Frontlines Spotlight Match
Johnny Blaze vs EasyToBeat
Winner gets contender shot.
10-16 lines.
Check in due Sunday midnight est.
Verses due monday midnight
- - - Updated - - -
@JoHnNy bLaZe @EasyToBeat
Johnny blaze
easytobeat
Frontlines Spotlight Match
Johnny Blaze vs EasyToBeat
Winner gets contender shot.
10-16 lines.
Check in due Sunday midnight est.
Verses due monday midnight
- - - Updated - - -
@JoHnNy bLaZe @EasyToBeat
Winner also gets 15pts loser gets 5!
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Check.
Good luck
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Make Front Lines Great Again
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
dont forget voting links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=487083
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=487100
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Make Front Lines Great Again
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Lol, pm me when you pm Joog, @Jonny Blaze
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2triple0/page2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...spree-vs-jay-p
There dem votes
Starting beef on the same day Sean Price died is a sin...
Ya I'll admit I recycled.. Just know u'll never slay with the pen,
Trying to accuse me? Bro, at least I'm good enough to say it again,
acting real tough in the FL chat, getting backed up by hoes,
Dagel sucked u... ironically he bit in 95 percent of his posts,
Telling me to post 8 bars... Ya, ur defiantly a queer,
Cuz It's clearly not my fucking age when a 16 ends his career,
It's a horror movie with ur girl, she stay screaming crazy,
Cuz once ya found footage u noticed the whole vid was shaky,
Don't act like ur chill & relaxed, I'll Kill dude without him even knowing,
So if u ever see him laid back.. just know easygoing,
Heavy shells puncture skulls, let's see how long this cat stands,
When the pantera faggot.. U'll realize metals flying more then that band,
Bongs & gats mix great, kill lame since he was made soft,
Smoke em till you see the chamber rip his fucking face off,
When starting text I was struggling, notebooks with bars on my dresser,
U don't have the same dedication as kid, so ur obviously not gonna get better
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Make Front Lines Great Again
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/foru...788_page2.html
Originally Posted by Jonny Blaze
Your punches are weak, you's writing younger than me but struggling, b
So Ima rattle a bundle of keys so you'll stop biting 'fore yous cutting your teeth
Disgusting brain? That line was fucking lame and easily you're losing your spot
Didnt wanna catch yaself reading your line back, you aint hear win opportunity, nox.
You totally missed Bruh, saying that you're gunna be leaving me stitched up
You only leave me seeing doubles when I look at the site that you bit from
That's a stiff punch! Clueless as you are I really didn't figure you's breathing
They said "you Duck? Useless." But didn't say to take the literal meaning
You blaring as well! To see your grandma lying in her piss'd be scary as hell
But How you talking about the rest, homes when you can't even take care of yourself?
"Nigga" your words are profound, he's a white guy just learning that sound
The only time something hot come a-cross from him is when he's burning it down
Them gun bars? You fucktard. You just a kid so ya bars just make me pissed off
You can't afford that kinda Price <--- Why he'd say you're a disgrace to hip-hop
He thinks he's loaded? Shit! He's a fake persona that's full of his songs
When I say all he does is click I don't exactly mean that his bullets're gone.
@God of War
Get this open for votes!!!
- - - Updated - - -
Please
Ya I'll admit I recycled.. Just know u'll never slay with the pen,
Trying to accuse me? Bro, at least I'm good enough to say it again,
(don't really know where ur going w/ that. not a good look recycling not a terribly bad one but this was almost faux justification)
acting real tough in the FL chat, getting backed up by hoes,
Dagel sucked u... ironically he bit in 95 percent of his posts,
(eh..see what u did but eh)
Telling me to post 8 bars... Ya, ur defiantly a queer,
Cuz It's clearly not my fucking age when a 16 ends his career,
(weak reference butok)
It's a horror movie with ur girl, she stay screaming crazy,
Cuz once ya found footage u noticed the whole vid was shaky,
(nice)
Don't act like ur chill & relaxed, I'll Kill dude without him even knowing,
So if u ever see him laid back.. just know easygoing,
(could of reworded this. made it a your a faggot punchline. trust I immediately found a way this would be better but the killing/laidback association is eh)
Heavy shells puncture skulls, let's see how long this cat stands,
When the pantera faggot.. U'll realize metals flying more then that band,
(pan tear a? whats the pan part..i want to like this )
Bongs & gats mix great, kill lame since he was made soft,
Smoke em till you see the chamber rip his fucking face off
(I like this even tho its old),
When starting text I was struggling, notebooks with bars on my dresser,
U don't have the same dedication as kid, so ur obviously not gonna get better
(naah)
Your punches are weak, you's writing younger than me but struggling, b
So Ima rattle a bundle of keys so you'll stop biting 'fore yous cutting your teeth
(ok multis but the line in itself was very meh conceptually..the biting/cutting ur teeth. I just used something similar)
Disgusting brain? That line was fucking lame and easily you're losing your spot
Didnt wanna catch yaself reading your line back, you aint hear win opportunity, nox.
(kinda of a stretch w/ the wp. but I dig the creativity. not bad)
You totally missed Bruh, saying that you're gunna be leaving me stitched up
You only leave me seeing doubles when I look at the site that you bit from
(lol)
That's a stiff punch! Clueless as you are I really didn't figure you's breathing
They said "you Duck? Useless." But didn't say to take the literal meaning
(pretty cool)
You blaring as well! To see your grandma lying in her piss'd be scary as hell
But How you talking about the rest, homes when you can't even take care of yourself?
(creative but eh execution. kinda shaky)
"Nigga" your words are profound, he's a white guy just learning that sound
The only time something hot come a-cross from him is when he's burning it down
(played but worded really well)
Them gun bars? You fucktard. You just a kid so ya bars just make me pissed off
You can't afford that kinda Price <--- Why he'd say you're a disgrace to hip-hop
(this was ass tho)
He thinks he's loaded? Shit! He's a fake persona that's full of his songs
When I say all he does is click I don't exactly mean that his bullets're gone
(ehhhh ok)
decent battle I got lenox's found footage n chamber vs seeing double n duck useless
that opportunity knocks was an almost. and for that I give it to easy by a hair
v/easy
very close tho
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Originally Posted by Aero
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Starting beef on the same day Sean Price died is a sin...
Ya I'll admit I recycled.. Just know u'll never slay with the pen,
Trying to accuse me? Bro, at least I'm good enough to say it again,
nah
acting real tough in the FL chat, getting backed up by hoes,
Dagel sucked u... ironically he bit in 95 percent of his posts,
meh....fake personal really
Telling me to post 8 bars... Ya, ur defiantly a queer,
Cuz It's clearly not my fucking age when a 16 ends his career,
this was nice
It's a horror movie with ur girl, she stay screaming crazy,
Cuz once ya found footage u noticed the whole vid was shaky,
meh...stetched w/p here len. more foot age than itch
Don't act like ur chill & relaxed, I'll Kill dude without him even knowing,
So if u ever see him laid back.. just know easygoing,
this was cool...could use more impact tbh but i fux wit this
Heavy shells puncture skulls, let's see how long this cat stands,
When the pantera faggot.. U'll realize metals flying more then that band,
yup this was dope imo
Bongs & gats mix great, kill lame since he was made soft,
Smoke em till you see the chamber rip his fucking face off,
wack...come on man, this is basic shit
When starting text I was struggling, notebooks with bars on my dresser,
U don't have the same dedication as kid, so ur obviously not gonna get better
...really? this statment? u need to fuckin knock him out lenox....the fuck man
vs
ttp://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/foru...788_page2.html
Quote Originally Posted by Jonny Blaze View Post
I was on lyrical assault, topix, rap royalty, here & netcees with the name of Lenox.. You're not the only hating faggots that's tried to accuse me of biting
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Quote Originally Posted by Jonny Blaze View Post
Nursing home workers are complete scum bags.. Most of them at least... I just found out they left my grandmother 24 hours without taking her to the bathroom, gave her no food, water.. And they didn't even check on her.. They said she was lying in her own urine.. U got of be kidding me.
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Quote Originally Posted by Jonny Blaze View Post
No nigga that's me...
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
Your punches are weak, you's writing younger than me but struggling, b
So Ima rattle a bundle of keys so you'll stop biting 'fore yous cutting your teeth
this was a miss. wording was off man...
Disgusting brain? That line was fucking lame and easily you're losing your spot
Didnt wanna catch yaself reading your line back, you aint hear win opportunity, nox.
wording was off, personal couold have been good but this fell short man.
You totally missed Bruh, saying that you're gunna be leaving me stitched up
You only leave me seeing doubles when I look at the site that you bit from
this was dope. liked this. LOTB so far
That's a stiff punch! Clueless as you are I really didn't figure you's breathing
They said "you Duck? Useless." But didn't say to take the literal meaning
this was dope as well. good shit
You blaring as well! To see your grandma lying in her piss'd be scary as hell
But How you talking about the rest, homes when you can't even take care of yourself?
....this was hard imo
"Nigga" your words are profound, he's a white guy just learning that sound
The only time something hot come a-cross from him is when he's burning it down
meh....
Them gun bars? You fucktard. You just a kid so ya bars just make me pissed off
You can't afford that kinda Price <--- Why he'd say you're a disgrace to hip-hop
ahhh, i see what u did here. good personal
He thinks he's loaded? Shit! He's a fake persona that's full of his songs
When I say all he does is click I don't exactly mean that his bullets're gone.
this was a dope concept, worded/executed bad....
well...overall. thought lenox had a good verse here, few lazy misses imo. he goes hot cold hot cold. due to rushing his shit, like ive told him to take his time. but again, had some dope concepts, while flame really suprised me here, he finally dumbed down those stretch bars, his wordplay is picking up, he's working his personals allot better. lenox had some soft misses and flame had some light misses so Flame edges this tbh.
v/Flame
Ya I'll admit I recycled.. Just know u'll never slay with the pen,
Trying to accuse me? Bro, at least I'm good enough to say it again,
--- meh, but ok
acting real tough in the FL chat, getting backed up by hoes,
Dagel sucked u... ironically he bit in 95 percent of his posts,
--- I see what u trying to do but it didn't come across very well.
Telling me to post 8 bars... Ya, ur defiantly a queer,
Cuz It's clearly not my fucking age when a 16 ends his career,
--- ehhh...but ok
It's a horror movie with ur girl, she stay screaming crazy,
Cuz once ya found footage u noticed the whole vid was shaky,
--- wack
Don't act like ur chill & relaxed, I'll Kill dude without him even knowing,
So if u ever see him laid back.. just know easygoing,
--- OK concept but bad wording.
Heavy shells puncture skulls, let's see how long this cat stands,
When the pantera faggot.. U'll realize metals flying more then that band,
--- played n coulda been flipped better
Bongs & gats mix great, kill lame since he was made soft,
Smoke em till you see the chamber rip his fucking face off,
--- no punch
When starting text I was struggling, notebooks with bars on my dresser,
U don't have the same dedication as kid, so ur obviously not gonna get better
--- no punch
Vs
Your punches are weak, you's writing younger than me but struggling, b
So Ima rattle a bundle of keys so you'll stop biting 'fore yous cutting your teeth
--- ok
Disgusting brain? That line was fucking lame and easily you're losing your spot
Didnt wanna catch yaself reading your line back, you aint hear win opportunity, nox.
--- nah that's a reach. Lenox-nox= opportunity nix is how it would be pronounced.
You totally missed Bruh, saying that you're gunna be leaving me stitched up
You only leave me seeing doubles when I look at the site that you bit from
--- ehh. Light
That's a stiff punch! Clueless as you are I really didn't figure you's breathing
They said "you Duck? Useless." But didn't say to take the literal meaning
--- this doesn't work for me cuz he didn't duck me. I think I see what u was trying but it didn't work.
You blaring as well! To see your grandma lying in her piss'd be scary as hell
But How you talking about the rest, homes when you can't even take care of yourself?
--- finally a decent punch. Okay.
"Nigga" your words are profound, he's a white guy just learning that sound
The only time something hot come a-cross from him is when he's burning it down
--- this is played but I like the personal.
Them gun bars? You fucktard. You just a kid so ya bars just make me pissed off
You can't afford that kinda Price <--- Why he'd say you're a disgrace to hip-hop
--- execution hurt it
He thinks he's loaded? Shit! He's a fake persona that's full of his songs
When I say all he does is click I don't exactly mean that his bullets're gone.
--- nahh
Overall: I think I gotta go with easytobeat on this one, his verse was a smoother read and he had the better attempts and had an actual punchline. Lenox getting better IMO but u still ain't quite got it. Keep elevating bruh.
V. Easytobeatoff
Posting Rules
