@Mac.
check.. if he no shows -- ill go against someone else who checked vs a no show.. if they and you are cool with it
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Why everyone thinks im gonna noshow lol.. Check
@mic s
just like i grab your rap n spit on it ill grab your bones and make a collar
seriously man, your rap has been dead for so long time you'd think it died from cholera
I grab the Mac . make the barrel steam, penetrate him with shots like its em' bare'assing
but he's no grizzly,
i got the mac forced down doing a bear walk, since he about as aggressive as barenstein
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Mac your bar wasn't even really apunch.. I have never heard someone grabbing bones to make a collar so the set up was weak, and the punchline was too statementish. Nothing to attack the opponent hard.
Mic S you at least attempted wordplay but it came off a little gay lmao. But you actually had more of a proper punch, it wasn't a great bunch by any means but it was enough to grab the dub.
v/mic s
mac your punch didn't rhyme well and it threw the whole thing off. Mic S your punch wasn't bad, just way too wordy, need to condense the shit out of that homie. It messes the flow up and when you got so many lines.
v/mic s
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Mac- best bet is probably retire or get your little brother away from the keyboard- you been here to long to criticize nicely.
Mic s- decent at best youve improved which is the bright side.
vote- mic
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Collar bruh, cholera
V mic s
Collarbone, smh... Set up was weird and poorly worded. Punch concept was there but lacked the proper execution.Originally Posted by Mac.
Really wordy dude. I felt as if I was reading a short story before getting to the punch, try and shorten your bars man, sometimes jot it down and word it a couple different ways till it reads nice and smooth. Bare/bear plays are extremely outdated as well and have been done to death no matter how you try and flip it.
Anyways, Statement vs Played concept/Punch attempt, I have to give it too...
v/mic s
Macs punch was not good at all, Mic was decent but was worded bad..
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