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Chicken Nigglet
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Last edited by Donald Trump; March 26th, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Check. @Chicken Nigglet
That's better lol check
Listen son you've been a prick to some, pull this pistol n see Chicken run
We'd rather grip the gun than watch tat film or read a verse niglet done
Ugly cunt got labia lips I'd gladly rip em off , hardly fit ur mug
I mean if dude goes to kiss a chick his peck could prolly give a hug
I will be walking on egg shells easily show u the feet
So I'll step on anything chicken produce, its not hard t beat
N ur gal no1s seen herbivore... i have bitches squirting, dogs a heavy weight
If dude ever sees a chick pee, its in his soup cuz I left em in a veggie state
If looks cud kill, first glance @ his pic'd be instant death
If you're "comin up the ranks" is cuz u fuckin nasty bitches w/ vicious breath
Re: alphadog vs chicken niglet
nigglet has more chicks than alpha, hows that for a name twist
cuz when i unleash the alphadog.. it means im takin out the main bitch
ill put the dog to sleep, watch him slowly decay n leave the body to rot
the AK will snapchat this nigga.. he only havin seconds before he see the shot
u dont want beef with me alpha, ill show u a blade thats known for stealin'
cuz whenever im gettin in a dog fight.. my knife is always gettin a gut feelin'
but i get why he gets no girls, he's rude, disrespectful and a man of no class
cuz whenever i catch dog checkin a bitch out he's always sniff'n harass
and idk what wolfpack u run with, ur just a lil kid runnin round makin noise
ill put lil man in check, shit im the menace, first ima kill him.. Dennis boys
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 26th, 2015 at 12:22 AM
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I will be walking on egg shells easily show u the feet
So I'll step on anything chicken produce, its not hard t beat
Had potential. Fell flat tho.
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nigglet has more chicks than alpha, hows that for a name twist
cuz when i unleash the alphadog.. it means im takin out the main bitch
Basic name play but slick.
but i get why he gets no girls, he's rude, disrespectful and a man of no class
cuz whenever i catch dog checkin a bitch out he's always sniff'n harass
This was good. I liked it.
and idk what wolfpack u run with, ur just a lil kid runnin round makin noise
ill put lil man in check, shit im the menace, first ima kill him.. Dennis boys
Choppy wording. Could have been cleaned up but concept good even tho and old reference.
v/Chicken - Better & more effective bars.
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Alpha... Give a hug was hilarious.
That's it. Chiccpee could have been cool. And your misses went way wide. This verse is way better than what I've seen you battle with
Chick. Harass,
Your verse was weak and generic imo
Overall. Not a good battle. This was a close one tho. Alphas misses were hard misses. Poorly executed and didn't rhyme bars and chicken over did it with weak name plays but his wording was better and punches executed better and that's what this battle came down to for me.
Vote chicken faggot
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Listen son you've been a prick to some, pull this pistol n see Chicken run
We'd rather grip the gun than watch tat film or read a verse niglet done
nice flow, okay wordplay, but the idea of the punch isn't really saying anything.
Ugly cunt got labia lips I'd gladly rip em off , hardly fit ur mug
I mean if dude goes to kiss a chick his peck could prolly give a hug
Once again nice rhyme, and i get the play but the whole things pretty nonsensical.
I will be walking on egg shells easily show u the feet
So I'll step on anything chicken produce, its not hard t beat
This made sense. okay jab . Show u the feet tho? lol
N ur gal no1s seen herbivore... i have bitches squirting, dogs a heavy weight
If dude ever sees a chick pee, its in his soup cuz I left em in a veggie state
All word plays and no substance man.
If looks cud kill, first glance @ his pic'd be instant death
If you're "comin up the ranks" is cuz u fuckin nasty bitches w/ vicious breath
This was decent, punchline worded better would of been pretty tight, your best bar dude.
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nigglet has more chicks than alpha, hows that for a name twist
cuz when i unleash the alphadog.. it means im takin out the main bitch
worded better this would of been solid. "unleash" ruined the idea but i get what u tried. okay
ill put the dog to sleep, watch him slowly decay n leave the body to rot
the AK will snapchat this nigga.. he only havin seconds before he see the shot
okay idea, a jab.
u dont want beef with me alpha, ill show u a blade thats known for stealin'
cuz whenever im gettin in a dog fight.. my knife is always gettin a gut feelin'
okay concept if not a bit on the generic side.
but i get why he gets no girls, he's rude, disrespectful and a man of no class
cuz whenever i catch dog checkin a bitch out he's always sniff'n harass
the dog plays are gettin done a bit now. i get the idea but it soft.
and idk what wolfpack u run with, ur just a lil kid runnin round makin noise
ill put lil man in check, shit im the menace, first ima kill him.. Dennis boys
no. dennis the menace reference was amusing though.
alpha your flow was nice and rhyming was good but it was a lot of unfinished concepts. Nice wordplays, but just not direct enough throughout with the punches. Niglet you had a couple bars like alpha.s weaker bars in a sense too. Your wording and references is what hurt your verse most but i felt it was more direct. Punches were better overall too. I think nig had 2 of the best 3 and misss were better overall.
Mvgt niglet
If looks cud kill, first glance @ his pic'd be instant death
If you're "comin up the ranks" is cuz u fuckin nasty bitches w/ vicious breath
-ok..nonthing special,
vs
and idk what wolfpack u run with, ur just a lil kid runnin round makin noise
ill put lil man in check, shit im the menace, first ima kill him.. Dennis boys
-nice wordplay, and it hit
v.chicken/ alpha had way too many misses in this one
...Onslaught!
If looks cud kill, first glance @ his pic'd be instant death
If you're "comin up the ranks" is cuz u fuckin nasty bitches w/ vicious breath
-only thing that really connected
vs
and idk what wolfpack u run with, ur just a lil kid runnin round makin noise
ill put lil man in check, shit im the menace, first ima kill him.. Dennis boys
-good wordplay,hit well
v.chicken/alpha had too many misses
...Onslaught!
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