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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    this was tight man. I thinkt he quality was distorting a little ont he vocals and some semi slurs which were still audible. but other than that, solid bars throughout and i like your flow. Beets cool too, type a shit i like to flow over. would listen again

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    @...Celph Taut do a hook! I agree with Moist, the distorted vocals was a little set back, but that doesn't diminish the skill and effort you put into this. It sounds like a nice lil interlude track since it doesn't have a hook, if it had a hook it would be a nice track.

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    This was fucking dope son! Why you ever went on that Hiatus I never fucking know. I don't agree with the vocals being 'distorted' because I heard you just fine and it was that 'raw' mix that complimented the instrumental.. which btw.. was fucking FIREE. This was dope man! I just wished you left a part on this for me asshole!!
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    I nominate this for SOTW btw
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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    @Pair-A-Dyce @it's Moist

    Audio of the Week?


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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    I thought I changed the tag in the thread title a few days ago @ILLunatic ??

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pair-A-Dyce View Post
    I thought I changed the tag in the thread title a few days ago @ILLunatic ??
    Make sure you posting in the thread too. When I looked at Thread History it just shows that you edited the thread, doesn't say what you did. I know on a few of these older Thread Prefixes they were never modified so that ONLY staff could attach them. Dont want to give someone an award if they added the prefix to it.


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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    Quote Originally Posted by ILLunatic View Post
    Make sure you posting in the thread too. When I looked at Thread History it just shows that you edited the thread, doesn't say what you did. I know on a few of these older Thread Prefixes they were never modified so that ONLY staff could attach them. Dont want to give someone an award if they added the prefix to it.

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    I thought this was a tight little track Celph, somehow not what I was expecting, though I don't know what I was expecting, so... I could just be too stoned... liking the vibe of it

    ...some good shit, like my weed lol
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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    Only thing holding this back is your enunciation.. it got real sloppy and slurry at times.. Gotta work on that shit.. I'm the same..got a heavy tongue.. your flow is dope cuz of the rhyme schemes..reminds me of Az at times. dope beat.. yeah your enunciation is really holding you back man.

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    checking this....whoa mix could use some work some eqing and desser maybe......riding beat nicely...beat real grimy i like that...good multis on here, nice use of mutlis....some good punches as well....a change up of flow would have been nice here got a bit repetitive....or maybe a hook

    overall this was pretty cool the mix of the vocals kind of hurt it though maybe re record this in a nice studio setting and this would be much better in my opinion keep it up tho and congrats on TOTW

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    Song usnt showing up?

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    Re: Clark Gable (Freeverse)

    This was great. Nice voice and flow. I wish it was longer, and a hook would have been cool, but as it stands,
    its still hot.
    Great stuff. I really liked the style and personality in this.
    Good job.


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