5 Bars
due tonight
Infamous
Killing Spree
5 Bars
due tonight
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 29th, 2015 at 01:29 PM
@Killing Spree
for those who dont know me im infamous, vet status watch me trash the chump
'no backing out im the victor An-a-l is what im giving him....ya ass if fucked..(pause)
I blast the weapon, with nonthing major just a lil .22 and i wont even scalp dude
bullet ricochet in u,
doctors will have to 'shop in spree and rush to try an take everything out you..
dont even show up,after me nobody will even care for what you said anyway
u lost once ya 'asset the match,and 'writing will' only prove this battle was a'dead give-away..
Why you carry yaself like a vet,tone down that confidence cuz ya talk is misleading
if your was a character on GTA ud be a member of the 'Lost MC for obvious reasons..
when it comes to smashing chicks,u a disgrace,and we all lost faith in you man
maybe thats y ur a fan of scorpion...you known for having your snake in your hand..
...Onslaught!
Check
I'll have my links and verse around noon
Infamous
For those who don't know a misconduct is a fighting penalty in hockey
See you...
A known faggit into ass shit but hide behind a thug scene
We knew u were bout stickin E in the butt, & ur method wasn't to get that in ya blood stream
Ya not the shit, smash ya head wit a hockey stick & announce u a lame
I've' analyzed Misconduct, & this fight'll have'm KO's on ice n out for the game
I'll kick ya future to the curb, so know against me you'll be shook, scared
I'll stomp your fuckin chest so hard they'll be able to use ya heart in a commercial for foot wear
My gun scorn, ya lungs torn sonny, nothing can be done more
I get happy a punch for islands, cos I'm drinkin thinkin bout how I dumped ur body off ones shore
U foolish if u think bruising me. Ya head'll spin
& I'll leave ya lips and nose so swollen u could wear a button up & look like letterman
Good night
@The Infamous @Killing Spree need 2 links by midnight or this is closed.
Infamous: Snake in your hand
Vs
Killing Spree: KO's on ice, letterman, footwear.
Overall: This was a decent battle, I felt Infamous definitely could of went way harder in this battle, but he did have some pretty go attempts and concepts just they were not executed very well. KS, you had a dope battle for sure, but the negatives were that your wording fucked you up on some bars, in a result of KS having 3 quotes & infamous having 1.. I got spree taking this.
Vote: Killing Spree
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...Onslaught!
Up for some votes
inf's opener was whack af
shoppin spree had potential but u did it wrong, wordy af
same w/ the next one. asset the match was cool but the rest of the concept killed it, not feeling at all
lost mc was corny
avatar diss closer was shitty. not a good verse, rusty maybe?
vs
E in the but was ehh, ok I guess
misconduct was decent/better than opener. already enough to take the battle
chest shit was on the played visual side imo, seen too much shit like that
islands was crap
closer was shitty also
v/killing spree
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Infamous
for those who dont know me im infamous, vet status watch me trash the chump
'no backing out im the victor An-a-l is what im giving him....ya ass if fucked..(pause)
no forced basic no creativity
I blast the weapon, with nonthing major just a lil .22 and i wont even scalp dude
bullet ricochet in u,
doctors will have to 'shop in spree and rush to try an take everything out you..
ok this was pretty cool flip and the shopping spree nameplay wasn't predictable I liked the more direct execution u did there hard impact
dont even show up,after me nobody will even care for what you said anyway
u lost once ya 'asset the match,and 'writing will' only prove this battle was a'dead give-away..
felt the wording and execution of this finisher could've been executed better little of a stretch kinda choppy
Why you carry yaself like a vet,tone down that confidence cuz ya talk is misleading
if your was a character on GTA ud be a member of the 'Lost MC for obvious reasons..
nah
when it comes to smashing chicks,u a disgrace,and we all lost faith in you man
maybe thats y ur a fan of scorpion...you known for having your snake in your hand..
lol
shopping spree and ur closer was pretty decent other then that I felt some of the other concepts were too much of a stretch with the wordplay u was trying to attempt
Killing spree
A known faggit into ass shit but hide behind a thug scene
We knew u were bout stickin E in the butt, & ur method wasn't to get that in ya blood stream
ok if that's a personal good flip on it lol
Ya not the shit, smash ya head wit a hockey stick & announce u a lame
I've' analyzed Misconduct, & this fight'll have'm KO's on ice n out for the game
didn't like how u executed the wording on this
I'll kick ya future to the curb, so know against me you'll be shook, scared
I'll stomp your fuckin chest so hard they'll be able to use ya heart in a commercial for foot wear
ok nice direct punch hard impact
My gun scorn, ya lungs torn sonny, nothing can be done more
I get happy a punch for islands, cos I'm drinkin thinkin bout how I dumped ur body off ones shore
too stretched
U foolish if u think bruising me. Ya head'll spin
& I'll leave ya lips and nose so swollen u could wear a button up & look like letterman
lol
good opener the foot wear line was dope and ur closer had good humor factor. the misconduct line was butchered by ur wording and the punch for a islands was pretty stretched.
I felt infamous could've won this if he had another hardhitting concepts he was trying to attempt wordplays that didn't really work like ive said before I personally think hes better with the hardhitting direct blows. killng spree good personal opener the footwear line and closer won this for him by being a hair more consistent.
V/KIlling spree
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This was honestly a really close battle.
Infamous- You had some strong barz and some misses. The ones that missed were more of a statement punchline. By that I mean there wasnt a concept or angle you flipped into a punch. Just rhyming a few words without set ups, a concept and not connecting to a punch hurt the verse. No hate man, you've got skillz, just here thought some spots could have been worded better.
Spree- you had the stronger punches and used some cool angles to land the punch. The middle part really was hitting and you were more consistent then infamous. You seem pretty active at the moment in the battle area...although i'm new you've shown true grasp of creating a battle verse.
Vote- Spree
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