Champ Match: Barcotic (5-1) vs Galactic (5-1) (Barcotic Wins)

[ILLunatic]

LLL
Season 18

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Deadlines
Check-Ins: Tuesday by 11:59 PM EST
Verses: Thursday by 11:59 PM EST
Voting: Saturday by 11:59 PM EST

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Minimum – 10
Maximum – 20
Must agree in your Check-In’s

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Pic Battle Option
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[Barcotic]

16-20

[Tic]

In.

[Barcotic]

he ain't ready



Gala' tries to test this but the don says the geek is sorted
I see Gallimimus legends, but his concepts are prehistoric
I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's
maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it
damage? that u didn't.. u don't rhyme w/ the ingredients
any Pryor fire u had before this died in '05 with the comedian
fuck ur little peasant shit, it's evident ur present shit is ugly
there's no Space for u at the top, Galileo beating on lenox if he's lucky
ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon

[Tic]

Barcotic / Cronus

gut feeling tj won't show
say it ain't so @orc

u n I both know that won't happen, I'm down but I doubt orc will be

orc is stargazing with a leprechaun atm, but I hope he shows

@Orc
less than an hour homey u gonna make it?

I bet you'd suck him off, faggot..& lick sperm too
I swear it’s like every time he even THINKS about Orc his dick turns blue
After a longgg harddd day @ work I thought of drinkin a bit…
So I walked into a Bar & he said he’d drink me under the table, while lickin his lips
You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement
This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers

Barcotic vs. ill nik-A - NIK WINS

When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
You can’t get ya girl Aroused, but she raves how my dick’s absurd
S’like we’re meant to be the way her Clit gives the Middle Finger when I Flip the Bird
All my Angles are killer, that’s why they call ‘em a boss
You have a Self Inflicted approach that would turn most respected Coroner’s off

damn yall didn’t even have my bandwidth line in top punches.. or verse in runner ups?
/screwjob
Idc tho, not mad lol

You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat

[Attack of the Muff]

Gala' tries to test this but the don says the geek is sorted
I see Gallimimus legends, but his concepts are prehistoric
(you know how I feel about this. not feeling because its an obscure reference)
I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
(pretty cool not all that but pretty good)
ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
(pretty cool like this better than previous slightly better)
think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's
(lol nice)
maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it
(nice again. dope n direct wording..funny way u tied it in at the end..thats vintage barcotic)
damage? that u didn't.. u don't rhyme w/ the ingredients
any Pryor fire u had before this died in '05 with the comedian
(pretty cool same as ur 2nd bar)
fuck ur little peasant shit, it's evident ur present shit is ugly
there's no Space for u at the top, Galileo beating on lenox if he's lucky
(thought it was forced until I pronounced it out loud like 5 times..i like this)
ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon
(dated but ok flip. ok close)

bet you'd suck him off, faggot..& lick sperm too
I swear it’s like every time he even THINKS about Orc his dick turns blue
(thought this would be better considering the quotes. kinda eh concept. easy. but the execution was ok. therefore..avg open)
After a longgg harddd day @ work I thought of drinkin a bit…
So I walked into a Bar & he said he’d drink me under the table, while lickin his lips
(ok..seen under the table lines before..but the lickin his lips part was pretty cool...another decent line)
You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement
(My cro be all big now...LMFAO UMM LOTB)
This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
(nice)




Barcotic vs. ill nik-A - NIK WINS When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
(lmfao this one hits home to me..i came up on Zelda)
You can’t get ya girl Aroused, but she raves how my dick’s absurd
S’like we’re meant to be the way her Clit gives the Middle Finger when I Flip the Bird
(iono not feeling this one. if her clit gives the middle finger how are yall meant to be? I like where u were going but I think this one misses)
All my Angles are killer, that’s why they call ‘em a boss
You have a Self Inflicted approach that would turn most respected Coroner’s off
(ehhh below avg. )





Quote Originally Posted by Barcotic

damn yall didn’t even have my bandwidth line in top punches.. or verse in runner ups?
/screwjob
Idc tho, not mad lol
You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat
(decent close)

wooooow this was close. ok for starts ...two different approaches. on one hand we have barcotic who is the epitome of flawless wording...and on the other we have galactic who is somewhat like me...creative with nice tie ins. hold on let me look at my breakdown to determine a winner......FUCK

while barcotic was more consistent..galactic had the better lines imo but more misses. FUCK YOU GUYS FOR MAKING THIS SO DIFFICULT. maybe if I do a quoteable vs thing itll help hold on.

ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's
maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it

vs

You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement
This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game


8-6

but fuck the Zelda game and my cro be all big was slightly better than barcotics 2 best lines

still since im at such an impasse..ill have to stick with what I did to come to this conclusion and that will be


v/ Barcotic by the smallest pubic hair imaginable

CLosest battle ive read on ANY site by far in a LOOONG time

[Packed Graves]

Bar 1: wasn't really feeling either of the bars, Barcs didn't pronounce properly & gal was kind of corny. Not a great way to start but not the worst. Barc attempted a new name flip & gal attempted a decent personal. Tie

Bar 2: four gone confusion was cool kind of generic @ the same time. Walked into a bar was pretty cool but again another dick/suck/gay play which has happened twice already. I've got this bar going to Gal for creativity.

Bar 3: over board was bland as well & could've been used on any one, it was a creative aspect to a played concept but still not a haymaker. Microbial came off very forced to me, I get it his name is Mike but still doesn't read right unless I purposely say it wrong. Barc takes this for better connection.

Bar 4: wasn't feeling Barcs line at all tbh, bar prison plays have been around before you. Olympic swimmers was new & fresh with the creative aspect just lacked harshness. For better connection & concept Gal.

Bar 5: Palm piss was just odd to me, it lacked sting & was hard to grasp. I'm guessing you where going for pompous cause Ive never heard of Palm piss either way doesn't work. Tunic was fire & so far lotb can't say there was a flaw in it. Gal takes this one easy.

Bar 6: Pryor Fire was cool but again pretty generic & could've been used towards anyone you faced, in championship battles this won't work, especially not vs good competition you gotta get more gritty & personal. @Galactic this is the 4 dick reference you have used in 6 bars. Not a bad play but kind of lacked sting with the concept. Barc with a better concept/creativity.

Bar 7: Galileo was nice feel you could've have tied it in a lot better with out the lenox tid bit. By far your best bar in this verse. Self inflicted approach was cool but at the same time pretty generic, still a good concept & punch but not enough to win the bar. Barc takes this.

Bar 8: winning argon was cool but again very generic & lacked the sting an delivery.lost your cool drop heat was cool, decent personal & connection nothing over the top but none the less solid. Gal takes this one slightly.



Overall: not a bad battle at all was very close, Barc didn't pick up speed til the third bar even though both started off pretty slow. Both had 2 very nice bars & it ended with a 4-3-1 score edging it to Gal.

[$pitacular]

Gala' tries to test this but the don says the geek is sorted
I see Gallimimus legends, but his concepts are prehistoric
Weird, weird attempt at a wordplay with really obscure reference
I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
OK play on a very old idiom
ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
This was your best punch of the battle
think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's
It's pronounced "con-jew-gull" so.. no
maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it
another weird attempt with a reference that makes no sense to me
damage? that u didn't.. u don't rhyme w/ the ingredients
any Pryor fire u had before this died in '05 with the comedian
set up was wack and had nothing to do with the punch, which was too predictable the way you wrote it. Didn't hit for me
fuck ur little peasant shit, it's evident ur present shit is ugly
there's no Space for u at the top, Galileo beating on lenox if he's lucky
another poor attempt at a reaching wordplay. It's pronounced "Gal-ill-lay-yo" not whatever you're trying to do
ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon
decent wordplay but poorly executed

Not sure what happened this week bro, you're by far one of my favorite textcees on the net but you went off the deep end here. Way too obscure, odd references and wordplays that were really reaching. Hopefully just an off week and not a new trend, I'd hate to see you style change up, you usually bring the fire.

vs

I bet you'd suck him off, faggot..& lick sperm too
I swear it’s like every time he even THINKS about Orc his dick turns blue
I laughed hard bro this was ingenious
After a longgg harddd day @ work I thought of drinkin a bit…
So I walked into a Bar & he said he’d drink me under the table, while lickin his lips
really bro? you don't remember my 'Bar/Drink you under the table' punch from the Champ Match 2 Weeks ago??
You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement
helluva reach. when you take the time to really dissect it, it's funny but this was not executed well.
This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
this was a better wordplay. I liked this one
When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
this was OK, not real hard, I mean how is this insulting? witty tho, I'll give you that
You can’t get ya girl Aroused, but she raves how my dick’s absurd
S’like we’re meant to be the way her Clit gives the Middle Finger when I Flip the Bird
LOTB. Dope.
All my Angles are killer, that’s why they call ‘em a boss
You have a Self Inflicted approach that would turn most respected Coroner’s off
meh. Not hitting
You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat
this was almost LOTB. Nice closer.

You had a couple of nice hits in there.. which Barcotic didn't.. originally when I read Bar's verse last night I immediately knew he lost.. however the fact that you either forgot about my Bar/Drink you under the table punch (which was way better than yours bro) from the CHAMP MATCH 2 WEEKS AGO or thought no one would catch it was amature at best, faggish at worst. You won as far as the better verse, but I refuse to vote for someone who is so blatantly flipping my own lines from two weeks ago. There's too much of that kind of d/r voting going on and I refuse to vote for work that is not original. Bar you got hella lucky on this one because that was the worst verse I've ever read from you.

v/ Barcotic

[Joe Boston]

Barcotic

Gala' tries to test this but the don says the geek is sorted
I see Gallimimus legends, but his concepts are prehistoric
ok good nameplay flip here

I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
this was tough here dope direct punch nice multi rhyme scheme

ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
lol nice flip

think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's
the nameplay attempt was creative I got it but I can see people saying this was a little reach Con u Gal

maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it
lol nice wordplay

damage? that u didn't.. u don't rhyme w/ the ingredients
any Pryor fire u had before this died in '05 with the comedian
ok

fuck ur little peasant shit, it's evident ur present shit is ugly
there's no Space for u at the top, Galileo beating on lenox if he's lucky
wasn't feeling this nameplay flip

ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon
ok

Gal

I bet you'd suck him off, faggot..& lick sperm too
I swear it’s like every time he even THINKS about Orc his dick turns blue
nah too basic for me

After a longgg harddd day @ work I thought of drinkin a bit…
So I walked into a Bar & he said he’d drink me under the table, while lickin his lips
lmfao

You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement
ok cool nameplay

This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
nah wasn't feeling this

When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
ok cool personal nice np/wp reference

You can’t get ya girl Aroused, but she raves how my dick’s absurd
S’like we’re meant to be the way her Clit gives the Middle Finger when I Flip the Bird
felt u could've worded this better

All my Angles are killer, that’s why they call ‘em a boss
You have a Self Inflicted approach that would turn most respected Coroner’s off
ok

You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat
nah

I felt Barcotic was more creative here he had some good nameplays and wordplays his 2nd and 3rd bar were pretty dope and the palm piss line had humor factor. Gal 2nd bar had me dying though. Microbial and Zelda were pretty cool. I just felt Barcotic was more consistent his creativity stood out more.

V/Barcotic

[Fresh]

ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
fuck ur little peasant shit, it's evident ur present shit is ugly
there's no Space for u at the top, Galileo beating on lenox if he's lucky
ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon

Felt you didn't take ur time with this one tbh.. Conjugal was forced af, palm piss just seemed like a weird wordplay to use. This verse was ok, but you coulda done more damage than this if u took ur time.

vs

This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
You can’t get ya girl Aroused, but she raves how my dick’s absurd
S’like we’re meant to be the way her Clit gives the Middle Finger when I Flip the Bird
You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat

This was an decent verse overall, I think the gay/dick bars were too abundant tho.. Try n mix it up more.

I've got Gal taking this. Feel he picked it up enough in the seconda half of his verse to take the dub here. Close battle but:

mvgt/Gal

[Massaker]

This was a nice battle. I thought it was one one sided tbh

Bar - thought your opener was dope. Second bar was cool. Mover board was cool, conjugal was dope. Palm piss was dope, everything was nice cept the Galileo bar. Been used.

Vs gal opener was wordy, concept was funny but something lacked. Bar two was dope. CRo BI all big was dope, Olympic swimmers was cool. Tunic was fire, lol at flip the bird, thought that bar was soft tbh. & closer was sick.

Overall couple misses each. But I felt Gal came with more personal punches as bar kept it simple and smooth. But I prefer the more personal bars tbh. This battle is dope imo and hard to judge but I'm giving this to GAL

[Unfukwitable]

Gala' tries to test this but the don says the geek is sorted
I see Gallimimus legends, but his concepts are prehistoric
I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
maaaaaan u have to listen, u've only landed crap that's ridden
the minute u act Palm Piss is when I urinate in my hand n slap u w/ it
ur hesitant n funny.. someone to simply harp on
u have no Elements of talent, any chances u had of winning Argon

vs.

This dick’s a winner? Nah his Vision’s unclear but when I kick this wigger…
The blow to the head’ll be so severe, it’ll SynChronize together like Olympic swimmers
When you spar w/real vets ya slain, I can tell ya lame
Dog…that loss Tunic could give rise to another hit Zelda game
You should get mad, w/that loss to God I’m puzzled ya not geek
Explain how you Lost Your Cool yet somehow still struggled to Drop Heat

Ah shit this was closer than the quotes make it seem, "Gal a mime us" & "Loss to Nik" was my fav's of the bunch, Not much misses from either of u just lines that I didn't feel as much Gal's basement bar was cool but the wordplay had a southern twist in how it was pronouced, Maybe the set up couldve helped the crispness.... "My Cro be all" if that wasn't how it was intended to sound excuse me bro .. But yea good battle v/Barc

[E Tha Real]

Conjugal
Winning argon

Vs.

Lickin lips - lol
Tunic - creative

Always nice to see ppl drop early. Galactic had some funny lines. But Barcotic had witty stuff and overall more appealing. Nice battle gentlemen.

Vote- barcotic

[Junto]

I'm here to ward off confusion & form strong contusions...
then rip ALL his fucking limbs off, it's a 4 Gone Conclusion
ur style's worn, long n stupid.. that played shit is over
u go so Overboard w/ Flips, I'll make sure ur face hits the motor
think u measure up to MY bars? I guess some can lie hard..
'cuz whoever told u that must've Conjugal, ur FUCKED beside Bar's

vs.

I bet you'd suck him off, faggot..& lick sperm too
I swear it’s like every time he even THINKS about Orc his dick turns blue
After a longgg harddd day @ work I thought of drinkin a bit…
So I walked into a Bar & he said he’d drink me under the table, while lickin his lips
You cling on like a Fungus. You’re a grown man & by now you should face it
Even mom’s be like Microbial big now…but I can’t get ‘em outta the basement

Nice battle, both had some dope stuff. I thought the Microbial play was tight from Gal.
And 4 gone and conjugal from Barcotic were both haymakers.
Gallimimus legends was nasty wordplay, actually liked that a lot too...
I just hadn't heard of a Gallimimus so it didn't connect for me right away.
Palm piss was half corny but funny too. Elements / argon was cool.
I thought this was one of the better verses I seen from Bar & the opposite for Gal.
Granted I only read a couple from each but Gal's shit the past couple weeks been better to me.
The Tunic concept was really played to me. The closer didn't really have the complexity...
SynCronize was hard but a little off to me on the pronunciation.
Still solid but I thought Bar came wit a little more this week.

V/Barcotic

[ILLunatic]

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