Killing spree vs nott- KS WINS

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@Notti

[Notti]

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[Spree]

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[Spree]

friends? this Bud Light & if cans blew? than its provin he's fakest of all
know I keep a Steele Reserved, but if i dont shoot? I'm taking a 40oz n breaking ya jaw

2 cans of steel reserve, AND 2 cans, i got that steel reserved...I blaze dutches
you not a starter...you steal/reserve...like wen you watch a URL battle 'N SAVE punches

Hush's name is victor for those how dont know




SMH


Listen....
I got that heat forum. Clean'm up & Move'm. I've always felt u was wack bro
& W/the proof above^^.. i guess my MOD position aint the only way I've helped ya W/battles
get ya life took from this right hook, the wins i rope in? u bound to choke
for this I'll hit W/the overhand,knot..& wen u wake? one of those'll be around ya throat
beef'n Hush proved u vagina. he told u his Streets knowin u isnt temptin shit
cos You'll get smacked up @ Vixen,...& treated like any other Ill tempered Bitch!
& speakin of bitches, I been slammin yours. she gave me the head quick
Ironic she's ya WCW, cos within a week I Power bombed that hoe to my Reject List
plus We know u bend over for ya crew, & sayin they'll back U? was meant in time
cos when i put the pump to ya front? I'll wait till they behind you, to catch ya spine
Testin spree? im catch Z's, punch yea chest till u defeated & gone
funny how W/ every breath you swear ya Bars are ill while voters jus read'm & yawn
went from shakin rust to a tough clown, catchin bodies? u lyin dude
now u know im Not a joke, & after this? thats how this site'll be describing you



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@Notti
you have 24hrs to get voting links bruh

[Notti]

Lmao, fawkk you mean nigga?


You talkin weight? OK cool, where them bricks at, you betta run it bro
Cuz for them keys
these bullets'll hit that accordion, he'll end up stretched OUT like one of those
NO killing spree, only interested in killing spree... what if he run instead?
Then its code word shoppin spree... That mean its money on his head
I kick that new shit, fresh punches that keep these voters sayin my name
All you do is kick flips, that'd put every pro skate boarder to shame
I ain't wit the kiddy shit, disrespect n its war, believe me your not winnin
One call n i'll getcha beyblades n still have the pull to leave your TOP spinnin
You ugly as a muh fucka, and ya verses are even more trash, no threat from this rascal
Always tryna pic battle... But if the dope heads were still here no one would pick you to battle
You wack as fuck n carry yaself like a vet, a lame, who never get in them draws
But I'm sippin my tea... these punches'll have you sippin ya food thru a straw
Keep playin wit fire, wen I combust shots, gotta pay to live... this guys stipulation
I need WHATEVER he hazardous strap gon put his life in THAT type of situation

[Notti]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-Open-For-Vote

[Clout]

Lmao, fawkk you mean nigga?


You talkin weight? OK cool, where them bricks at, you betta run it bro
Cuz for them keys
these bullets'll hit that accordion, he'll end up stretched OUT like one of those
Very forced, its generic as well. You be using old losses or something to get at him.
NO killing spree, only interested in killing spree... what if he run instead?
Then its code word shoppin spree... That mean its money on his head
This is ok,
I kick that new shit, fresh punches that keep these voters sayin my name
All you do is kick flips, that'd put every pro skate boarder to shame
This is played, but it got you away from gun lines.
I ain't wit the kiddy shit, disrespect n its war, believe me your not winnin
One call n i'll getcha beyblades n still have the pull to leave your TOP spinnin
Im guessing you intended this to be about his Bae/girl. Its still forced to me, I've yet to here some one say "ill get ur bae blades". I see ur a creative thinker; but you need to use fresher flips. Ur wordplay is very forced in the manner that u use it.
You ugly as a muh fucka, and ya verses are even more trash, no threat from this rascal
Always tryna pic battle... But if the dope heads were still here no one would pick you to battle
Comical jab attempt, but the rhyme scheme was lacking in this. If you had reworded with multies at the end, it would've read smoother. U did need to reword this, im not a fan of repeating the same word in one line.
You wack as fuck n carry yaself like a vet, a lame, who never get in them draws
But I'm sippin my tea... these punches'll have you sippin ya food thru a straw
Eh, u need better concepts. I see a lot of potential in ur writing.
Keep playin wit fire, wen I combust shots, gotta pay to live... this guys stipulation
I need WHATEVER he hazardous strap gon put his life in THAT type of situation

I'm not even sure what ur implying with "he Harzardous strap" if its a wordplay u're going for its very forced to the point im not catching it. This might be a language barrier issue? I don't think it is.

[QUOTE=Killing Spree;8746884]Hush's name is victor for those how dont know




SMH

Listen....
I got that heat forum. Clean'm up & Move'm. I've always felt u was wack bro
& W/the proof above^^.. i guess my MOD position aint the only way I've helped ya W/battles
Way to many "withs" in one line, sir. Wordplay is forced but more tolerable than notti's. Since u're trying to come off as street. This is an ok start, Killing.
get ya life took from this right hook, the wins i rope in? u bound to choke
for this I'll hit W/the overhand,knot..& wen u wake? one of those'll be around ya throat
"Cause I'll hit" that sounds better. U still have these moments of awkward fragment-like punches. But I like the angle u went for here. Ur wording is holding ur power back on the punch though, mate.
beef'n Hush proved u vagina. he told u his Streets knowin u isnt temptin shit
cos You'll get smacked up @ Vixen,...& treated like any other Ill tempered Bitch!
Beefing hush? do u mean ur beef w/ hush? again u have these awkward word choices. That really chop the flow of a bar for me. This must be a site personal I wasn't around for, its a jab at best for me.
& speakin of bitches, I been slammin yours. she gave me the head quick
Ironic she's ya WCW, cos within a week I Power bombed that hoe to my Reject List
I seen a few wrestling flips, this one wasn't up to par, my friend.
plus We know u bend over for ya crew, & sayin they'll back U? was meant in time
cos when i put the pump to ya front? I'll wait till they behind you, to catch ya spine
Ok
Testin spree? im catch Z's, punch yea chest till u defeated & gone
funny how W/ every breath you swear ya Bars are ill while voters jus read'm & yawn
Comical jab, I like this approach from u best, kill.
went from shakin rust to a tough clown, catchin bodies? u lyin dude
now u know im Not a joke, & after this? thats how this site'll be describing you
Light, but that's the kind of style; i'd like to see u use more.


Notti: I think u have a lot of potential to be a URL/Smack kind of writer. U just are a bit too generic, u also force wordplay to the point it ruins the punch. If it doesn't work? just work on rewording it, ditch the end rhymes and toss new ones in, mate. U have the creative angles, u just need sharper wording. I think u should try to step away from gun bars & aim for more comical/harsh punches. U have a lot of room to grow and even more potential to expand beyond that room.

KS: U've gotten a lot better, my friend. U still have wording issues that hampers ur punches impact. I think ur trying a bit too much to compact a lot of detail in a bar. U've elevated a lot compared to over a year ago; when I last read ur writing. U just always write a punch as if ur starting it in phrase/sentence or explanation. It throws off ur flow a lot for me. But u did land more than notti, u racked up points by jabbing.

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[Notti]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Open-For-Votes

Last link, let's get these votes in here

[Aye BRUH]

I got that heat forum. Clean'm up & Move'm. I've always felt u was wack bro
& W/the proof above^^.. i guess my MOD position aint the only way I've helped ya W/battles
get ya life took from this right hook, the wins i rope in? u bound to choke
for this I'll hit W/the overhand,knot..& wen u wake? one of those'll be around ya throat
beef'n Hush proved u vagina. he told u his Streets knowin u isnt temptin shit
cos You'll get smacked up @ Vixen,...& treated like any other Ill tempered Bitch!
---Opener didnt rhyme. Knot around ya throat was ok. Vixen was nice
& speakin of bitches, I been slammin yours. she gave me the head quick
Ironic she's ya WCW, cos within a week I Power bombed that hoe to my Reject List
plus We know u bend over for ya crew, & sayin they'll back U? was meant in time
cos when i put the pump to ya front? I'll wait till they behind you, to catch ya spine
---WCW i fucked with. Not the spine one though
Testin spree? im catch Z's, punch yea chest till u defeated & gone
funny how W/ every breath you swear ya Bars are ill while voters jus read'm & yawn
went from shakin rust to a tough clown, catchin bodies? u lyin dude
now u know im Not a joke, & after this? thats how this site'll be describing you
-read n yawn was soft. Closer wasnt that effective for a nameplay

vs

You talkin weight? OK cool, where them bricks at, you betta run it bro
Cuz for them keys
these bullets'll hit that accordion, he'll end up stretched OUT like one of those
NO killing spree, only interested in killing spree... what if he run instead?
Then its code word shoppin spree... That mean its money on his head
I kick that new shit, fresh punches that keep these voters sayin my name
All you do is kick flips, that'd put every pro skate boarder to shame
---Nice opener. Not feelin shoppin spree. same with kick flips, pretty bland.
I ain't wit the kiddy shit, disrespect n its war, believe me your not winnin
One call n i'll getcha beyblades n still have the pull to leave your TOP spinnin
You ugly as a muh fucka, and ya verses are even more trash, no threat from this rascal
Always tryna pic battle... But if the dope heads were still here no one would pick you to battle
---I liked bey blades. pic battle could have been a stinger. It came off just eh to me though
You wack as fuck n carry yaself like a vet, a lame, who never get in them draws
But I'm sippin my tea... these punches'll have you sippin ya food thru a straw
Keep playin wit fire, wen I combust shots, gotta pay to live... this guys stipulation
I need WHATEVER he hazardous strap gon put his life in THAT type of situation
---straw was wack. Closer was dope

vote/Killing Spree. I think when Notti missed, he missed real bad. Nice lil battle though

[puravida]

I got that heat forum. Clean'm up & Move'm. I've always felt u was wack bro
& W/the proof above^^.. i guess my MOD position aint the only way I've helped ya W/battles

& speakin of bitches, I been slammin yours. she gave me the head quick
Ironic she's ya WCW, cos within a week I Power bombed that hoe to my Reject List

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You talkin weight? OK cool, where them bricks at, you betta run it bro
Cuz for them keys
these bullets'll hit that accordion, he'll end up stretched OUT like one of those
NO killing spree, only interested in killing spree... what if he run instead?
Then its code word shoppin spree... That mean its money on his head

You wack as fuck n carry yaself like a vet, a lame, who never get in them draws
But I'm sippin my tea... these punches'll have you sippin ya food thru a straw
Keep playin wit fire, wen I combust shots, gotta pay to live... this guys stipulation
I need WHATEVER he hazardous strap gon put his life in THAT type of situation

I enjoyed both verses but Notti fire power here. Notti used lines that were a bit more relevant and effective. I felt like my loser had more misses than hits..

vote - notti

[Notti]

@useless @joog'n @Amen @Packed Graves @OG Maestro

2-1 spree

[Lenox]

Killing spree: overhand knot, WCW..

Vs

Notti: accordion, top spinnin, sippin food..

Vote: Notti.. This was a pretty decent battle.. Notti dropped a couple haymakers, & that's basically the reason why he got this... Ks I felt could of won, but a lot of his bars fell flat with execution.. Nice battle here.. Notti. Ur improving pretty nicely.. KS, u did work but it wasn't enough bro

[Notti]

2-2, cmon ppl we need some votes on this

[Attack of the Muff]

I got that heat forum. Clean'm up & Move'm. I've always felt u was wack bro
& W/the proof above^^.. i guess my MOD position aint the only way I've helped ya W/battles
(cool personal considering thequotes)
get ya life took from this right hook, the wins i rope in? u bound to choke
for this I'll hit W/the overhand,knot..& wen u wake? one of those'll be around ya throat
(ok but rope knot/not im seeing a lot on him)
beef'n Hush proved u vagina. he told u his Streets knowin u isnt temptin shit
cos You'll get smacked up @ Vixen,...& treated like any other Ill tempered Bitch!
(vic's end. w/ the d in end being silent is ok. I thought this was ok)
& speakin of bitches, I been slammin yours. she gave me the head quick
Ironic she's ya WCW, cos within a week I Power bombed that hoe to my Reject List
(ironic shes ya w see w? iono im not seeing the wp in this)
plus We know u bend over for ya crew, & sayin they'll back U? was meant in time
cos when i put the pump to ya front? I'll wait till they behind you, to catch ya spine
(mm eh)
Testin spree? im catch Z's, punch yea chest till u defeated & gone
funny how W/ every breath you swear ya Bars are ill while voters jus read'm & yawn
(ok)
went from shakin rust to a tough clown, catchin bodies? u lyin dude
now u know im Not a joke, & after this? thats how this site'll be describing you
(ahh I like this)

pretty cool thistime

You talkin weight? OK cool, where them bricks at, you betta run it bro
Cuz for them keys
these bullets'll hit that accordion, he'll end up stretched OUT like one of those
(that wp is old. not a bad flip tho. its ok)
NO killing spree, only interested in killing spree... what if he run instead?
Then its code word shoppin spree... That mean its money on his head
(seen too many shopping spree/money on ur head like a shopping spree..matter of fat I just seen one recently. I know its a nameplay but conceptually it isn't fresh at all)
I kick that new shit, fresh punches that keep these voters sayin my name
All you do is kick flips, that'd put every pro skate boarder to shame
(wow this is played as fuck man. not even kidding)
I ain't wit the kiddy shit, disrespect n its war, believe me your not winnin
One call n i'll getcha beyblades n still have the pull to leave your TOP spinnin
(now this was dope af)
You ugly as a muh fucka, and ya verses are even more trash, no threat from this rascal
Always tryna pic battle... But if the dope heads were still here no one would pick you to battle
(iono why ppl deemed dope wouldn't battle someone you deem not so good. would be opposite. wack ppl wont want to battle dope ppl. my only issue w/ this line. otherwise its worded harsh but conceptually its off to me)
You wack as fuck n carry yaself like a vet, a lame, who never get in them draws
But I'm sippin my tea... these punches'll have you sippin ya food thru a straw
(man nah)
Keep playin wit fire, wen I combust shots, gotta pay to live... this guys stipulation
I need WHATEVER he hazardous strap gon put his life in THAT type of situation
(has or dis. it works. I like this line tbh)

man this was interesting. not a great battle but an interesting one. tied at quotes at two a piece but I have to give it to ks lookin at my breakdown. he had more ok lines. notti had two lotbs but the rest he dropped a lot of ancient lines man. a lot of em. like 6 im thinking

but hazardous works btw. has or dis.

k

v/ks

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