Unfukwitable vs killing spree[fuk wins 5-4]

[Massaker]

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@Unfukwitable vs @Killing Spree

Check ins due by Wednesday, Feb 18th 2014 11:59PM EST

Verses due Monday, February 23rd 2014 11:59PM EST

16 - 20 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY

[Spree]

Check... Just match eachother

[Unfukwitable]

Check. 16 perf bro

[Spree]

Fuk rnd two

leave this homeless domeless, live rockets bust tummy's
If We see Fuk raise cans, its for collecting lunch money

My line

I hate this Homeless prick & that fisherman hat he collects change with;
Kill me?... If I Kick the Bucket it'll Be a bunch of coins on the Pavement.

His line
Unfukwitable aka Noquear





I said!...
I've exposed ya concept recycle/biting & it's sad sir, I had to
& those tactics will leave u broke, Un...like ya jaw after this battle
I make gun shots a tasteful art, something U have to see
Wen I glue ten in ya gut U'll leak out more shit, than that food allergy
Dawg u know I'm a star, in this game I spit crack
racist? No...
But still wouldnt think this Dark Matter if he changed his name to Tic Tac
ur an aweful showing, performance been on sum fake "Act a threat"
I'll ring down a curtain in this one...On ya head ta snap ya neck
The punches I speak be like a loaded shotty that I'll break out n shoot
Lately we don't see any Real $pit wen u talk...since he slapped the taste out'a u
Hate this kid. Snipe shooter wit the small iron be blazing him
If my point is well taken? It's hallowed lead & a 1shot kill through ya cranium
Ya bitch bout belt holders, & after this she won't abide ur loyal treatment
But i'll hear "Noq's @ the door" After this, wen ya girl shows up to clean my royal penis
& I beat that hoes cunt, while u make her let out a rappish, fret screams
u ever mentioned wit MUFF Destroyer? It's prob chop'n those fags concepts that u take from Netcees


Close casket

[Unfukwitable]

I thought I taught u a lesson, U ain't improve nothin.
Our last battle was a wake up call & this is the lifetime snooze button.
Doggystyle & Missionary comes to mind when a skeezer pass',
I bet this Gaylords favorite Position is being the CEO's secret fag.
I'll do dawg vicisious, Ginsu to the throat he'll be on floor spittin;
Up blood after I cut his 'Juggler' quick as a bad Circus audition.
Dude thinks he's in rare form?, Fuck the tone in his grammar,
Him being in his Prime'll mean he's the farthest thing from goin BANANAS!
Chicks won't smooch on this goblin!, that's word to me, Buddy.
Girls don't consider this 'Imp peck'able' but they do say he's Perfectly ugly.
I was apart of a 'Flash Mob' We had fun and danced in public,
Kill once 'Flashed Mobs' w/ his penis & over went lots of damage from it.
If Raps was wounds, Mines read like a wide gash.
Lookin at his u 'Read scratch', Like robbing bank $ w/ a dye pack.
he ain't ready for text scene, I'm the best seen.
& this verse'll leave his ass shooken enough to be a twerkers wet dream.

[Spree]

Ment to mention dark matter aka tic tac aka galactic

[Massaker]

@Unfukwitable @Fresh @Shafi @Amen @Lenox @NiccAteen @Mushashi @Letterman @Enbombz @ppl fuckin vote or die tomorrow

[Joe Boston]

spree

I've exposed ya concept recycle/biting & it's sad sir, I had to
& those tactics will leave u broke, Un...like ya jaw after this battle
played np concept

I make gun shots a tasteful art, something U have to see
Wen I glue ten in ya gut U'll leak out more shit, than that food allergy
nice wordplay flip

Dawg u know I'm a star, in this game I spit crack
racist? No...
But still wouldnt think this Dark Matter if he changed his name to Tic Tac
nah

ur an aweful showing, performance been on sum fake "Act a threat"
I'll ring down a curtain in this one...On ya head ta snap ya neck
didn't like this flip

The punches I speak be like a loaded shotty that I'll break out n shoot
Lately we don't see any Real $pit wen u talk...since he slapped the taste out'a u
slight jab at a personal

Hate this kid. Snipe shooter wit the small iron be blazing him
If my point is well taken? It's hallowed lead & a 1shot kill through ya cranium
ok flip

Ya bitch bout belt holders, & after this she won't abide ur loyal treatment
But i'll hear "Noq's @ the door" After this, wen ya girl shows up to clean my royal penis
lol

& I beat that hoes cunt, while u make her let out a rappish, fret screams
u ever mentioned wit MUFF Destroyer? It's prob chop'n those fags concepts that u take from Netcees
lol ok

unfuk

thought I taught u a lesson, U ain't improve nothin.
Our last battle was a wake up call & this is the lifetime snooze button.
wasn't feeling the flip on this concept

Doggystyle & Missionary comes to mind when a skeezer pass',
I bet this Gaylords favorite Position is being the CEO's secret fag.
nah

I'll do dawg vicisious, Ginsu to the throat he'll be on floor spittin;
Up blood after I cut his 'Juggler' quick as a bad Circus audition.
nice dope metaphorical comparison and wordplay

Dude thinks he's in rare form?, Fuck the tone in his grammar,
Him being in his Prime'll mean he's the farthest thing from goin BANANAS!
ok wordplay

Chicks won't smooch on this goblin!, that's word to me, Buddy.
Girls don't consider this 'Imp peck'able' but they do say he's Perfectly ugly.
ok

I was apart of a 'Flash Mob' We had fun and danced in public,
Kill once 'Flashed Mobs' w/ his penis & over went lots of damage from it.
nAH

If Raps was wounds, Mines read like a wide gash.
Lookin at his u 'Read scratch', Like robbing bank $ w/ a dye pack.
nah

he ain't ready for text scene, I'm the best seen.
& this verse'll leave his ass shooken enough to be a twerkers wet dream.
nah

Kiiling spree glue ten was cool. Noqs @door was cool. other then that some misses thought u just rushed shit. Unfuk Juggler was ok other then that felt u had a lot of missed concepts.

V/Spree by a hair. not the best of champ matches ive seen before both rushed

[miracle]

Im on my phone so not gonna do a crazy breakdown

Kill ya first bar was a ok nameflip, nothing to creative, but decent then after that the next few bars were lil dry n didnt hit much, ths real spit was a decent attempt but has been done ALOT, last two bars were okay tho, nothing to hitting but ok jabs. Unfuk had the juggler line that was alright n the primial line connected, rest was bad misses, no hate but some were pretty bad
bad
V,,kill slightly,

[Enbombz]

I said!...
I've exposed ya concept recycle/biting & it's sad sir, I had to
& those tactics will leave u broke, Un...like ya jaw after this battle
Was okay. Slight wording issue
I make gun shots a tasteful art, something U have to see
Wen I glue ten in ya gut U'll leak out more shit, than that food allergy
nice w/p, decent hit
Dawg u know I'm a star, in this game I spit crack
racist? No...
But still wouldnt think this Dark Matter if he changed his name to Tic Tac
meh wording hurt it.
ur an aweful showing, performance been on sum fake "Act a threat"
I'll ring down a curtain in this one...On ya head ta snap ya neck
okay again
The punches I speak be like a loaded shotty that I'll break out n shoot
Lately we don't see any Real $pit wen u talk...since he slapped the taste out'a u
Nice hit
Hate this kid. Snipe shooter wit the small iron be blazing him
If my point is well taken? It's hallowed lead & a 1shot kill through ya cranium
okay
Ya bitch bout belt holders, & after this she won't abide ur loyal treatment
But i'll hear "Noq's @ the door" After this, wen ya girl shows up to clean my royal penis
Funny line but nothin heavy
& I beat that hoes cunt, while u make her let out a rappish, fret screams
u ever mentioned wit MUFF Destroyer? It's prob chop'n those fags concepts that u take from Netcees
Nice diss

vs

I thought I taught u a lesson, U ain't improve nothin.
Our last battle was a wake up call & this is the lifetime snooze button.
Nice w/p. Didn't quite hit though
Doggystyle & Missionary comes to mind when a skeezer pass',
I bet this Gaylords favorite Position is being the CEO's secret fag.
Okay diss. Set up rhyme hurt it.
I'll do dawg vicisious, Ginsu to the throat he'll be on floor spittin;
Up blood after I cut his 'Juggler' quick as a bad Circus audition.
Decent concept, okay delivery.
Dude thinks he's in rare form?, Fuck the tone in his grammar,
Him being in his Prime'll mean he's the farthest thing from goin BANANAS!
Okay concept again, execution could've of been better
Chicks won't smooch on this goblin!, that's word to me, Buddy.
Girls don't consider this 'Imp peck'able' but they do say he's Perfectly ugly.
Nice, your best bar fo me
I was apart of a 'Flash Mob' We had fun and danced in public,
Kill once 'Flashed Mobs' w/ his penis & over went lots of damage from it.
Nah.
If Raps was wounds, Mines read like a wide gash.
Lookin at his u 'Read scratch', Like robbing bank $ w/ a dye pack.
Not feeling it
he ain't ready for text scene, I'm the best seen.
& this verse'll leave his ass shooken enough to be a twerkers wet dream.
Okay idea bit light though


Wasn't too much between them. Fuc had some nice ideas i just felt they could of been better worded to hit harder. Ks was more consistant for me and exacuted his verse better. Both had misses but Ks had more hits for me.

So my votes going to Killing spree.

[NiccAteen]

I said!...
I've exposed ya concept recycle/biting & it's sad sir, I had to
& those tactics will leave u broke, Un...like ya jaw after this battle
lil off
I make gun shots a tasteful art, something U have to see
Wen I glue ten in ya gut U'll leak out more shit, than that food allergy
good flip on gluten wp
Dawg u know I'm a star, in this game I spit crack
racist? No...
But still wouldnt think this Dark Matter if he changed his name to Tic Tac
not really feeling nameplay
ur an aweful showing, performance been on sum fake "Act a threat"
I'll ring down a curtain in this one...On ya head ta snap ya neck
decent
The punches I speak be like a loaded shotty that I'll break out n shoot
Lately we don't see any Real $pit wen u talk...since he slapped the taste out'a u
good play
Hate this kid. Snipe shooter wit the small iron be blazing him
If my point is well taken? It's hallowed lead & a 1shot kill through ya cranium
decent not really big on gunplay it really has to be creative for it dont stand out
Ya bitch bout belt holders, & after this she won't abide ur loyal treatment
But i'll hear "Noq's @ the door" After this, wen ya girl shows up to clean my royal penis
humorous but nothing landing
& I beat that hoes cunt, while u make her let out a rappish, fret screams
u ever mentioned wit MUFF Destroyer? It's prob chop'n those fags concepts that u take from Netcees
cool concept

vs

I thought I taught u a lesson, U ain't improve nothin.
Our last battle was a wake up call & this is the lifetime snooze button.
coulda been harder
Doggystyle & Missionary comes to mind when a skeezer pass',
I bet this Gaylords favorite Position is being the CEO's secret fag.
ok at best wasnt feeling whole set up
I'll do dawg vicisious, Ginsu to the throat he'll be on floor spittin;
Up blood after I cut his 'Juggler' quick as a bad Circus audition.
decent concept n flip on juggler wp
Dude thinks he's in rare form?, Fuck the tone in his grammar,
Him being in his Prime'll mean he's the farthest thing from goin BANANAS!
decent wp
Chicks won't smooch on this goblin!, that's word to me, Buddy.
Girls don't consider this 'Imp peck'able' but they do say he's Perfectly ugly.
best wp of the battle
I was apart of a 'Flash Mob' We had fun and danced in public,
Kill once 'Flashed Mobs' w/ his penis & over went lots of damage from it.
Not feeling
If Raps was wounds, Mines read like a wide gash.
Lookin at his u 'Read scratch', Like robbing bank $ w/ a dye pack.
not feeling
he ain't ready for text scene, I'm the best seen.
& this verse'll leave his ass shooken enough to be a twerkers wet dream.
decent concept nothing too hard hitting tho


vote:Unfuk, had better creativity and wp with his disses and bars hit harder overall..both had simular flaws with lack of execution with concepts that coulda been better..keep doin ur thing guys both showed skill just need more consistency

[Massaker]

3-1 spree well
Uppin this

[Fresh]

I've exposed ya concept recycle/biting & it's sad sir, I had to
& those tactics will leave u broke, Un...like ya jaw after this battle
jab here
I make gun shots a tasteful art, something U have to see
Wen I glue ten in ya gut U'll leak out more shit, than that food allergy
ok
Dawg u know I'm a star, in this game I spit crack
racist? No...
But still wouldnt think this Dark Matter if he changed his name to Tic Tac
not feelin this
ur an aweful showing, performance been on sum fake "Act a threat"
I'll ring down a curtain in this one...On ya head ta snap ya neck
Not feelin this
The punches I speak be like a loaded shotty that I'll break out n shoot
Lately we don't see any Real $pit wen u talk...since he slapped the taste out'a u
nah
Hate this kid. Snipe shooter wit the small iron be blazing him
If my point is well taken? It's hallowed lead & a 1shot kill through ya cranium
Played concept n not flipped very well
Ya bitch bout belt holders, & after this she won't abide ur loyal treatment
But i'll hear "Noq's @ the door" After this, wen ya girl shows up to clean my royal penis
ehhhh, I think this had potential but as is it falls flat for me
& I beat that hoes cunt, while u make her let out a rappish, fret screams
u ever mentioned wit MUFF Destroyer? It's prob chop'n those fags concepts that u take from Netcees
nahh

vs

I thought I taught u a lesson, U ain't improve nothin.
Our last battle was a wake up call & this is the lifetime snooze button.
not feelin this as is
Doggystyle & Missionary comes to mind when a skeezer pass',
I bet this Gaylords favorite Position is being the CEO's secret fag.
pass and fag does not rhyme whatsoever for me, and this was weak as well to me
I'll do dawg vicisious, Ginsu to the throat he'll be on floor spittin;
Up blood after I cut his 'Juggler' quick as a bad Circus audition.
This was weird to me
Dude thinks he's in rare form?, Fuck the tone in his grammar,
Him being in his Prime'll mean he's the farthest thing from goin BANANAS!
jab here
Chicks won't smooch on this goblin!, that's word to me, Buddy.
Girls don't consider this 'Imp peck'able' but they do say he's Perfectly ugly.
Imp peckable is forced to me, n kind of a weak flip
I was apart of a 'Flash Mob' We had fun and danced in public,
Kill once 'Flashed Mobs' w/ his penis & over went lots of damage from it.
nahh
If Raps was wounds, Mines read like a wide gash.
Lookin at his u 'Read scratch', Like robbing bank $ w/ a dye pack.
not feelin it
he ain't ready for text scene, I'm the best seen.
& this verse'll leave his ass shooken enough to be a twerkers wet dream.
weak

Not a great champ match here/ Unfuk came wayy weaker than he usually does. Killing spree had broken jaw and gluten whereas Unfuk only had primal imo. Close one, but I'm going w/ spree here.

v/KS

[Greedy]

Killin spree:
Opener was average.
Gluten was absolutely mad. The ending execution of the punchline was lacking, but very well done here
Real spit was ok. Had to read that battle to get the personal reference.
Royal pens was nice, as coming to America was just on


vs

uncomfortable:

I liked the snooze button line
Juggler was creative
Bananas was bananas
Impeccable worked for me
Closer was nice.

hmm. I'm going against the grain here and voting for uncomfortable.
Killin spree, your gluten line was by leaps and bounds the line of the battle. But unfk was more consistent.

Vote unfkwtbl.

[Massaker]

4-2 ks. Uppin