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    Hide Behind That Mask...(Rhymes Diss)


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    Puts on Bill Duke's face: You know you done fucked up, right? RIGHT!!!???









    Yup, n' this is laughable, sue me...
    But I usually save the acts for a movie,
    You get a pass, you're my groupie.
    So here's the back stage. End your chapter, it's the last page.
    Trying to blow up the spot, know Celph Taut is in blast range!
    What more could you ask of me, other than taking you lightly?
    Me orchestrating your death? Yeah, but I'm not playing it yet...
    I'm just saying it as a way to reflect...
    How Shawn Mac paved the grave for your death...
    This may be technically a "free", but C will "pay" his respects...






    YEAH.

    Crying in a PM about a video battle, you baby.
    through all that psycho babble, I just figured you had to be crazy...
    Walk in the shadow of Satan with a style that's adjacent....
    to ripping out your bowels n' placing them in a Holocaust shower formation...
    You get views for doing stupid shit... how's that placement?
    Doing videos about being loud in your basement. without much of a sound to embrace it!!!
    Faggot. I am foul as Jason. Let me be clear.
    Your record is merely under the level of my executive tier...
    Ha. Don't ever fucking call me out.
    Balling, bout' to show this fag Wilson, he is in Spalding's house!


    Fuck your gay ass Wilson ball, Rhymes. As your friend, a company, and as a motherfucking character in Cast Away!


    Now onto the show at hand.
    You know I plan for taking this wind, saving spins for my loyal 'fan'.
    Can't hide long enough for me to exploit it...
    Since you were really only put into this league for enjoyment...
    You rocking a Mask'? but talk through your ass...
    The Pet Detective. I reprogram this fag', here's your next directive...
    You just had your tech. corrected.
    Online for deployment, n' you got this vet connected...
    Making you feel alive again, Leviathan has been resurrected!
    How you so emotional about a battling league?
    Even Mac' will agree like an Apple, PC attack that you're too whack to be beat...
    Had to laugh, knowing that if I ever battle with
    your ass that you'll have to retreat, back to that broken home.
    Reciting Eminem songs with a feminine vocal tone...
    Coldest flow' in this bitch, with the acting 'scripts', better know your 'role'!
    This turn up? Has no control. The circuit breaker deactivated...
    Once it's up in effect, this sucker's an Arachnid, all stuck in the net...
    But what you expect? Us to be feeling like you do?
    Had to raise your spirits up, give you a new view...
    Of the horizon to follow. Suffer in the today, as you rise for tomorrow...
    And hide behind the lies deep down in that disguised that you borrowed!...
    I got no chill for you faggot, n' still I can hack it...
    I make killing a tactic. N' give your life a 'surge', when it's feeling inactive.
    See, I gave you a chance, if you were willing to practice...
    But you didn't! so up in your feelings that it got stuck to the ceiling...
    Monkey ass, I didn't know what was a-pealing...
    Until I noticed the 'act', n' didn't hold back on it, because you were 'filming'...
    If I was Mac, from the get go? You would've been slaughtered, f real
    No apology, feel the effect of your filler, until we connect...
    Like you're still in the set... 8mm, there's no film to project...
    Tried building a rep off of faggot movies, when truly I have no will to respect...
    -- such an atrocity. Take a look at a monster, b. (LOOK)
    For robbing me of all of that time, your lines like a common thief.
    Anti social, making videos votes of you on the street...
    While holding a camera down the whole time you filmed it is NOT UNIQUE...
    Faggot ass was probably waiting for Future to "DROP THE BEAT"
    You wanna be B-Rabbit so bad, well, this is the rabbit hole.
    Even Alice knows. "Wonderland" is as far as your talents go...
    Trying to trapeze the standards we've built by setting the balance low...
    But that's how I know, I'm just keeping it real.
    Surface level material, your scenarios need 'deeper' appeal.
    Break the 4th wall, range emotions that people can 'feel'...
    This defeating is too much a destruction for your emotional speeches to heal...
    Minus Achilles, I am the realest, deal.
    The heinous, a design of my seat in steel.
    In the drivers position, you're hiding beneath the wheel!
    Bottom line is? These people will try and deceit you, still.
    Don't try to lie to yourself, are seek friends online for some help.
    Faggot, I got the belt.
    You're only a waist of time.
    Your out of world doctrine will not occupy this 'space' of mine.
    Defying spatial binds, a lion with defiant traits
    of an entire race, combined. The sign awaits when my mind awakes
    and I decide to break the Orion gate inside...
    So why I am up late, writing this rape for Rhymes?
    Cause he couldn't see the writing on the wall -- Ancient Scribes.
    Taking lives from beyond that ceramic face disguise...
    And dancing around it as it burns in the fire, like native tribes...
    You can't fuck wit' me , young in, I'm not even trying...
    The paragraphs body, is a living breathing geological giant...
    Of modern science...
    A philosopher sign of Aristotle and Plato combined...
    Axles turning, I'm grinding his gears, when he's not in 'alignment'...
    Taut is an heliocentric tundra - trying to walk in this climate...
    will melt the flesh off your axial skeleton before thoughts can form...
    How dare you say Taut is boring.
    As we watch, in mourning, the beast
    take your soul before the video stops recording...(Jesus)
    That's paranormal... desecration in front of your family...
    While you think you can handle me. You're on the brink of insanity...
    I'm pushing you off of the cliff... one abysmal thought
    propels your confidence, which knocks my pupil off - that's an ocular glitch...
    See that box in which... you feel pride in yourself? Does NOT EXIST.
    And to think... for me? It's only a hobby fix...
    Be lucky you even got a diss.
    You little hobbit, bitch!


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    Re: Hide Behind That Mask...(Rhymes Diss)

    Pretty fun to read. Really liked some of the creativity and flow through. You've always been really good with your rhyme schemes. I'd love to see you put your efforts into actual topical work. I bet you'd be a monster. I don't really know how to leave feedback on a diss track so I'll leave it at that. Thanks for posting bud.

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    Re: Hide Behind That Mask...(Rhymes Diss)

    Man, one critique. Not enough justice. Shameless bump.



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    Re: Hide Behind That Mask...(Rhymes Diss)

    You've got a well polished style that is consistent and easily recognizable as being you and for that bravo. I've read a lot from you in the freestyle section and it's clear you use off the wall shock value as apart of your overall style and this is the first break from that routine I've seen from you. Stylistically different and categorically different being the diss that it is from the more bravado ish you usually produce. This was just "ok" from what i gathered but that being said I'm sure there is a lot about the beef that led to this diss I don't know about or understand so if there is something I miss that's to be expected. I think this diss was intentionally left light to provoke a response so you can release the real haymaker if need be. A lot of talk leading up to the actual bars that make the diss just that and for that I call it filler but ...I'm also aware of what you are capable of too so...meh.
    I think it could have been a little more direct and to the point without leading it on this long , especially if this was meant to be light.

    Overall a decent provocation, if it were to just end here though it kinda falls flat

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