Unfukwitable vs Joe Boston (Fuk wins KO)

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@Unfukwitable

@Joe Boston

Check ins due by Friday, January 16th 2014 11:59PM EST

Verses due Wednesday, January 22nd 2014 11:59PM EST

16 - 20 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY

[Joe Boston]

Check

[Unfukwitable]

Check...

[Joe Boston]

@Unfukwitable 14 Good Luck


Your far from being the best ill slap ya if you continue to blabber
Tryna become Pro, test me? better off barricading a highway and screaming "Black Lives Matter"
one punch will shatter your bones it'll be the baddest experience you've ever had
Outmuscling me better hope u CK around because u have the same physique as Beibers underwear ad
Lot of friends and family will be sad when i start shooting im just waiting to that coast is clearer
Ill be that American Sniper on your rooftop you'll be calling Bradley Cooper to take that movie outta theathers
Your reflection in the mirror defines your weakness all your life youve been shit
So u think your on the right track? i hope u get struck by a train like Gregory Plitt
Being masculant dont fit u when speaking to bitches never see that hand on ur crotch standing tall
Tell everyone ur on that Patriot game in your household? they'd accuse u for having deflated balls
when its comes to a battlecall lyrically u cant stomach it ill burst those appendix
verse for verse u dont wanna facebook cuz they'll ignore ya like ILLunatic did to Lenox
theres fag in your DNA those genetics are proven u were born with those traits
U dont even have a Dixie cuz u turn bitch when ur parents yell at u for wasting paper plates

[Unfukwitable]

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U offer to toss salads on the daily basis, this boy done lost it.
Joe's free Rimjobs could put Allen Knight in the Unemployment office.
U can't identify with the word 'Suave', U know it's greazy when;
The only chicks that consider JB smoove, look exactly like that comedian.
Just bought a .22, I purchased a small caliber cause I liked the gun,
If u got a Saturday Night Special, It's suckin off 2 guys for the price of one.
Ur record's 63-66, Damn I'd tell U to use an Alias, but u been frail lyrically,
So we'd still 'spot them terrible lines in disguise' w/ out a Chemtrail conspiracy.
U lack in extreme wit, So how do u plan to come after a genius?.
This whole shits a mistake, So for 'Dissin a great', Ur careers gonna shatter to pieces.
Ur bars is stretched out, Get to the point of them empty schemes.
Damn, His lines contain enough Characters inside'em to be diagnosed w/ MPD.
He'll be out cold if it's ever a day me and this wussy scraps,
& after seeing 'Joe Z's', U guy's will only remember him for being a Pussy cat.

BADA BING, BADA BOOM!

[Junto]

Your far from being the best ill slap ya if you continue to blabber
Tryna become Pro, test me? better off barricading a highway and screaming "Black Lives Matter"
Your reflection in the mirror defines your weakness all your life youve been shit
So u think your on the right track? i hope u get struck by a train like Gregory Plitt

vs.

U offer to toss salads on the daily basis, this boy done lost it.
Joe's free Rimjobs could put Allen Knight in the Unemployment office.
Just bought a .22, I purchased a small caliber cause I liked the gun,
If u got a Saturday Night Special, It's suckin off 2 guys for the price of one.
U lack in extreme wit, So how do u plan to come after a genius?.
This whole shits a mistake, So for 'Dissin a great', Ur careers gonna shatter to pieces.
Ur bars is stretched out, Get to the point of them empty schemes.
Damn, His lines contain enough Characters inside'em to be diagnosed w/ MPD.

Damn... haven't read a lot of battles here yet but Unfuck has been throwin some haymakers recently
I thought that rimjob/Allen shit was hilarious, sat. night special was pretty funny too.
Never seen dissin a great wordplay, cool... MPD was dope... chemtrail was borderline quotable.
Only lines I didn't feel as much were JB smoove & Josie.
And only cuz I had similar ideas last wk & figured they were played cuz they're kind of simple.
Joe, hope u don't take this personal my man, cuz I got no beef wit you at all... but I thought ur verse in LLL was a lot better.
protesting me wasn't perfectly worded, but cool. On track was dope, your wording on that was real smooth.
But a lot of your concepts were nice and your execution wasn't as good... patriots/deflated balls, ILLunatic & lenox/fb...
American sniper was decent. Not bad, but Un came wit some fire here.

V/ UFW

[Amen]

Joe had...

Opener & right track - which is a pretty played concept. He just flipped it with a current event, lol. Wasn't feeling the rest, tbh. A lot of concepts fell flat due to soft executions or having no real direction to begin with. For an example, the Facebook attempt. Didn't like that, at all. Had no type of impact, IMO or direction. Kid of like a wild punch you hope lands.

Vs

Fukz had...

Rimjobs was LOTB, dope as fuck, IMO. Saturday night special was dope & disintegrate word play was fire. Even your misses landed, IMO. I could have quoted others but felt the ones mentioned were my favorite. Creative and executed nicely.

Joe was out bar'd here for sure.

V/UnFuk - better verse overall & consistent as fuck.

[DamienThorn]

Joe B..

Opener, deflated balls, on the right track kind of a played concept in rap in general but ok flip.

VS

Un..
Lots of quotables, nicely done.. My favorites were MPD, "dissin' a great", and SNS.

Un had the stronger verse, cleaner and hit harder. He has my vote. Joe had some nice lines, but his misses weren't on par with Un's. Nice champ match overall.

Vote- Un

[Massaker]

3-0 up

[Barcotic]

jb I've def seen better from u in lll & elsewhere, wasn't feelin a whole lot here.. altho I did like the deflated balls line, strong concept executed decent. also ur opener had potential, just didn't like where u went w/ it

unfuck, one of ur better verses. opener was fire, everything else landed except saturday special n chemtrail.. imo

v/unf

[ILLunatic]

Being masculant dont fit u when speaking to bitches never see that hand on ur crotch standing tall
Tell everyone ur on that Patriot game in your household? they'd accuse u for having deflated balls

This could have been worded better to make it more effective

when its comes to a battlecall lyrically u cant stomach it ill burst those appendix
verse for verse u dont wanna facebook cuz they'll ignore ya like ILLunatic did to Lenox

Lmao @ anther ILL reference in a punch, wtf is up with ya'll lately. This was ok though

vs

U offer to toss salads on the daily basis, this boy done lost it.
Joe's free Rimjobs could put Allen Knight in the Unemployment office.

Just bought a .22, I purchased a small caliber cause I liked the gun,
If u got a Saturday Night Special, It's suckin off 2 guys for the price of one.

That's just nasty!

Ur record's 63-66, Damn I'd tell U to use an Alias, but u been frail lyrically,
So we'd still 'spot them terrible lines in disguise' w/ out a Chemtrail conspiracy.

U lack in extreme wit, So how do u plan to come after a genius?.
This whole shits a mistake, So for 'Dissin a great', Ur careers gonna shatter to pieces.

Unfukwitable got this hands down! Concepts, Wording/execution was FAR better than Joe Boston's. Some of Joe's bars had me squinting like maybe I was missing something but nothing was there.

vote - Unfukwitable

[Massaker]

KO win for @Unfukwitable
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