bad edit on a song.
    What i write cross over jab with the right,
    My word make you flinch so much ill owe you licks in your next life
    Your week. Picture defeat because you can catch a loss in a flash,
    Put your money where your mouth is 180 degree from my @$$.
    Do not deny... you jocking mine tattoo "i4eigni fan" physically
    Leave you cockeyed, literally... bars are cock to thighs, lyrically
    What centz does that make? Sorry was just mimicking,
    He not menacing...try to be like me
    Nevertheless, are the opposite next time don’t mirror me.
    I’m a muse .your just amuse me. Dont mean you are amusing,
    Just an anomaly i can crush tenfold, my pen's worth gold,
    Your writtens worth what an out the pen shyne sold
    Think of this... walking barefoot... meaning you got little soul.
    Flows a bunch of bad joke your stage shows a roast on comedy central
    Steal on your jaw... robbery to your dentals.
    Vietnam memorial for how i murder your credentials.

    Hook:
    (Makengknowcentz) yo i can do anything you do don’t get it confused
    (i4eigni) nah you will get you ego bruised challenging mine you will lose
    (mkc) nah nah bar for bar you get out spit, this spic,
    will leave you r.i.p then autograph the tombstone in script.
    (i4eigni) chill Holmes this mic fiend got 16's and bars,
    That will test you harder then when you wanted a green card.



    (mkc) nahhh
    My speech has malice, your diss weak and invalid,
    Expiration date so far past, your beef rancid with maggots
    Your type faggot... all out fudge packen...wet nap packets
    For when you put mouth where my cash is tossing salad.
    No side flip, never see your boy switch,
    When i put you in a box with "no ditch"
    Just spit scrabble... connecting the "i" in die and bitch.
    Tombstone how i put dirt on your name...believes this...
    Left in hallow grave like a vagina with an aborted fetus.
    Any rebuttals need less, but if you want to get touched,
    The one two punch, impact much harder, than Obama care.
    Verbal murder no second coming, but you will believe your there...
    This is not Mexico but you will Jesus everywhere.
    This lyrical warfare beat you 16's like a child neglecter,
    Son you, when i jack it... killing your future ancestor,
    Spit shots? As in full metal jackets,
    Fill clips with more loaded words than Winchester.
    But i did not take you serious... if i did it be over after the first period.
    Would a done more with 16 lines give at least some better wordplay?
    Instead I am just killing time this a drive bye on Morris day.
    A phony even your name sake sound like a mistake,
    Never fathered a style so what (Centz) sense do you make?
    The one my mom did be rapping with bars
    That will have him clinch up like orgasms,
    Then flinch so bad the twitch look like epileptic back spasms,
    This is skill you can’t fathom, got your ghostwriter channeling
    On a quiji chanting letting, loose the phantom,
    My DNA will crush your atoms,
    Make the bitch come out you like a rib from Adam.
    Trust you can get bust... think of lotion, a horny teen, and napkins.


    Hook:
    (Makengknowcentz) yo i can do anything you do don’t get it confused
    (i4eigni) nah you'll get you ego bruised challenging mine you'll lose
    (mkc) nah nah bar for bar you get out spit, this spic,
    will leave you r.i.p then autograph the tombstone in script.
    (i4eigni) chill Holmes this mic fiend got 16's and bars,
    That will test you harder then when you wanted a green card.


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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-re-All-I-Need



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    Last edited by makengknowcentz; April 19th, 2014 at 12:55 PM

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    @makengknowcentz nice work as usual... Thorough!!! I really hope you make it!!! Got an audio?

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    I'm working on an ideal idea problem is since both people are me I have to figure how to make him some different so that people who listen we'll figure out the same guy

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    uppin this

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    man i been battling for so long and to be honest your punches was mediocre to me man, your concepts is what was mediocre ..your flow and multis n shit was nice real nice, but your concepts was mediocre you got to work ont hat.. if u a punchline rapper then go to the league or front lines and battle itll hel you with your concepts

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    please advise more as far as punchlines concept i mean example

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    Re: bar battle (featuring I4EIGNI)

    Quote Originally Posted by makengknowcentz View Post
    please advise more as far as punchlines concept i mean example
    your concepts have either been done befroe alot or there uinder developed, you need to not throw every concept you think of into a verse just because you think of it doesnt mean its good always.. as i said your flow and everything was nice but your concepts was lacking as for examples go check out some of the big names of the site they have punches for days man you can learn alot by reading other peoples shit

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