5 bars
Due midnight
Blind spit
Hipster
Niccateen
5 bars
Due midnight
Blind spit
check ill post links with verse..finishing up at work then ill get to this..gluck hip
hips a monster with text, every kid i face gets brutally wrecked
Im on the prowl, N I C A Teen about to get demolished next
Im in my zone And unbeatable, it'll be too late when that sinks in
While you're in your zone...
...Waiting for the clock to strike 00 to snatch up a cheap win
You're useless in the bedroom, your sex game is just too simplistic
Even if a bitch wanted to be ate out, she still wouldn't picnic
Been battling for a decade.. Your whole career is lame as fuck
Ironic that your name is "nick", yet you've never even made a cut
I'm the type that won't go to heaven, I'll kill you where you stand sir
if I don't, I'll see you inhell, niccateen and hope you drop dead from cancer
thanks guys n i wasnt going for a cheap win look at the time of my post n ur post count lol was unsure if ud show
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...open-for-votes
Stupid Dick, I lay the pipe with your girl then i Leave her,
Then Nicc Takes Out Hip Like A Surgical Procedure...
Wouldnt Even Call His Attack Violent Nicc'll Leave His Strife In Shambles,
Cas This Vegas Native Got A Death Wish But Hey Its His Life to Gamble.
Nicc'll Shit On Your Career and This Is The Web Page Where It Ends,
Cas You'll See All Voters Are "ForTeen" Like The Age of His Friends. (Age14)
Hips So Easy to Slaughter 6 Feet Deep is Where His Body And Earth Touch,
Cheap Win? I Have No Choice Cas "Hipsters Life" Never Really Been Worth Much.
Hipster Youll Never Be Champ So Dont Expect Voters to Have Partial Hearts,
Cas Only Time Well See A "Belt Around Hips" Is Rankings In Martial Arts.
sorry for the no show verse didnt relize ur time zone Hipster... Gluck back to work for me brakes over
Hipster:
hips a monster with text, every kid i face gets brutally wrecked
Im on the prowl, N I C A Teen about to get demolished next
No punchline really here just a threat, single syllable rhyme scheme, but okay moving on.
Im in my zone And unbeatable, it'll be too late when that sinks in
While you're in your zone...
...Waiting for the clock to strike 00 to snatch up a cheap win
I guess given his reaction its kind of a personal, rhyme was okay.
You're useless in the bedroom, your sex game is just too simplistic
Even if a bitch wanted to be ate out, she still wouldn't picnic
I actually quite like this concept, I think it could have been flipped to devestating effect,
hmmm
(And he never gets laid, cuz this dudes too simplistic
she asked him to eat her out he took the bitch on a picnic)
still probably your best bar..
Been battling for a decade.. Your whole career is lame as fuck
Ironic that your name is "nick", yet you've never even made a cut
Okay.
I'm the type that won't go to heaven, I'll kill you where you stand sir
if I don't, I'll see you inhell, niccateen and hope you drop dead from cancer
Not the hardest hitting closer ever, decent verse overall.
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Nicc
Stupid Dick, I lay the pipe with your girl then i Leave her,
Then Nicc Takes Out Hip Like A Surgical Procedure...
Yeah, pretty solid opener there I like.
Wouldnt Even Call His Attack Violent Nicc'll Leave His Strife In Shambles,
Cas This Vegas Native Got A Death Wish But Hey Its His Life to Gamble.
Okay not bad, punch is tailored at least.
Nicc'll Shit On Your Career and This Is The Web Page Where It Ends,
Cas You'll See All Voters Are "ForTeen" Like The Age of His Friends. (Age14)
Pretty creative personal, wish you hadn't explained it threw my read off a bit but good.
Hips So Easy to Slaughter 6 Feet Deep is Where His Body And Earth Touch,
Cheap Win? I Have No Choice Cas "Hipsters Life" Never Really Been Worth Much.
Meh, I don't like the flipping of his verse so much because he doesn't have the same luxury.
Hipster Youll Never Be Champ So Dont Expect Voters to Have Partial Hearts,
Cas Only Time Well See A "Belt Around Hips" Is Rankings In Martial Arts.
Or...any other time someone is wearing a belt I would think, anyway concept had potential...
My Vote: NiccAteen
A couple more solid bars by Nicc get him the win. Hip's picnic line could have been the best bar in the battle.
I'm the type that won't go to heaven, I'll kill you where you stand sir
if I don't, I'll see you inhell, niccateen and hope you drop dead from cancer
vs,
garbage
weak battle. a lot of played and forced shit..
vote - hipster for better punches.
Hipster:
Picnic, cancer
vs
nicc:
Take out hip
weak battle. I've got hipster taking this
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Bump.
You flipped hipster's cheap win line in your verse, which is against the rules.Originally Posted by NiccAteen
It's up to @Hipster if he want's the win via DQ or not.
Nah leave it open yo. Hopefully we get some votes in
I'm the type that won't go to heaven, I'll kill you where you stand sir
if I don't, I'll see you inhell, niccateen and hope you drop dead from cancer
This was dope.
vs
Decent concepts w/ poor executions.
I've left feed in one of your other battles. Basically, same shit applies here bro. YOu have the mechanics down & conceptually are decent but your executions lack any real impact bro. Peep your other battle and see the feed I left. Don't really feel I need to type the same shit twice... Work on those things and you'll be straight, my man.
v/Hipster
3-1 appreciate the votes.
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