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@Killing Spree
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Last edited by Spree; August 10th, 2015 at 03:28 PM
Check... @Fresh @God of War
stick this
Word
Ks asked for an ext
So this is due Tuesday by midnight.
aka usless aka remy on NC aka Gamble aka art official
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...t=#post7559269Originally Posted by art officaial aka useless vs white winter in 1-2 league
swerve ethering his soul
http://www.*************************...d.php?t=119974
rem -rapid eye movement
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...t=#post7559269
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Aight Listen...
bars like urs dont get looks, Readin them?..& the Laughin is strong
plus im trigger happy. I'll have bullets go threw Rem if the faggots eye'n me wrong
ya girl thinks u a cheatin faggot, dick in the ass kid & ya spittins are weak
U told white to hit the exit, & ya girl walked in on him pullin out & YOU shittin her sheets
dont act like its fake facts, I hate fags! & I'm payin u the hurtin in full
S'like u could advise Newbs how to start battles, the way your known for working the pole^^
if u reek of skill? its leechin field, you'll drown in L's if u make a threat
hands catch u in the head, as i drown you in a toilet W/O even a waste of breath
it aint ya taste in text facin vets. U takin shots for your coin n purse
driving through bars aint a prob for Spree, while you struggle to even avoid the Swerve
plus ya moms said growin up you was poor, & ya pussy traits came from her freakin
said "ya you'd see Gamete",... when she was pregnant on the street & it was 80% seman
what u fake? is hard. u could throw 2tripple0 swings & i wont leap, u the lamest spar
so assuming i was comparing u to them in the first place, shows u dont understand the basic bars
face it ART, ya futures failure, & nothings available to pump up ur game
ya bitch says ya sons a mistake, & even he thinks that you live up to your name
i creat deaths picasO... i really wanna heart ya heart
& smash that organ on the wall to really show yall a work of ART
fake fuck, ur battle w/Jonny proved u a waste, chump
this verse is a match to ya casket & the real meaning of you going Blaze up
@useless
went 20... if u want me to send it to someone else let me know but its posted in here and hidden. u can do the same
Edit** @useless
we got 48 hrs also to provide voting links
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Last edited by Spree; August 12th, 2015 at 07:27 AM
@Killing Spree
G'luck bruh
Fuckn white trash, sit ur poor ass down n watch how shit get done.
Cause there might not be a hitch in ur verse, but ur house is still equipped with one.
I'm saying u live in a trailer, n we seen the pics of ya stout lover.
This a straight eye for the queer guys when I come and flip their house over.
God of war must like u, cuz he's assisted in battles this nob has lost in.
U gonna need help from Rondo.. cuz everyone know that u robbed Boston.
U out of shape fgt.. Let's see u run a fast lap.
Sooo if Im gonna time killing.. I'd be doing ALOT of that waiting on his fat ass.
Ur not a g, when it comes to guns n money u best proceed cautiously.
cuz the only thing u killing is the sales racks at Walmart while shopping, spree.
Real talk- u bottom tier, swhy u get bullied at the lime.
U champing FL just goes to show how much rb truly has declined.
U landscaping fgt, I bet ur girl look like sasquatch with that booty stank.
So while he's mowing the lawn.. he's praying that bitch would do the same.
He's still poor, meanwhile I watch my maids work n get high, shit....
if u got a household cleaner.. I'd suggest u drink that shit n die bitch.
I got ur head in the tub but the rest of this scrub is soaked down in propane.
Battling me? U picked the worse endeavor.. when I drown him, but neck down is aflame.
Ur schtick is old, I'm here to strait trample this cat.
Cuz we're all over kill, and this match is a perfect example of that.
FYI- I'm not gamble
Riiiight....
Also for voters who don't know the personals we threw at eachother. PM and ask before disregarding it. Thanks
Killing Spree: rem was weak, shittin sheets was decent, pretty funny... Working the pole was too wordy, waste of breath was more of a statement, avoid swerve was decent, gamete was dope, basic bars was dope but the wording was really really bad, so no... Live up to name was cool, work of art was bad, blaze up was meh, had potential.. Plus it wasn't that direct
Vs
Useless: hitch in verse was dope/funny, house over was decent, robbed Boston was a decent personal but fell flat due to execution, time killing was cool, shopping spree was a miss since I seen greedy do it, RB/decline was a decent personal... Mowing lawn= LMFAO, household cleaner was meh, aflame was weak, perfect example had great wording but execution was weak
Vote: this was an OK champ match at best.. But I felt this was sort of a landslide... KS could of did a lot better with his concepts.. Especially his wording... Use had a pretty dope verse but I felt at the end it kind of declined... But I gotta give it to Use, he went a lot harder IMO
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Killing Spree- First bar didn't have strong enough wordplay on it both ways. Basically, either way you're looking at the punch, you're saying each time that you'll be shooting him. Not much diversity.
Second bar- Shitting her sheets was sorta funny, not much to critique.
Third bar- I'm starting to notice that you aren't using your setups properly on each bar. You have to jab before you can throw a haymaker. Plus the punch was too wordy, probably a result of that filler setup. You're above this kinda shit.
Fourth bar- I didn't like this at all... You're using alot of "I'm going to..." "I'm about to..." So the punchlines look like shitty horrorcore bars. Multi was okay here.
Fifth bar- Didn't like either. It wasn't terrible, you're just not actually attacking him yet lol. You've pretty much just wrote five bars calling him bad. Go in on him, tear his ass up.
Sixth bar- gamete was pretty cool, I liked alot.
Seventh bar- punch was wordy as fuck dude. It showed up as three lines on my phone, as a rule of thumb that's too much.
Eighth bar- There we go! That's what I meant by tear his ass up bro. This was dope as fuck.
Ninth bar- this bar didn't do much for me.
Tenth bar- plenty of people have done the blaze thing. This was worded nice tho.
Useless.
1st bar- This be the shit right here. I love dope personals like this.
2nd bar- This was nice too dude. Your first two bars send the message that you weren't fucking around.
3rd bar- This was pretty nice.... Took a step back though lol. I always try to put my heaviest personal shit at the end. Like a build up.
4th bar- haha. A nameflip and a personal. This was pretty dope.
5th bar- This was alright...
6th bar- Too much of a statement for me.
7th bar- I liked the humor you thrown in this one.
8th bar- Didn't like it.. Felt like a self hype bar. Could have been used against anyone.
9th bar- This was okay. I deffo suggest putting your personals towards the bottom or scattering them out. It looks better from my perspective.
10th bar- This was okay. I know the feeling tho where you can't come up with a closer so you just pick the first thing that pops in your mind.
V/ Useless.. Fairly easily imo.
KS used a picture and like 30 links with some quotes....TF is going on here? If you need that much ammo posted before your verse you are reaching way to hard....This isnt a picture battle and 1 quote should do....Either everyone should know what u mean without posting it or you need to use some original concepts.....Use got this based off of that alone....That Encyclopedia of shit that Spree used before his verse is unheard of...
V/Useless
ya girl thinks u a cheatin faggot, dick in the ass kid & ya spittins are weak
U told white to hit the exit, & ya girl walked in on him pullin out & YOU shittin her sheets
^^ eh, I liked the humor
face it ART, ya futures failure, & nothings available to pump up ur game
ya bitch says ya sons a mistake, & even he thinks that you live up to your name
^^ dope .. fuckin dope
vs
Fuckn white trash, sit ur poor ass down n watch how shit get done.
Cause there might not be a hitch in ur verse, but ur house is still equipped with one.
God of war must like u, cuz he's assisted in battles this nob has lost in.
U gonna need help from Rondo.. cuz everyone know that u robbed Boston.
U landscaping fgt, I bet ur girl look like sasquatch with that booty stank.
So while he's mowing the lawn.. he's praying that bitch would do the same.
He's still poor, meanwhile I watch my maids work n get high, shit....
if u got a household cleaner.. I'd suggest u drink that shit n die bitch.
if that time killing concept was set up better, I probably would've quoted that too
Useless just had better wording for his concept imo .. her verse reads smooth as hell
v/ Useless
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