You Got A Friend

[Pair-A-Dyce]

http://www.pairadyce.com/wp-content/...t-A-Friend.mp3

I spent days redoing this mix, I will remix it more later, got other stuff to do.

Links:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...85#post8614885
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Updated mix

[Oxymoron]

I was digging this, was like some neptunes steeze.

Ha, flowing dope. in comparison to the hook, i think the verses makes quite an impact. Suttle scratching on the track too, always dope. Im not too sure if the hook feels a little long. But it sounds all good for the most part, i liked the verses.

[Nahlidge]

@Pair-A-Dyce my bad I didn't get to peep this when you emailed it, I was gonna listen to it today but I seen you posted it so I figured I'd wait and check it on here. It sounds like you're breaking out of your comfort zone more and more with these last 2 tracks man. And I'm digging it. Only thing on this that I would say is add another layer to the last 1-2 times you repeat the hook to add a change. Thought it was funny that @it's Moist pointed that out cuz I was thinking somebody might think it's a little long lol. But I like not following regular song format. So I think if you add another layer to give it a change up a little it'll be good. Dope verses on this joint. And I liked the hook.

[Pair-A-Dyce]

Yeah the beat had all the drums in at the end so I was thinking of adding a bridge, but now that I'm sitting here typing about it, I have an idea on how to change it up.

Thanks

[SmashoneTheGod]

Def something diff....like son said this sounds like vintage Neptunes...sounds almost just like that single they had on their first album...remember the name of the joint?....now i'm gonna have to go check for that title...anyways I like the production and the flows on point...not typically my kind of joint but I go toward anything different so it was cool....I do think something could have been done diff with the ending of the joint but overall it was solid...

[mal diction]

dope neptunes selection .... overall this is dope ... not much i can say really... you did your thing

[Cody Nash]

I love this beat, man. Really cool how you tackled this. That Neptunes shit, though! Haha.. The hook is sick. Your spitting surprised me. You remind me of a cross between like... K-Os and Lupe Fiasco. Haha... I was super into this. I'm definitely going to replay this a few times without a doubt my dude. We should get on something together. Hit me up...



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[Mr. Write]

Yeah beat was definitely dope. flow was perfect for this track. upbeat with good energy. Production value was real slick. Only thing i would say could use some improvement is the hook, it did feel a little long. Overall though man, this is one of my favorite tracks ive heard from you. Scratching on the beat was dope too, dont know if u had any hand in that but i liked it.

[mal diction]

the beat is a neptunes track @Mr. Write

[schizmatic]

This was cool, different. I remember using that neptunes sound when I started making beats 10 years ago in FL studio. Brings back memories. Why aren't the artists on this site into engineers and professional vocals/mixes? Regardless thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.

Now it my thread.

[Pair-A-Dyce]

This was cool, different. I remember using that neptunes sound when I started making beats 10 years ago in FL studio. Brings back memories. Why aren't the artists on this site into engineers and professional vocals/mixes? Regardless thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it.

Now it my thread.

I was an audio engineer for about a year. I have credits on this album https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tha_Thug_Show

[YungDosia]

the mix on this was tight... and quality was good. i really didn't like the beginning, but when u start rapping i was vining to it and liked it... but not feel in the chorus. overall dope track g!

[Pair-A-Dyce]

Here slave @Emilyinthepool

[Emily]

Here slave @Emilyinthepool

Who told you, 'treat Em mean, keep Em keen' worked for me?
Fine. I will check it, Master, and drop a few thoughts in a moment.

[Emily]

Nice intro into this track. Cool vocals, I'm used to that now.
Oh the rapping's nice. Nice extension of voice. Nice Rrrrrrr'ing to certain words lol.
On point with delivery of lyrics, your pace is great.
I like that you change the direction of your voice in the versus, giving it more
character and personality. Oh, nice lil bit of scratching there lol, just heard that.
Ok, I liked this. Personally, I preferred the rapping more than the chorus, just thought it
had a gutsy vibe about it, you know, words flipped and launched and spat really well.
Good job Pair-A-Dyce.

Nice one.