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Thread: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [KS wins 4-1]

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    Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [KS wins 4-1]

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    Ur dead
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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    Ready for Blind drops

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    Hes the type that dont watch boxing then say the floyd n pac fight was fixed
    If his knowledge of any boxer brief hes telling ILL that Zelph is posting pics
    Quick Victory in a Tag match ur dissapointment couldnt be any realer
    I didnt need Coup to show now your probably making bomb threats to the German Car Dealer
    found out ur chick lets me kneel her and ur ready to give that ring
    just talking about it gives you the blues but bitch hopes u die like BB King
    Battling is relatively not ur thing so that ego ill flatten it son
    Hes like i beat u with every Bar Rhet then fag went out for drinks and got his hair done
    His bitch needs some real fun he cant sastify her clearly
    So when im ready to blast off she come to the Rocket close like a fucking Clippers series
    Ur not scary dangerous or threatening u aint harming by far
    One shot from the Smith N Wesson will kill this fag at his favorite salad bar
    Ur mudering skills aint up to par Joe all about living up to danger for a reason
    So u think ur blade get a piece Ovechkin im ending it like the Capitols Season
    U drive hoopties that take a beating just letting those miles run
    Claiming Dzokhars suck and u should get the death penalty just for riding one

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    Joe boston


    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    Cuz it's dying lol I kid I kid but yo sup with the tag match u gonna make it a draw?
    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    @Killing Spree u just wanna say draw to that tag battle shits been open for a month lol.




    Multies are ur life punches with impact of no type why they exposing ur hype
    This can end in a Killing Spree no gifts a broken Christmas tree and a live fatality over Skype
    Bar vs celph

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    Yo I swear I just had the drool cup and helmet dee dee dee moment n shit I'm on my phone I scrolled down n found it rofl



    You will NOT survive faggot


    Read...


    I said...
    Look @ this slob, kids bout the pussy - only cos he gooshy n soft
    Ya u won the tag match, but fag that's the only time u been pushin for draws
    Battling me s'like punchin ur own face, I'm bad for ya health
    So just let killing spree end ya,B...like ya battle wit self
    This mans a wreck, I'll beat his prego hoe with my hands in text
    One hook'll have her spittin out blood, in the same cup this retard tried handing fresh
    U burn through greedy money? False! This poor dude lame
    So we'll light candles around joe the same way joo preyed
    & you'll be in a vegtable state, as soon as my fist takes course
    Have a fam member die per punch, till there's none left to change yours
    Every time we battle u get shot, now I'm driving u down n out
    & next time we cross in'a section I'll show u what a round about
    U got a kid due any minute, fuck that baby host what I spits tarin
    ...Cut her gut while she grocery shopping
    Than Put the insides inside a basket & show u the miscarriage
    My wrist shot'll have ya chin rocked, U'll be droppin quick
    & whoever sayin jofa real? I'll break their neck wit a hockey stick

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    @Joe Boston he posted a day late WITH an ext.

    Up to u if u want this to open for votes.

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    @Joe Boston he posted a day late WITH an ext.

    Up to u if u want this to open for votes.
    Yeah it's cool fresh he's an alcoholic he fell asleep
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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Ready for blind votes

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Hes the type that dont watch boxing then say the floyd n pac fight was fixed
    If his knowledge of any boxer brief hes telling ILL that Zelph is posting pics
    decent
    Quick Victory in a Tag match ur dissapointment couldnt be any realer
    I didnt need Coup to show now your probably making bomb threats to the German Car Dealer
    meh
    found out ur chick lets me kneel her and ur ready to give that ring
    just talking about it gives you the blues but bitch hopes u die like BB King
    nahh
    Battling is relatively not ur thing so that ego ill flatten it son
    Hes like i beat u with every Bar Rhet then fag went out for drinks and got his hair done
    not feelin this
    His bitch needs some real fun he cant sastify her clearly
    So when im ready to blast off she come to the Rocket close like a fucking Clippers series
    good
    Ur not scary dangerous or threatening u aint harming by far
    One shot from the Smith N Wesson will kill this fag at his favorite salad bar
    meh
    Ur mudering skills aint up to par Joe all about living up to danger for a reason
    So u think ur blade get a piece Ovechkin im ending it like the Capitols Season
    OK
    U drive hoopties that take a beating just letting those miles run
    Claiming Dzokhars suck and u should get the death penalty just for riding one
    decent



    Multies are ur life punches with impact of no type why they exposing ur hype
    This can end in a Killing Spree no gifts a broken Christmas tree and a live fatality over Skype
    filler
    Look @ this slob, kids bout the pussy - only cos he gooshy n soft
    Ya u won the tag match, but fag that's the only time u been pushin for draws
    nahh
    Battling me s'like punchin ur own face, I'm bad for ya health
    So just let killing spree end ya,B...like ya battle wit self
    not feeling it
    This mans a wreck, I'll beat his prego hoe with my hands in text
    One hook'll have her spittin out blood, in the same cup this retard tried handing fresh
    nah bro
    U burn through greedy money? False! This poor dude lame
    So we'll light candles around joe the same way joo preyed
    decent
    & you'll be in a vegtable state, as soon as my fist takes course
    Have a fam member die per punch, till there's none left to change yours
    good!
    Every time we battle u get shot, now I'm driving u down n out
    & next time we cross in'a section I'll show u what a round about
    decent
    U got a kid due any minute, fuck that baby host what I spits tarin
    ...Cut her gut while she grocery shopping
    Than Put the insides inside a basket & show u the miscarriage
    this is just wrong lol
    My wrist shot'll have ya chin rocked, U'll be droppin quick
    & whoever sayin jofa real? I'll break their neck wit a hockey stick
    decent


    Hes the type that dont watch boxing then say the floyd n pac fight was fixed
    If his knowledge of any boxer brief hes telling ILL that Zelph is posting pics
    His bitch needs some real fun he cant sastify her clearly
    So when im ready to blast off she come to the Rocket close like a fucking Clippers series
    U drive hoopties that take a beating just letting those miles run
    Claiming Dzokhars suck and u should get the death penalty just for riding one

    vs

    & you'll be in a vegtable state, as soon as my fist takes course
    Have a fam member die per punch, till there's none left to change yours

    Every time we battle u get shot, now I'm driving u down n out
    & next time we cross in'a section I'll show u what a round about
    My wrist shot'll have ya chin rocked, U'll be droppin quick
    & whoever sayin jofa real? I'll break their neck wit a hockey stick


    Close battle... i'll be honest i've seen a lot better from both. Joe you had some good concepts but your wording really let you down man. KS I thought you were gonna flop completely but you turned it around in the last half of your verse.. just wish you didnt include them fucked up lines about his future child you def lost some points from me there.

    However it was close, I do have KS edging the win with both having the same amount of quotables but KS having the BOTB.

    V- Killing Spree

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    Cool Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    jb

    boxer brief is played but current event tied in
    lol at using my name but I don't get it
    blues bb King shit is pretty playd
    berret is pretty plyd as well not flippd creatively
    rocket close was ehh came off pretty oddly felt like more of a statement
    salad bar didn't make n e sense to me
    capitols bar was cool not a bad reference at all
    closer didn't wnd well didn't connect reference came off bland

    not a bad verse u stress the current events a lot which gets redundant other then that just work on wording n u'll be strate

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    Opener was cool decent personal coulda been harsher
    spree end ya b don't make sense to me
    ehh personal could've been better here was more like a statement
    jo preyed don't work for me might be missing the angle u were headed
    diaper word play is used n abused nothing new here
    round a bout was pretty cool feelin it
    miscarriage was grime but I liked it
    close was creative n connected not a bad way to finish

    kill u where hit n miss but hit more then ur oppontney


    Kill pulled it together towards the end w out those last 4 bars it was a toss up

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Hes the type that dont watch boxing then say the floyd n pac fight was fixed
    If his knowledge of any boxer brief hes telling ILL that Zelph is posting pics
    This didn't make sense to me... I get boxer brief wordplay but the set up and shit was weird.. Coulda done soemthing with this but as is this falls flat
    Quick Victory in a Tag match ur dissapointment couldnt be any realer
    I didnt need Coup to show now your probably making bomb threats to the German Car Dealer
    nah didn't like this
    found out ur chick lets me kneel her and ur ready to give that ring
    just talking about it gives you the blues but bitch hopes u die like BB King
    set up was really weird here too.. I'll give a jab for this
    Battling is relatively not ur thing so that ego ill flatten it son
    Hes like i beat u with every Bar Rhet then fag went out for drinks and got his hair done
    bar rhet / barrette works but you just placed it there for the sake of the wordplay and the set up made no sense in correlation to the punch. Not feelin this
    His bitch needs some real fun he cant sastify her clearly
    So when im ready to blast off she come to the Rocket close like a fucking Clippers series
    Not feelin this
    Ur not scary dangerous or threatening u aint harming by far
    One shot from the Smith N Wesson will kill this fag at his favorite salad bar
    Am I missing sometihng here?
    Ur mudering skills aint up to par Joe all about living up to danger for a reason
    So u think ur blade get a piece Ovechkin im ending it like the Capitols Season
    Not sure what the wordplay was supposed to be here... Ovechkin sounds like oh vetch kin
    U drive hoopties that take a beating just letting those miles run
    Claiming Dzokhars suck and u should get the death penalty just for riding one
    Nah man...

    vs

    Look @ this slob, kids bout the pussy - only cos he gooshy n soft
    Ya u won the tag match, but fag that's the only time u been pushin for draws
    Not feeling this
    Battling me s'like punchin ur own face, I'm bad for ya health
    So just let killing spree end ya,B...like ya battle wit self
    Didn't like this
    This mans a wreck, I'll beat his prego hoe with my hands in text
    One hook'll have her spittin out blood, in the same cup this retard tried handing fresh
    Eh?
    U burn through greedy money? False! This poor dude lame
    So we'll light candles around joe the same way joo preyed
    not feeling this
    & you'll be in a vegtable state, as soon as my fist takes course
    Have a fam member die per punch, till there's none left to change yours
    ehhhh.. I'ma give u a jab here but diaper doesn't sound like die per to me
    Every time we battle u get shot, now I'm driving u down n out
    & next time we cross in'a section I'll show u what a round about
    I'll give a jab for this
    U got a kid due any minute, fuck that baby host what I spits tarin
    ...Cut her gut while she grocery shopping
    Than Put the insides inside a basket & show u the miscarriage
    Coulda done something w/ miscarriage this falls flat as is
    My wrist shot'll have ya chin rocked, U'll be droppin quick
    & whoever sayin jofa real? I'll break their neck wit a hockey stick
    Ok


    Damn this was a weak Champ Match man... Joe you use some weird wordplays and when u do have wordplay that makes sense you don't tie it in properly. KS you have kinda of the same problem but you had a couple ok hits here so you're gonna get the dub.

    v/KS

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    3 votes received

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    Re: Killing Spree vs Joe Boston [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    Hes the type that dont watch boxing then say the floyd n pac fight was fixed
    If his knowledge of any boxer brief hes telling ILL that Zelph is posting pics
    Quick Victory in a Tag match ur dissapointment couldnt be any realer
    I didnt need Coup to show now your probably making bomb threats to the German Car Dealer
    found out ur chick lets me kneel her and ur ready to give that ring
    just talking about it gives you the blues but bitch hopes u die like BB King
    Battling is relatively not ur thing so that ego ill flatten it son
    Hes like i beat u with every Bar Rhet then fag went out for drinks and got his hair done
    His bitch needs some real fun he cant sastify her clearly
    So when im ready to blast off she come to the Rocket close like a fucking Clippers series
    Ur not scary dangerous or threatening u aint harming by far
    One shot from the Smith N Wesson will kill this fag at his favorite salad bar
    Ur mudering skills aint up to par Joe all about living up to danger for a reason
    So u think ur blade get a piece Ovechkin im ending it like the Capitols Season
    U drive hoopties that take a beating just letting those miles run
    Claiming Dzokhars suck and u should get the death penalty just for riding one

    16
    Before I penny loafer all over this let me just say thanks for letting me vote, poetry in motion. That being said I think its important to remember that this is just an opinion and no matter who does their thing bling bling chicken wing in the end we can't all be Friend.

    1 = I expected a more from the set-up but funny second line hit and the first bar connected. 4/5
    2= Second bar was soft, wordplay & punch. 2/5
    3 = Current events are cool to flip, I think playing with the kneel her rhyme scheme or using more info about jazz or dudes bio yes? Even expanding with the world blues or some synonym to twist the mind up a bit with some wordplay would have seen a better score from yours truly. Third bar was mediocre. 3/5
    4 = Could be me but I don't understand the relevance. On some gangster shit Suge Knight got K.O. outside a place where you can get your hair did. He didn't have hair and its hard out there but this bar didn't hit. Setup went nowhere, and I explained the second line. 2/5
    5 = I think you're stretching here, the longer lines in this bar over-exaggerate the emphasis. That said, besides the un-needed profanity I thought this was on point. 3.5/5
    6 = Funny is about all I got to say on the vote. A lot of interesting flips in your lines you neglected on that wtf do I know. 1/5
    7 = This multi wasn't so hot, grammar or punctuation could help. The set-up didn't get in the way or overzealous and I think that helped the forced wordplay, text battling and the assumed articulation made the second line in this bar forced, otherwise its a 5. 4/5
    8 = Seems like this type of rhyme scheme is more fluid and impactful, more suspenseful with the way you lick the fingertips. I liked this the best of all the bars in your verse, it fed off the previous line in a congruent and smooth finish move. I think the set-up works cause its a real rhyme, not just a Schadenfreude'd linguistic lyricist. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt about the Dzok, my newbie status act as my ghetto pass and assuming more background knowledge would only hit harder this was a good way to finish your verse. 5/5

    24.5/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killing Spree View Post
    Joe boston









    Multies are ur life punches with impact of no type why they exposing ur hype
    This can end in a Killing Spree no gifts a broken Christmas tree and a live fatality over Skype
    Bar vs celph






    You will NOT survive faggot


    Read...


    I said...
    Look @ this slob, kids bout the pussy - only cos he gooshy n soft
    Ya u won the tag match, but fag that's the only time u been pushin for draws
    Battling me s'like punchin ur own face, I'm bad for ya health
    So just let killing spree end ya,B...like ya battle wit self
    This mans a wreck, I'll beat his prego hoe with my hands in text
    One hook'll have her spittin out blood, in the same cup this retard tried handing fresh
    U burn through greedy money? False! This poor dude lame
    So we'll light candles around joe the same way joo preyed
    & you'll be in a vegtable state, as soon as my fist takes course
    Have a fam member die per punch, till there's none left to change yours
    Every time we battle u get shot, now I'm driving u down n out
    & next time we cross in'a section I'll show u what a round about
    U got a kid due any minute, fuck that baby host what I spits tarin
    ...Cut her gut while she grocery shopping
    Than Put the insides inside a basket & show u the miscarriage
    My wrist shot'll have ya chin rocked, U'll be droppin quick
    & whoever sayin jofa real? I'll break their neck wit a hockey stick
    1 = Venom in them lines like you emotional. Beneficial in narrative form such as this. Rhymes are smooth and intuitive in both lines, set-up connects but the second line is not as fluid or effective with the personal insult. (The 1 is for 'the' love) 2/5
    2 = Both lines could have been better on the flip. Very simplistic. Naysayers would say ''elevate' however the friend says you got a 2/5!
    3 = Benefit of the doubt with the flashback personal attack but the rhymes were rhymes yo! 3/5
    4 = Mediocre wordplays kept this from being what I like to call a dope rap rhyme, the set-up was real greedy money. 3/5
    5 = I have been dumbfounded by this lyricists metaphorical metamorphosis, on the change thought process I got lost quick. For them other lames out there I mean I don't know what he means but again a different rhyme scheme true to the verse kept this on the 1. 2.5/5
    6 = Set-up didn't work as that, could be flipped as a punch drink on the coach of their own league but I would neglect one syllable verbs that insinuate gun violence without something to percolate the violin case Mr. Mafia Man. 2/5
    7 & 8 = 5's. . That the Friend think about how that thing rainbows. Double rainbows!! Three bar punches are cool, especially in the 1-2. This was the win for the Front Lines Belt says me. But I don't give a fubu about any of you or what you do with your love voodoo this text battle scene is hot and I'm the Friend.

    Vote = Me

    But I had it at a Friendly tie. Good Luck....

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