Smog vs Blanco (Blanco Wins)

[King]

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[Blanco.]

Chech

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[Smog]

Chea

[Smog]

Back to that pic...

looks like u scramble fa rocks, I hit up gamblin spots, what u know about son,
We ain't gotta say he to broke fa "DOPE" - Casinos he ain't never been at one,
Wow! a double concept fa this troubled non vet that's plenty freaked when I speak,
So when "Blanco" goes in hispanic mode It don't mean crammin 20 deep in a jeep,
Ill bully this faggot on site, can't imagine real life but u must hate it son
Cuz this toilet people punk him n I'm just the next to dunk his face in one,
I gotta ILL job, bright future plus I move chronic by the brick,
We can't compare "movements" when urs is pushin um as the sonic drive up kid,
Don't vote on my shit,need ta worry bout ur crap first,
It takes a lil hard work but u know this cat ain't never came home wit his back hurt....
See duke, I'm hard as rock, u partially soft at best,
So if dude remains here, it's only what body parts r left.....

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[Blanco.]

you'll get beat up quick cuz you aint the type to be jugglin guns stupid
ill cave in ur ribs so far the cartels will start smuggling drugs through it
im bashin your skull off the solid concrete, BOOM! your dome is bangin
a brick will break in your head so bad..
..you could have it charged with home invasion
your a geek and i can tell from your avy you'd be scared inside prison
and THE WHOLE SITE sees through fog like we all wearing night vision
your played out, wack and basically another herb kid with dumb rhymes
stop it, the last time u saw a fresh bar he was merkin you in front lines
automatic weapons will take out ur uncles, cousins and just to be sure
we'll see how much your antimatter..
when i leave her bruised so dark nasa telescopes wont be able to see her
in a fight you wouldnt last a single round ill be quick to knock him down
and have smog spread out across the floor like a fuckin haunted house

[Packed Graves]

Opener, Hispanic - oddly I like them even though pretty played concepts.
Toilet & remains are used and abused nor did you bring a creative aspect towards them. I still must say this is by far the best I've seen you post smog.


Vs

Cartel, closer- you opened nicely and finished nicely.
Your in between bars were off you had fresh nameplay flips & just off the mark material. I thought you had this with the opener but you fell off drastically. You didn't post your best work here & it showed.



Vote smog

[Wordz AhGod.]

See duke, I'm hard as rock, u partially soft at best,
So if dude remains here, it's only what body parts r left.....

vs

you'll get beat up quick cuz you aint the type to be jugglin guns stupid
ill cave in ur ribs so far the cartels will start smuggling drugs through it
in a fight you wouldnt last a single round ill be quick to knock him down
and have smog spread out across the floor like a fuckin haunted house

v/Blaco for consistency

had no clue what Smog was even talking about half the time smh.

[SiK]

Smog...

Not bad at all..casinos has been done...toilet I aint seen. It was ok..movements was nice..and remains was dope


Blanco..

Opener was dope. Your best pair. ...break in has been done.. not feeling the rest actually accept the closer was nice


Based on consistency alone I gotta give this to smog. I was actually expecting this to go the other way but smog suprised me h er re. Blanco you came better against me so I know u got nicer bars than this.

V/ Smog

[MsPush]

I don't even know if I'm supposed to vote.. But uh both y'all need to go back to the drawing board. Blanco opener was the best line in all. No shade foreal tho.

Vote: Blanco


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[Fresh]

looks like u scramble fa rocks, I hit up gamblin spots, what u know about son,
We ain't gotta say he to broke fa "DOPE" - Casinos he ain't never been at one,
forced, not great opener
Wow! a double concept fa this troubled non vet that's plenty freaked when I speak,
So when "Blanco" goes in hispanic mode It don't mean crammin 20 deep in a jeep,
Nice flip Smog..
Ill bully this faggot on site, can't imagine real life but u must hate it son
Cuz this toilet people punk him n I'm just the next to dunk his face in one,
again decent flip bro..
I gotta ILL job, bright future plus I move chronic by the brick,
We can't compare "movements" when urs is pushin um as the sonic drive up kid,
mehh not feeling this so much
Don't vote on my shit,need ta worry bout ur crap first,
It takes a lil hard work but u know this cat ain't never came home wit his back hurt....
concept is there but wording is holding you back
See duke, I'm hard as rock, u partially soft at best,
So if dude remains here, it's only what body parts r left.....
Nice

vs

you'll get beat up quick cuz you aint the type to be jugglin guns stupid
ill cave in ur ribs so far the cartels will start smuggling drugs through it
Nice
im bashin your skull off the solid concrete, BOOM! your dome is bangin
a brick will break in your head so bad..
..you could have it charged with home invasion
nah
your a geek and i can tell from your avy you'd be scared inside prison
and THE WHOLE SITE sees through fog like we all wearing night vision
Not feeling this
your played out, wack and basically another herb kid with dumb rhymes
stop it, the last time u saw a fresh bar he was merkin you in front lines
Ok flip, been done before tho
automatic weapons will take out ur uncles, cousins and just to be sure
we'll see how much your antimatter..
when i leave her bruised so dark nasa telescopes wont be able to see her
Streeetched.. Concept was cool, wording was horrible tho
in a fight you wouldnt last a single round ill be quick to knock him down
and have smog spread out across the floor like a fuckin haunted house
This was cool

I've got one more quotable from Smog.. This is close as shit but Smog you had some nice flips w/ wordplay in em you definitely starting to get the feel for this. Blanco I've seen you go better than this, you had a couple concepts that were cool but were executed poorly, if you had have executed one more concept better this could have gone the other way..

v/Smog

[Foul]

Smoh-ok verse. Opener was ehh,2nd meh again setup was weak,3rd was lolish,4th I didnt get...closer was weak. Seen better from u.

Blanco-first was weak,2nd was good,third u fuked up the wording but nice concept. 4th was decent 5th was a terrible bar wich u shudnt do ever again. Damn,ive seen u come way harder before.

V/ blanco by 1 line

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[Foul]

Missed 1 line from each ...stil doesnt effect my vote

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[Smog]

Lmao... It's kinda funny hahahaga. Y'all r cool man but that movements line means move mints right??? Like sonic does.... Oh shut Iunno why that cracks me up but yo king erase this shut lmao

[Letterman]

Wow! a double concept fa this troubled non vet that's plenty freaked when I speak,
So when "Blanco" goes in hispanic mode It don't mean crammin 20 deep in a jeep,
See duke, I'm hard as rock, u partially soft at best,
So if dude remains here, it's only what body parts r left.....

Vs

you'll get beat up quick cuz you aint the type to be jugglin guns stupid
ill cave in ur ribs so far the cartels will start smuggling drugs through it

After reading Smog's verse, I was kinda sure that Blanco would take it but I was wrong. I almost quoted antimatter but it's kinda forced so it doesn't sit well with me. Didn't like home invasion. Smog nameplays are pretty played and those werent among the better flips that I've seen. The fresh reference is veryyyy played. As for smog, I'm not going back up to read your verse so I can explain it bit by bit, but the ones I quoted were cool.

v/Smog

[Blanco.]

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