Fucks with me - cause I'm just gonna post it!

[CLA919]

The price of diamonds is too high, if that means someone has offered their life to get that diamond to you… and I ain’t righteous, just got a heart.

I don’t have to experience pain, I can experience it through the eyez…

It is possible, to have TOO much compassion, it’s my only weakness.


Fucks with Me


Sould, no, just never given a chance
All I hear is this is your last dance
What one would do for love, BUT
What if it’s not the same love we speak of
How can you diss a representation of yourself
How can you hate yourself but love your wealth?
Self hate,
Fuck that baby,
Whose anyone to make us lessons out of their debate
Everyone has an opinion
Everyone’s someone’s minion
What can come of kings and queens with summer dreams deferred
Queens that scream off with their head
The ones that ain’t happy unless someones dead
Or Kings that get shot down for visions of peace?
Or how about the ones proud to hang that Jesus Piece
I lean back, I bop, I sway back and forth, and sometimes I just stand still with my back to the wall
So tell me all, what we gotta to do so we all can ball?
Judge me for the business that raised me, corporate, ah no
Yeah, I learned my morals clocking that blow
On these friendly streets, evil is as evil meets
SO Business as us-u-al
Visions so real ask Peter Bruigel
Believe me, believe history, or believe what you tell me?
Believe in yourself, or believe in all you can be like the Army
They didn’t even wait and generation before they distorted it
For what?
I just came home and targeted it
If history is distorted what’s their left to believe
Fuck it, I wear my heart on my sleeve
But that don’t mean I am stupid enough to go back
But it can be a reason for my attack
Power to the people or we take it back
All your stupid laws HOUSE, keep my president black
History is doomed to repeat itself unless our mistakes are corrected
What you all really wanna see Jesus resurrected?
Really? Not me, sorry for that I ain’t got 9 lives, I ain’t a cat.
What would you do if you came back and got fucked for every person you ever stood for
You think shit is gonna be sweet like it was before?
Black Friday? White sheets? Devils are now wearing cleats?
What if they obey? For you all to torture them anyway?
What if only for a day we lived in reverse
For then who would bestow the gift and the curse
What if you were resurrected into exactly what you hated
And you still chose to hate the flip side that was debated?
Would Jesus come back and save the day – well if you called him all I could do is pray.
But I don’t really expect any of you all to comprehend these words that I say.

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[makengknowcentz]

More complex I see multi and baby punches u r uppin each rhyme I will return to break it down better but u building quick good job

[ARebeL]

i dont think this was bad. It was pretty simple though and you had some line you could of thought threw a little better like "Not me, sorry for that I ain’t got 9 lives, I ain’t a cat." thats very simple like saying im hot as the sun or cold as the winter. try thinking more complex but overall it was okay.