WK2: Packed Graves 0-1 vs Smog 0-1(PG WINS)

[Wordz AhGod.]

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@Packed Graves
@Smog

[Packed Graves]

Posting soon, sorry.

[Smog]

My bad I'm here

[Packed Graves]

@Smog when you want to post?

[Smog]

Ready whenever

[Smog]

One swing bada bing, this punk graves may take ten,
But when I hit u it's over Packed.. Like u brought 6 outfits on a 1 day vacation..

[Packed Graves]

your wife's a slut, her pussy is wetter then a rain storm
after i smash the bitch, 'best grab hurricane how im leaving the frame torn

light-work, 2ez.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Smog had a good flip on a played concept but his setup was ass. PG had a less played concept and flipped it well and transitioned it nicely.

V/packed graves

[Amen]

One swing bada bing, this punk graves may take ten,
But when I hit u it's over Packed.. Like u brought 6 outfits on a 1 day vacation..

Nameflip idea's been done, I've seen a few and recently I believe GOW used something closely related. Not feelin' the whole simile used, think you could have did more w/ the idea. However, I feel your punch would have landed more effectively if your set up helped. A lot of people sleep on set up lines as well as don't use them. In most cases you see a lot of people et ups have NOTHING too do w/ the punch itself and normally just toss in filler which IMO is stupid. A weak punch can be dope/fire if set up correctly.

your wife's a slut, her pussy is wetter then a rain storm
after i smash the bitch, 'best grab hurricane how im leaving the frame torn

Slight reach but works. Seen this WP/concept used in this same fashion a few times. I think the wordin needed just a little tweakin', it was kind of rough but I got the message.

OVERALL: I got PG takin' this w/ a cleaner and more effective punch. Cool 1-2 face off, gents.

v/ Packed Graves

[KnowP]

good battle. PG had a solid stinger. Smogs was coo but it didnt out do his opponents.

v. pg

[Joe Boston]

Smogs setup definitely hurt him here. I've seen the hurricane wordplay flip done but overall it was displayed nicely.

V/Packed Graves

[The Infamous]

V.Graves/nice wordplay, couldve ended better but it was enough to win

[graf-x]

v/ graves --- his punchline hit harder and wordplay was clever. cool punch... and smog - i think concept felt forced to me, it was a good try though, just didnt connect.