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    All Apologies Ft. Venom

    The haterz have always gotta follow me
    But see soon it will be all apologies
    When I spit a flow so diabolically
    Demolishing the phonies psychotically
    Until their sense of self melts by all the heat
    Their Reputation I am abolishing
    When I am done I will have them groveling
    Coddling my every move and swallowing
    Their ego and using every excuse to
    Depict themselves as the new hero
    Of text but I got news to put them in check
    They must be confused if they think I respect
    Any dude who would change their views to collect
    Credit not due and I reject their drops too
    I'm a hostile with exceedingly good Rep
    I bet my sick schemes have you lost and upset
    That's what you get for crossing the boss of a flex

    All apologies but there's not stopping me from dropping chronically
    Diseases and plagues with these words mimicking your favored mythology
    Flow bionically, you can find the wanted man where the booze and brothels be
    I'll smash your favorite rapper in battle until his cells are split atomically
    You won't hear another sorry from me, After I'm done shredding this rhyme
    Because I haven't patience or time for your cry lyricists; You'll find
    I'm not hearing the negativity, the bullshit, or the whines from your kind
    The kind who prays to the divine but won't change their frame of mind
    For betterment, around here success ain't never heaven sent
    You gotta go out and hustle to get until your wit and your muscles are spent
    You can never relent, If you want to know the extent Of pleasure and true happiness
    Which only a man without regret knows, I'll die a man with few friends and many foes
    For spitting Truth in my countless rhymes and written flows!
    All Apologies

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    Re: All Apologies Ft. Venom

    both complimant each other well in a way it remind me of sheik and styles collab on the walk with me album every aspect was there includding fading simplicity to complexity... a great read like to see more from both of u

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    Re: All Apologies Ft. Venom

    This was pretty good, Venom and Truth Iscariot. Good blemished text drop, with nice one-liners and schemes. Good lines, and rhymes scattered across here. Good spacious subtle rhyming with good concise mannerism and forte'. Everything seems well appointed, and thought out. Good work, nice one. Keep writing!!!!

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