Champ Barcotic (7-1) vs Allen Knight (2-0) (Barcotic Wins)

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[Barcotic]

dope, match whoever drops first obv but I'm thinking 16-20

good luck bra

[Allen Knight]

dope, match whoever drops first obv but I'm thinking 16-20

good luck bra

word my dude, im thinking 20.

[Barcotic]

lmfao @ 2 wins getting u a champ match

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here
stuff's disturbing, that's some fucking dirty shit
I colleagues like this unfair, but I'll still give u the work for being an undeserving bitch
ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
srsly fuck ur NFL lines! they're outnumbering the skilled few
u need to find a Happy Medium, n ur family needs to find another when I kill u
I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat
wrestling's for whack dummies n faggots who fight fake
so if I give u a Pile Driver, he's gonna need gas money n bags for ur wife's face
I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own
couldn't champ nbl for christ sake, let mike make it clear
u've had so many Lauzon ur resume, u'll be considered a lightweight for years
I'm wasting this fake chump, I have a face thump diploma
I ain't playin games when I say u'd be lucky to see Alan Wake from his coma
I'unno how he's lasting, old bastard's talent's casting doubt
iLL says he's ready for Blind Drops? I say 2 years max n that's just allen passing out

20

[Allen Knight]

His real name is Michael.

voting

got in a huge scrap last night, yay

na, this huge lebanese dude lol

Stfu mike,


u cant scrap for shit faggot & it's noted in ur case
that Lebanon stop hit u till it looks like a suicide bomb exploded in ur face
Uzi loaded & aimed at ur frame, im merkin u whore
u'll get ripped apart so fast by these Shelby u'd think i was workin for Ford
i pound ur girl like a nasty slut & skull fuck her on booze
im ashamed to say she smashed Asics times cuz shes dirt under my shoes
u ain't jacked faggot, u gota small body type bum
if me & Mic Stand toe to toe, i'll fuckin knock'em out cuz he's built like one
u work the gay bars at night, sayin ur mouth is dumb ill
shit, there isn't a Manuel not suck off on this planet for some Bills
& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse
after this ur run is over, my fist'll split ur damn heart, B
i'll beat u till ur fuckin Dunbar, it'll be ur season finale like Sons Of Anarchy
try to rob me & its a homi, ruger in ur face clown
if u touch Aldo, i'll shoot u in the torso faster than a MMA take down
i'll stab ur newborn till my arms numb, so take dat fam
his birthmarks the day i'll leave a permanent gash on his face like A$ap Yam
my fists are superman strong, them shits melt comets
i'll give Micheal Strahan shots to the face till theres Giant welts on it

[Greedy]

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here
EHH, NOT TOO CRAZY ABOUT THIS OPENER.

stuff's disturbing, that's some fucking dirty shit
I colleagues like this unfair, but I'll still give u the work for being an undeserving bitch
AGAIN, NOT FEELING IT, W/P IS THERE, BUT COMES OFF EHH TO ME

ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
LMAO, THIS WAS NICE

srsly fuck ur NFL lines! they're outnumbering the skilled few
u need to find a Happy Medium, n ur family needs to find another when I kill u
GOOD

I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat
DOPE IMHO

wrestling's for whack dummies n faggots who fight fake
so if I give u a Pile Driver, he's gonna need gas money n bags for ur wife's face
NICE

I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own
DAMN, PRETTY SLICK RIGHT HERE

couldn't champ nbl for christ sake, let mike make it clear
u've had so many Lauzon ur resume, u'll be considered a lightweight for years
OUCH. .DOPE HERE

I'm wasting this fake chump, I have a face thump diploma
I ain't playin games when I say u'd be lucky to see Alan Wake from his coma
NICE

I'unno how he's lasting, old bastard's talent's casting doubt
iLL says he's ready for Blind Drops? I say 2 years max n that's just allen passing out
NOT FEELING THIS CLOSER

VS

u cant scrap for shit faggot & it's noted in ur case
that Lebanon stop hit u till it looks like a suicide bomb
exploded in ur face
NOT FEELING THIS OPENER

Uzi loaded & aimed at ur frame, im merkin u whore
u'll get ripped apart so fast by these Shelby u'd think i was workin for Ford
THIS IS NICE, I WOULDVE "A" SHELL, B INSTEAD OF "THESE"

i pound ur girl like a nasty slut & skull fuck her on booze
im ashamed to say she smashed Asics times cuz shes dirt under my shoes
NICE WORDPLAY

u ain't jacked faggot, u gota small body type bum
if me & Mic Stand toe to toe, i'll fuckin knock'em out cuz he's built like one
THIS WAS OK

u work the gay bars at night, sayin ur mouth is dumb ill
shit, there isn't a Manuel not suck off on this planet for some Bills
NOT FEELING THIS ONE

& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse
DOPE

after this ur run is over, my fist'll split ur damn heart, B
i'll beat u till ur fuckin Dunbar, it'll be ur season finale like Sons Of Anarchy
DAMN, DOPE AGAIN

try to rob me & its a homi, ruger in ur face clown
if u touch Aldo, i'll shoot u in the torso faster than a MMA take down
DAAAAM, FUCKN SLICK

i'll stab ur newborn till my arms numb, so take dat fam
his birthmarks the day i'll leave a permanent gash on his face like A$ap Yam
ONE OF THE BETTER YAMS LINES

my fists are superman strong, them shits melt comets
i'll give Micheal Strahan shots to the face till theres Giant welts on it
THIS WAS A GOOD CLOSER, I HAD A STRAY HAND CONCEPT, BUT I DIDN'T USE IT..SHOULDVE THO



This was a nice battle.
Barcotic, I hated ur first two bars. Them shits was trash imo, but the rest was pretty much fire.
A.K, you also had two bars I didn't like, so it's even on lines I did/didn't like.
So it comes down to the misses. And I disliked bar's two much more than ak's gay bar and opener

This can go either way honestly. But for me....

Vote ak

[Tic]

stuff's disturbing, that's some fucking dirty shit
I colleagues like this unfair, but I'll still give u the work for being an undeserving bitch
ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
srsly fuck ur NFL lines! they're outnumbering the skilled few
u need to find a Happy Medium, n ur family needs to find another when I kill u
I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat

vs.

u cant scrap for shit faggot & it's noted in ur case
that Lebanon stop hit u till it looks like a suicide bomb exploded in ur face
u ain't jacked faggot, u gota small body type bum
if me & Mic Stand toe to toe, i'll fuckin knock'em out cuz he's built like one
& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse
after this ur run is over, my fist'll split ur damn heart, B
i'll beat u till ur fuckin Dunbar, it'll be ur season finale like Sons Of Anarchy
try to rob me & its a homi, ruger in ur face clown
if u touch Aldo, i'll shoot u in the torso faster than a MMA take down

This was a dope Champ match. Both came with some nice lines & both had some misses as well. I think Allen was more consistent and that opener was dope. Bar had some nice ones as well like General Pop & Good Sport. I just think Allen was a little more consistent overall and takes this by a slim margin.

V/ AK

[Fresh]

ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat
I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own
couldn't champ nbl for christ sake, let mike make it clear
u've had so many Lauzon ur resume, u'll be considered a lightweight for years

vs

Uzi loaded & aimed at ur frame, im merkin u whore
u'll get ripped apart so fast by these Shelby u'd think i was workin for Ford
& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse
after this ur run is over, my fist'll split ur damn heart, B
i'll beat u till ur fuckin Dunbar, it'll be ur season finale like Sons Of Anarchy
try to rob me & its a homi, ruger in ur face clown
if u touch Aldo, i'll shoot u in the torso faster than a MMA take down
my fists are superman strong, them shits melt comets
i'll give Micheal Strahan shots to the face till theres Giant welts on it

Close battle but I've got AK taking this with one more quote. This was a dope battle tho props to both.

v/AK

[Massaker]

Bark - open was cool, kinda light.colleagues was nice, good sport was cool, happy medium was light. General pop was dope. Pile driver was dope. Drum up was aight. Lauzon was nice. Coma was cool. Closer was cool.

Overall solid read. Some light jabs and some dope shit. I like the aggression u brought to the table.


AK- opener was dope. Shelby was dope. Asics was dope lol. Mic stand was cool. Manuel was ok. Kors light was funny. Dunbar was cool.aldo was nice. Birthmark was nice. Closer was dope

Overall dope read. Just a couple light bars that's about it for me


So, this was close for me. I got bar with a few more light bars than Allen tbh. Both drops were sick for real but I got Allen taking this for being more consistent.

Vote Allen.
Nice job both yall

[Packed Graves]

Barc: opener was nice, colleagues was dope I fucks with it, good sport, general pop was decent generic, lauzon, you started off pretty fire the. IMO kind of lost steam. Just cause it was quoted didn't mean it was whack just not my preference.

Vs

AK:Lebanon was dope, Shelby was cool, Asics was nice, mic stand was nice personal, asap yam was decent like my flip Better, straHan. Yo this was a nice verse lots of good connections but didn't reallt attack like you normally do. You had two nameplays but on your self, therefore lacked the sting.

Vote barcotic

[Unfukwitable]

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here
ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat
I'm wasting this fake chump, I have a face thump diploma
I ain't playin games when I say u'd be lucky to see Alan Wake from his coma

vs.

i pound ur girl like a nasty slut & skull fuck her on booze
im ashamed to say she smashed Asics times cuz shes dirt under my shoes
& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse
i'll stab ur newborn till my arms numb, so take dat fam
his birthmarks the day i'll leave a permanent gash on his face like A$ap Yam
my fists are superman strong, them shits melt comets
i'll give Micheal Strahan shots to the face till theres Giant welts on it

This battle was firee, A bunch of dope punches thrown I think my top 2 of the battle was Good Sport & Asics, I had to reread this but IMO one just barely edged it here alot of solid shit so Im not taking nothing away from neither of u dudes ... v/AK

[Legion]

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here
ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references
I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own
couldn't champ nbl for christ sake, let mike make it clear
u've had so many Lauzon ur resume, u'll be considered a lightweight for years

Vs

u cant scrap for shit faggot & it's noted in ur case
that Lebanon stop hit u till it looks like a suicide bomb exploded in ur face
i pound ur girl like a nasty slut & skull fuck her on booze
im ashamed to say she smashed Asics times cuz shes dirt under my shoes
u work the gay bars at night, sayin ur mouth is dumb ill
shit, there isn't a Manuel not suck off on this planet for some Bills
& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse

Got this 4-4 so it comes down to consistency, execution and so forth
That's where bar takes it
I just felt like his misses weren't as forced and towards the end of Allen's verse just seemed like he got lazy

[Amen]

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here

slick

stuff's disturbing, that's some fucking dirty shit
I colleagues like this unfair, but I'll still give u the work for being an undeserving bitch

little bit of a reach but works and I didn't like your execution tho.

ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references

lolol slick

srsly fuck ur NFL lines! they're outnumbering the skilled few
u need to find a Happy Medium, n ur family needs to find another when I kill u

ok

I'm the HARDEST out, I've been behind bars without a hope
the only General Pop u'd experience comes after I put my arm around ur throat

didn't like this but the concept was ok to me the execution fell flat.

wrestling's for whack dummies n faggots who fight fake
so if I give u a Pile Driver, he's gonna need gas money n bags for ur wife's face

ok

I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own

ok but execution was sort of mild man

couldn't champ nbl for christ sake, let mike make it clear
u've had so many Lauzon ur resume, u'll be considered a lightweight for years

good

I'm wasting this fake chump, I have a face thump diploma
I ain't playin games when I say u'd be lucky to see Alan Wake from his coma

good

I'unno how he's lasting, old bastard's talent's casting doubt
iLL says he's ready for Blind Drops? I say 2 years max n that's just allen passing out

prolly your wackest bar in the verse

vs

u cant scrap for shit faggot & it's noted in ur case
that Lebanon stop hit u till it looks like a suicide bomb exploded in ur face

lol good

Uzi loaded & aimed at ur frame, im merkin u whore
u'll get ripped apart so fast by these Shelby u'd think i was workin for Ford

concept good but execution was off

i pound ur girl like a nasty slut & skull fuck her on booze
im ashamed to say she smashed Asics times cuz shes dirt under my shoes

this was nice but the wording was rough

u ain't jacked faggot, u gota small body type bum
if me & Mic Stand toe to toe, i'll fuckin knock'em out cuz he's built like one

lol slick

u work the gay bars at night, sayin ur mouth is dumb ill
shit, there isn't a Manuel not suck off on this planet for some Bills

hahaha slick

& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse

this was good but the wording was rough like the asics bar

after this ur run is over, my fist'll split ur damn heart, B
i'll beat u till ur fuckin Dunbar, it'll be ur season finale like Sons Of Anarchy

this was fire

try to rob me & its a homi, ruger in ur face clown
if u touch Aldo, i'll shoot u in the torso faster than a MMA take down

ok but wording hindered the impact

i'll stab ur newborn till my arms numb, so take dat fam
his birthmarks the day i'll leave a permanent gash on his face like A$ap Yam

ok

my fists are superman strong, them shits melt comets
i'll give Micheal Strahan shots to the face till theres Giant welts on it

nice

damn this battle was close af but I think I got allen knight edging it out. dude was creative as fuck with a lot of word plays. plus I think that second bar and last bar from barcotic through me off. didn't like them at all. allen's wording wasn't the greatest but his concepts an executions were good enough to pul the bars off and also feel he was a little harsher with his executions. dope battle tho but I got allen edging this.

allen knight got it

[murda sho.]

AK

u ain't jacked faggot, u gota small body type bum
if me & Mic Stand toe to toe, i'll fuckin knock'em out cuz he's built like one

& u dont even pound beer like a man, that shit is the worse
you'll always catch Michael Kors light sippin cuz he's a bitch w/ a purse

i'll stab ur newborn till my arms numb, so take dat fam
his birthmarks the day i'll leave a permanent gash on his face like A$ap Yam


Barcotic

yo at leeeeeeeast if u had 5 it wouldn't seem weird
it's such a Pressing Situation, I could type 10 paragraphs on why u shouldn't be here
stuff's disturbing, that's some fucking dirty shit
I colleagues like this unfair, but I'll still give u the work for being an undeserving bitch
ur style's too defective, but there's always proven preferences
either way I'm such a Good Sport, u could've used me for all ur stupid references

I'm landing huge, definitely not handing u a seat in the thrown
no matter how many old bar flips u Drum up, u'll be dancing to the beat of ur own


very good battle, none had any wack bars just some that didn't hit as hard as others, I got Bar landing one more tough punch than AK but that comes down to preference cause their are some lines I'm sure other people will quote that I didn't.. anyway I got Barcotic edging this in a good battle

[E Tha Real]

Colleagues- dope
Good sport- niice &. LOTB for me
Happy medium- wish i thought of it. LoL
General pop - sweet

Disliked: alan wake, lauzon

Vs.

Shelby - clever
Built like one - cool
Aldo - i likes it
Strahan shots- witty

Disliked- michael kors light, manual/bills

Gotta go Barcotic dude called him out on all the sports lines and it was effective- since he brought a few. First half of his verse was flames. Dissing dudes real name worked for Al. Definately one of the best battles i've read. You both challenge the readers to be informed. I dont mind googling a line like the dunbar or lauzon. Real nice match-up, don't know who i was expecting to win cause your both consistent.

Vote barcotic