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@Joe Boston
Vs
@Greedy$
Check ins due by Wednesday, December 24th 2014 11:59PM EST
Verses due Monday, December 29th 2014 11:59PM EST
16 - 20 lines.
ALL FL RULES APPLY
Joe boston
Greedy$
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@Joe Boston
Vs
@Greedy$
Check ins due by Wednesday, December 24th 2014 11:59PM EST
Verses due Monday, December 29th 2014 11:59PM EST
16 - 20 lines.
ALL FL RULES APPLY
word @Greedy$ 16 or 20 my man
16 is cool
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
@Joe Boston sent 14 to @Fresh
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Joe don't even sweat jerks lame ass tatics you'll only get murked
This blade will hack ur face quicker then lizard squad after the play station network
You need more perks in the bedroom your sex game leaves bitches yawning
Claim u have skills till u free style on em like Izzy did on Sway In The Morning
I'm scorning ur reputation in the streets I'll beat u till u beg no more
After punches overwork that body ur gonna wish u voted yes on Question 4 (Your from mass. youll understand bitch!)
I'm inches deep in ur whore she's loving the dick there's no denying
When I get a hold of that big apple you'll be out of a job like Rex Ryan
Have u prying the teeth from ur jaw if ever I'm in that Voilent mood
Beat me? I don't think u cancer ill rob all ur money and donate it to St Judes
Your quick to reject a feud rather attack verbal then go n ditch the pen
Come strapped with four nines then leave ur dead carcass with Harbaugh over in Michigan
Me n ur girl can take it to the kitchen then by the look on grill u feel awful
I'll impregnate her till her eggo n form my seed then have ur bitch ass making us waffles
@Fresh open for votes!
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
"Wasn't strong man still have that wording I gotta improve"
RB's gonna get thrown some light fines, and provide training so Joe can write rhymes
Wording makes his trash drops a bloody waste that violates OSHA guidelines
Most ppl would improve after 4 yrs, but you've gotten worse, geek
ur record' s like the final score of a wack game, n even that don't make a Boston vs Heat
We talked about making this a hot battle. But prolly shoulda saved the convo
With Boston there's no point..its almost like his text career just traded Rondo
Bitches get light headed n blush when they see me. My presence gets these groupie thots flirting
Ull get Bitches weak in the knees...after the tranquilisers, sedatives and roofies start working
Ur a snitch from the block I was flippin them rocks on..u barely left from the stoop...
Except when I ran to cop bundles...you ran to cop cars to tell um the scoop
He ain't ever did no goon shit. This chubby faggot is a total fake to me
RB could have a real nigga roll call, and you'd go get the number to ur local bakery
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
I never been to the Somerville one heard it was a good tho never knew if it shut down or not. I used to box out of Quincy yrs ago they just shut down too got raised for drugs n shit. There's one is Dorchester, and two in South Boston. I usually go to the George Foreman one on the weekends shits madd expensive though but they do day passes n shit I work in the area so dude hooks me up. There's one called the L st boxing club in south boston shits only a hundred for the yr.
He's an amateur boxer, but if I throw hands with this fraudster, I'll end up murkin son
Closest he'll get to being a golden glove, is when I drop his as quicker than a verse for one
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
oe don't even sweat jerks lame ass tatics you'll only get murked
This blade will hack ur face quicker then lizard squad after the play station network
Hack ur face doesn't work so well with lizard group hacking playstation. If the wording was tweaked it could have possibly worked, but this falls flat
You need more perks in the bedroom your sex game leaves bitches yawning
Claim u have skills till u free style on em like Izzy did on Sway In The Morning
Nah to simple
I'm scorning ur reputation in the streets I'll beat u till u beg no more
After punches overwork that body ur gonna wish u voted yes on Question 4 (Your from mass. youll understand bitch!)
I have no idea
I'm inches deep in ur whore she's loving the dick there's no denying
When I get a hold of that big apple you'll be out of a job like Rex Ryan
Not feelin this
Have u prying the teeth from ur jaw if ever I'm in that Voilent mood
Beat me? I don't think u cancer ill rob all ur money and donate it to St Judes
This was weird
Your quick to reject a feud rather attack verbal then go n ditch the pen
Come strapped with four nines then leave ur dead carcass with Harbaugh over in Michigan
Not feelin it
Me n ur girl can take it to the kitchen then by the look on grill u feel awful
I'll impregnate her till her eggo n form my seed then have ur bitch ass making us waffles
This was ok
vs
B's gonna get thrown some light fines, and provide training so Joe can write rhymes
Wording makes his trash drops a bloody waste that violates OSHA guidelines
Decent hit
Most ppl would improve after 4 yrs, but you've gotten worse, geek
ur record' s like the final score of a wack game, n even that don't make a Boston vs Heat
ok
We talked about making this a hot battle. But prolly shoulda saved the convo
With Boston there's no point..its almost like his text career just traded Rondo
Nahh
Bitches get light headed n blush when they see me. My presence gets these groupie thots flirting
Ull get Bitches weak in the knees...after the tranquilisers, sedatives and roofies start working
ok
Ur a snitch from the block I was flippin them rocks on..u barely left from the stoop...
Except when I ran to cop bundles...you ran to cop cars to tell um the scoop
Not feelin this
He ain't ever did no goon shit. This chubby faggot is a total fake to me
RB could have a real nigga roll call, and you'd go get the number to ur local bakery
lol ok
He's an amateur boxer, but if I throw hands with this fraudster, I'll end up murkin son
Closest he'll get to being a golden glove, is when I drop his as quicker than a verse for one
This was cool
Joe you had the closer which I thought was ok, but other then that it was all misses for me. I think some of these concepts had potential, but some seemed like they shoulda been scrapped. Sayin ur gonna leave someones dead carcass with Harbaugh over in michigan isn't a punch. Its too statementish.
Anyway, I've got Greedy takin this.
v/Greedy$
No it's not if u got the fucking 49ers reference and btw that weak in the knees punch has been done stop quoting old shit. st Jude's is a cancer society for children understand the fucking wordplay.
Last edited by Lamb Chawhp; December 31st, 2014 at 09:46 AM
lmaoOriginally Posted by Joe Boston
I got the wordplay
cancer / can sir lmaoooo thats fucking garbage man. Don't get mad at me because you can't even form a decent punch.
Yeah I understand people do can sir punches but I've never seen a st Jude's reference on it anyway we ain't gonna get on people's way of forming punches Lol. Close this bullshit happy fucking new year
@Fresh
can u edit "RB's" into the first word of my opener?
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Joe......nothing stuck out in your verse, man. I've seen you drop much better than this. How you made it to the Champ Match with a verse like this is disappointing. Your wording is soft and the concepts are meh. Sorry man, but this was not a good verse.
Greedy$.....I've seen you come better as well but you had a few cool lines in there that I liked. I thought the Boston vs. Heat line was dope, easily LOTB. Not your best work, but you didn't need your best. Cool verse.
V/ Greedy$ in a landslide that could destroy entire cities.
Aight... This wasn't great.
Joe... None of your bars were really clever man. The playstation bar could have went a dif rout and Rex Ryan to. I know you stay up to date but u had no puns and just came generic tbh. I think u dog to deep with your concepts and that kills you.
Greedy...opener was aight I've seen OSHA bars before. Thought boston vs heat was dope tbo. Liked weak in the knees. Roll call was ok. I though rondo bar was garbage and the scoop bar was generic really.
Over one sided here. Joe had some ok concepts just didn't execute them well. Simple as that.
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Most ppl would improve after 4 yrs, but you've gotten worse, geek
ur record' s like the final score of a wack game, n even that don't make a Boston vs Heat
Bitches get light headed n blush when they see me. My presence gets these groupie thots flirting
Ull get Bitches weak in the knees...after the tranquilisers, sedatives and roofies start working
He ain't ever did no goon shit. This chubby faggot is a total fake to me
RB could have a real nigga roll call, and you'd go get the number to ur local bakery
Landslide victory imo, JB the idea for the whole lizard group hack was actually nice and creative but the way u did that whole bar was bad, I think u couldve put more thought into it honestly,U ain't bring ya A-Game here, Greed I feel u had some lines u couldve trashed but Overall ya drop was Good, that Boston verse heat bar was crackkk & That weak in the knees bar was nice. v/Greedy
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