Champ – Barcotic (10-1) vs Smog (6-4) (Barcotic Wins)

[ILLunatic]

LLL
Season 18

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Deadlines
Check-Ins: Tuesday by 11:59 PM EST
Verses: Thursday by 11:59 PM EST
Voting: Saturday by 11:59 PM EST

Line Requirements
Minimum – 10
Maximum – 20
Must agree in your Check-In’s / Match whoever drops first

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Voting - *UPDATED 1/18/2015*
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Pic Battle Option
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[Smog]

16, I won't be able to write till wed. Maybe thurs..first half of the week is a bitch..

[Barcotic]

16 is perfect

[Barcotic]

u'd never see smog w/ a friend, he's odd in the head
Location: Albacrazy? u mean in the corner jacking off to celebs
n look yall, he's no pro. the crook all but no-shows
if smog thrives in every field, that just means football is postponed
I'm a proven vet, ya heard? I hope u break rules n get the curb
in fact I hope u get bandana mack truck runs over that stupid head of urs
ur a dumb, petite punk. lol ur such a weak bum dude
the only Stare Cases u see are in court whenever someone mean mugs u
n fuck my family ties, focus on how to collide w/ my bars
I'll give u a chance to Trace My Roots when I bury u alive in my yard
u been beggin for approval & it's been brutal yo, ur whack
u've done this season such a Small Service, u'll get a funeral to match
some call u slick? u'd have to use drugs on a chick
scratch that, u'd give a trampoline n she still wouldn't jump on ur dick
I dun fucked up smoggy, ya I was froggy out the gate
I hit 'em w/ heavy hooks...
ironically they'll need another to drag his body out the lake

16

[Smog]

In chat ur cunt would leak so bad ya snatch begun to bleed,
All the cryin aside n u might be fine, ho...wit a fat ass n matching double D's
Can't call him a faggot when he soo bitch hoes trip.. All of um jealous..
See amen spotted a female,n like a real n_gga would.. started hollerin at um.
Imma cold hearted beast urgin to go start some beef..
I mean.. Besides my dick n balls... U don't want NO PART OF ME..
I'm done wit this kid, go nuts wit guns? Nah it's mo fun when u stick.
So when u see a fuckin Sai, cotic..I went crazy wit one ta ya ribs..
Ya careers a joke, plus u just get In the way n smear up the snow.
U do such a lousy job..When I side swipe u it's to show u how to clear off the road.
This between the IT n the X factor, put together in text kid..
N the only fuckin word they'll make is ur escape... Now X-IT
Murder me? Write ya best n I'll verbally slice ya neck, but leave it attached dawg
Listen pussy..when I diss count ya self out.. Cuz I'm takin ur fuckin head half off
Ya runs over cuz u ran into a gun holder that'll blast ur family Tree
N just cuz y'all see barbarian his peeps...it won't turn this faggot onto a savage beast

[Packed Graves]

Barc: trace your roots, small service. You came off oddly this week very rushed an inconsistent. This wasn't good at all I feel you when extra easy because it's Smog which could hurt you tremendously.

Vs

Smog: Dick an balls was cool. Lots of bad wording & poorly executed concepts. You rushed this more then normal & it shows.

Vote: Barc, btw worst champ match yet.

[Massaker]

Honestly I wasn't to feeling this battle...

Bar - I felt your first two were wack tbh. Bandana was dope. Mean mug was light. Trace my roots was light. Small service was cool. Tramp o lean? Bit of a stretch cool punch. Closer was ok

Smog - thought your opener was ok. Your second bar was weak. Part of me could have been better, was light to me. Sai Cotic was ok. Side swipe was light, set up was wack. X it could have been harsher. This was decent. Count ya self out was light. Closer was a cool concept but you didn't execute the punch hard enough..


Overall this is close for me. Wasn't feeling the execution from both parts. But I got smog with better misses here tbh.

Vote smog

[ILLunatic]

2 votes received

[Fresh]

u'd never see smog w/ a friend, he's odd in the head
Location: Albacrazy? u mean in the corner jacking off to celebs
I'm a proven vet, ya heard? I hope u break rules n get the curb
in fact I hope u get bandana mack truck runs over that stupid head of urs
n fuck my family ties, focus on how to collide w/ my bars
I'll give u a chance to Trace My Roots when I bury u alive in my yard

vs

Imma cold hearted beast urgin to go start some beef..
I mean.. Besides my dick n balls... U don't want NO PART OF ME..
I'm done wit this kid, go nuts wit guns? Nah it's mo fun when u stick.
So when u see a fuckin Sai, cotic..I went crazy wit one ta ya ribs..
Ya runs over cuz u ran into a gun holder that'll blast ur family Tree
N just cuz y'all see barbarian his peeps...it won't turn this faggot onto a savage beast

Alright I've got it at 3 a piece. Close call to make here. I've gotta go with bar, and this is only cause I feel the bandana was the lotb. Could go either way but I've gotta go barc here.

v/Bar

[Greedy]

u'd never see smog w/ a friend, he's odd in the head
Location: Albacrazy? u mean in the corner jacking off to celebs
IDK YO. THIS IS A WEAK ASS OPENER

n look yall, he's no pro. the crook all but no-shows
if smog thrives in every field, that just means football is postponed
I GET IT. IT'S OK, KINDA LACKING, IMPACT-WISE. BUT IT'S HARD TO DO SMOG N/P'S

I'm a proven vet, ya heard? I hope u break rules n get the curb
in fact I hope u get bandana mack truck runs over that stupid head of urs
THIS WAS AN EHH PERSONAL

ur a dumb, petite punk. lol ur such a weak bum dude
the only Stare Cases u see are in court whenever someone mean mugs u
WTF IS THIS? C'MON MY NIGGA

n fuck my family ties, focus on how to collide w/ my bars
I'll give u a chance to Trace My Roots when I bury u alive in my yard
THIS WASN BAD AT ALL

u been beggin for approval & it's been brutal yo, ur whack
u've done this season such a Small Service, u'll get a funeral to match
THIS WAS NICE. I FUCK WITH THIS ONE

some call u slick? u'd have to use drugs on a chick
scratch that, u'd give a trampoline n she still wouldn't jump on ur dick
THIS WAS GOOD

I dun fucked up smoggy, ya I was froggy out the gate
I hit 'em w/ heavy hooks...
ironically they'll need another to drag his body out the lake
DAMN. DOPE CLOSER

vs

In chat ur cunt would leak so bad ya snatch begun to bleed, 
All the cryin aside n u might be fine, ho...wit a fat ass n matching double D's
LMAO, THIS WAS FUNNY BUT WACK A.F AT THE SAME TIME..IDK HOW U DID THAT LOL

Can't call him a faggot when he soo bitch hoes trip.. All of um jealous..
See amen spotted a female,n like a real n_gga would.. started hollerin at um.
THIS WAS ACTUALLY NICE, BUT DON'T RHYME AT ALL WITH MY BOSTON ACCENT. I DON WANNA HOLD IT AGAINST YOU.

Imma cold hearted beast urgin to go start some beef..
I mean.. Besides my dick n balls... U don't want NO PART OF ME..
NAH

I'm done wit this kid, go nuts wit guns? Nah it's mo fun when u stick.
So when u see a fuckin Sai, cotic..I went crazy wit one ta ya ribs..
DOPE IMO

Ya careers a joke, plus u just get In the way n smear up the snow.
U do such a lousy job..When I side swipe u it's to show u how to clear off the road.
NAH

This between the IT n the X factor, put together in text kid..
N the only fuckin word they'll make is ur escape... Now X-IT
NICE.

Murder me? Write ya best n I'll verbally slice ya neck, but leave it attached dawg 
Listen pussy..when I diss count ya self out.. Cuz I'm takin ur fuckin head half off
DISCOUNT FLIPS ARE KINDA PLAYED. HARD TO GIVE U CREDIT FOR THIS, BUT U DEF PUT A NICE TOUCH ON FORMING IT

Ya runs over cuz u ran into a gun holder that'll blast ur family Tree
N just cuz y'all see barbarian his peeps...it won't turn this faggot onto a savage beast
OK CLOSER


Ayt....IDK WTF happened here, first off I think barcotic won....but barely. Yo..Bar..u can't be doing this shit b. You got lucky tbh. Smog is pretty hit or miss but when he's hitting he's hitting. He done collected some big name bodies.
Smog, you coulda had this. I think you just put too much into ur bars.

Vote bar comic

[ILLunatic]

4 votes received

[Greed]

Low key even. Idk. Set up and punch for stare cases missed horribly by bar. X it was beyond corny. Aside from that it's even with the rest. Very by the book from both nothing outstanding. Let me do it like this.

Bandana

Vs

Barbarian

Based on the best lines I'm leaning towards bar. Just was funnier.

V bar

[Unfukwitable]

I'm a proven vet, ya heard? I hope u break rules n get the curb
in fact I hope u get bandana mack truck runs over that stupid head of urs
ur a dumb, petite punk. lol ur such a weak bum dude
the only Stare Cases u see are in court whenever someone mean mugs u
u been beggin for approval & it's been brutal yo, ur whack
u've done this season such a Small Service, u'll get a funeral to match

vs

a couple lines that didn't rhyme, bad set ups, a couple badly executed bars with potential, feels like you came much harder last rnd but some of ya concepts that couldve been more clever just didn't come out right in my opinion.
.
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with that being said this was a landslide to me v/Barc

[Amen]

stare case
trace my roots

slick

vs

psychotic
barbarian

slick

close spar tho. I think barcotic got it tho. smog verse wasnt consistent. started slow but then picked up and had a lot of throw aways and filler.

barcotic got it

[Letterman]

n fuck my family ties, focus on how to collide w/ my bars
I'll give u a chance to Trace My Roots when I bury u alive in my yard
u been beggin for approval & it's been brutal yo, ur whack
u've done this season such a Small Service, u'll get a funeral to match
I dun fucked up smoggy, ya I was froggy out the gate
I hit 'em w/ heavy hooks...
ironically they'll need another to drag his body out the lake

Vs

I'm done wit this kid, go nuts wit guns? Nah it's mo fun when u stick.
So when u see a fuckin Sai, cotic..I went crazy wit one ta ya ribs

Expected more from this battle honestly. Bar didn't come as hard as usual, maybe he didn't try as much. Smog is usually capable of dropping some good stuff but I only thought one of his landed solidly. Pretty one sided match here.

v/Bar