10, 48.. im dropping soon
lenox
enbombz
10, 48.. im dropping soon
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 28th, 2015 at 02:31 AM
switching aliases? whatever.
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This is my main account you dingle berry cock sucking faggot
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I'll bury you in battle fucker, cut you cause I'm sick,
when I Spit on your grave, it'll have u thinking it's that low budget flick,
My killers ready to take you out, it's bout to get personal,
So I'll Levis on Player without that Brett Farve commercial,
Fat fuck is always getting destroyed, he better take fists,
I'd tell him to keep his chin up, but that'd reunite Joan Rivers face lifts,
Don't be fooled by this wangster, his type of fag is way rare,
If he ever says 'word on the block is' he's just helping at his sons daycare,
Stripping on poles for free, <-- that whore is your mother,
She's had more shots missed on hole then outside of a Normandy bunker
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Whether its lennox, joker card or johny blaze - with each ya text is basic
needless to say, you provide more weak accounts than the michael brown investigation,
Recycling ain't writing, kid you've got it confused,
So no surprise you bite the template for votings what not to do,
U immigrated, now the u.s streets give me hate when you drop a piece,
But your out the u.k so that ransoms only a small fee for the price of your release
Good riddens you immigrant, you clearly a queer moron,
U moving was more of a win, than getting rid of piers Morgan,
Generic plays and wack concepts- u won't even mention me,
That's why in taking down this ox as if this was a nature documentory
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485410
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485429
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not my best read but enbombz took it, most of what both of you wrote made little sense and wasn't put together well, better luck next time
This will have to be elaborated more man... These little rinky dinky votes will not be accepted. -Fresh
Last edited by Fresh; March 16th, 2015 at 03:34 PM
Massaker can u remove that vote^
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I'll bury you in battle fucker, cut you cause I'm sick,
when I Spit on your grave, it'll have u thinking it's that low budget flick,
this was ok, could have used rewording to make it more directed at him but its not bad
My killers ready to take you out, it's bout to get personal,
So I'll Levis on Player without that Brett Farve commercial,
leave eyes is played and u didn't flip it nicely
Fat fuck is always getting destroyed, he better take fists,
I'd tell him to keep his chin up, but that'd reunite Joan Rivers face lifts,
ehh this is pretty vague, coulda done something with this probably but falls flat as is
Don't be fooled by this wangster, his type of fag is way rare,
If he ever says 'word on the block is' he's just helping at his sons daycare,
this is okkkkkk, but not very harsh. You're basically saying he's not a gangster but he is a good father lol. Try to not leave any room for compliments, make it more harsh
Stripping on poles for free, <-- that whore is your mother,
She's had more shots missed on hole then outside of a Normandy bunker
nah
vs
Whether its lennox, joker card or johny blaze - with each ya text is basic
needless to say, you provide more weak accounts than the michael brown investigation,
Not feelin it
Recycling ain't writing, kid you've got it confused,
So no surprise you bite the template for votings what not to do,
eh this was weird
U immigrated, now the u.s streets give me hate when you drop a piece,
But your out the u.k so that ransoms only a small fee for the price of your release
not feelin it
Good riddens you immigrant, you clearly a queer moron,
U moving was more of a win, than getting rid of piers Morgan,
way too basic bro
Generic plays and wack concepts- u won't even mention me,
That's why in taking down this ox as if this was a nature documentory
ur gettin the idea but this is a weak punchline
bombz got some practicing to do, he's got the idea some of the times but he's gotta tie in his set ups with the punchline to make em hit harder, and hes gotta learn how to form concepts and deliver them better. Lenox had spit on ur grave was almost a hit and so was word on the block is.. Enbombz didn't bring anything to the table here, so mvgt Lenox/.
v/Lenox
Spit on your grave- nice
Vs.
Ox line lol
Enbombs came very basic. No real sting to any of his lines- it fell flat IMO. Lenox had a lot of jabs, many were ehh or okish. But overall he had a more polarizing & appealing verse.
Vote- lenox
Lenox
I'll bury you in battle fucker, cut you cause I'm sick,
when I Spit on your grave, it'll have u thinking it's that low budget flick,
good concept nice flip
My killers ready to take you out, it's bout to get personal,
So I'll Levis on Player without that Brett Farve commercial,
good concept but wasn't flipped to the point it had good execution
Fat fuck is always getting destroyed, he better take fists,
I'd tell him to keep his chin up, but that'd reunite Joan Rivers face lifts,
wording fucked u here again
Don't be fooled by this wangster, his type of fag is way rare,
If he ever says 'word on the block is' he's just helping at his sons daycare,
made me laugh but again ur execution falls flat
Stripping on poles for free, <-- that whore is your mother,
She's had more shots missed on hole then outside of a Normandy bunker
didn't like this concept
Enbombz
Whether its lennox, joker card or johny blaze - with each ya text is basic
needless to say, you provide more weak accounts than the michael brown investigation,
old concept also thought the wording on the finish was a bit of a stretch
Recycling ain't writing, kid you've got it confused,
So no surprise you bite the template for votings what not to do,
didn't like the execution of the finisher
U immigrated, now the u.s streets give me hate when you drop a piece,
But your out the u.k so that ransoms only a small fee for the price of your release
nah
Good riddens you immigrant, you clearly a queer moron,
U moving was more of a win, than getting rid of piers Morgan,
no
Generic plays and wack concepts- u won't even mention me,
That's why in taking down this ox as if this was a nature documentory
ok nameplay
Enbombz execution of bars fell flat to me u need to be more creative most of ur bars came off too basic. lenox good attempts at concepts but still ur wording affects u.
V/Lenox just felt he had better attempts at his concepts even though wording is still an issue
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I'll bury you in battle fucker, cut you cause I'm sick,
when I Spit on your grave, it'll have u thinking it's that low budget flick,
ehh, this the only concept that really stuck,...too straight foward
vs
Whether its lennox, joker card or johny blaze - with each ya text is basic
needless to say, you provide more weak accounts than the michael brown investigation,
good concept
v.lennox/
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I meant EnBombz
Dafuq is this? This vote will have to be elaborated more to be acceptable. -Fresh
...Onslaught!
Thought Lens opener wasn't very effective saying you'll spit on someones grave isn't really hard hitting imo. Leave eyes Levis again wasn't really much of a diss for me. The Joan rivers concept was cool but the wording of it threw the whole bar off. Word on the block was corny tbh, the closer was a miss to me tbh. I thought En's opener was LOTB Even though the Michael brown trial was kind of a while back the wording snd execution made it funny for me. The rest of the verse was iffy tho tbh, bunch of uk disses. So en gets my vote for the 1 quotable.
Vote~> Enbombz
Re: Lenox Vs EnBombz[open for votes]
I'll bury you in battle fucker, cut you cause I'm sick,
when I Spit on your grave, it'll have u thinking it's that low budget flick,
nah
My killers ready to take you out, it's bout to get personal,
So I'll Levis on Player without that Brett Farve commercial,
could have been used better but ok attempt on wp
Fat fuck is always getting destroyed, he better take fists,
I'd tell him to keep his chin up, but that'd reunite Joan Rivers face lifts,
again, you have the concepts but arent executing them effectively
Don't be fooled by this wangster, his type of fag is way rare,
If he ever says 'word on the block is' he's just helping at his sons daycare,
lmao @ wangster, this line has me dead
Stripping on poles for free, <-- that whore is your mother,
She's had more shots missed on hole then outside of a Normandy bunker
nah
vs
Whether its lennox, joker card or johny blaze - with each ya text is basic
needless to say, you provide more weak accounts than the michael brown investigation,
meh
Recycling ain't writing, kid you've got it confused,
So no surprise you bite the template for votings what not to do,
[b]no
U immigrated, now the u.s streets give me hate when you drop a piece,
But your out the u.k so that ransoms only a small fee for the price of your release
no
Good riddens you immigrant, you clearly a queer moron,
U moving was more of a win, than getting rid of piers Morgan,
forced as hell lol doesnt go
Generic plays and wack concepts- u won't even mention me,
That's why in taking down this ox as if this was a nature documentory
meh
Weak battle here, not too much to talk about or quote..im gonna give it to Lenox for having better concepts and rhyming...
Vote: Lenox
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