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    Re: Open Mic Chat

    Quote Originally Posted by Hypotheses View Post
    Congratulations,Mal.
    thx bro... congrats to you as well, how old is yours if I may ask?

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    Re: Open Mic Chat

    They call me Lunar Tick. Every move and steps are movie scripts.
    in that blue abyss was a movement. twitch. the mood was shift.
    a lumbering hue exists in gloomy mist. truly sensing doom impending,
    he moved against a huge crevice. woods and sticks, seperates this wolf from its hugest threat

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    Re: Open Mic Chat

    That's looking good so far.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cody Phoenix View Post
    thx bro... congrats to you as well, how old is yours if I may ask?
    1 year and counting. I'm still a freshly squeezed parent lol.

    Never thought that day or Time would surface me. Feels great though.
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hypotheses View Post
    1 year and counting. I'm still a freshly squeezed parent lol.

    Never thought that day or Time would surface me. Feels great though.
    It's amazing how something so small instantly changes your whole world. Bro, I'm honestly glad for you.. you must be gettin proud af too on the small things.. like my boy just sat up the other day and I was like "NFL STAR RIGHT THERE, NFL SOON BABY, WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!" cheering him on haahahahha

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    Lol.....yeah but the baby mama isn't so fun at times.
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hypotheses View Post
    Lol.....yeah but the baby mama isn't so fun at times.
    It takes at least a year or so for their hormones to regulate. If you didn't know. I'm still dealing with it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cody Phoenix View Post
    It takes at least a year or so for their hormones to regulate. If you didn't know. I'm still dealing with it!
    That is quite true, because my friend is dealing with 4 months pregnancy lol. The urges of random cravings and instantaneous sex. Oh glory lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hypotheses View Post
    That is quite true, because my friend is dealing with 4 months pregnancy lol. The urges of random cravings and instantaneous sex. Oh glory lol
    good times

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cody Phoenix View Post
    It takes at least a year or so for their hormones to regulate. If you didn't know. I'm still dealing with it!
    So how do you deal with that, masturbate?
    @Hypotheses congrats bud

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sammy View Post
    So how do you deal with that, masturbate?
    @Hypotheses congrats bud
    You dont talk during sex.

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    Nope. Celibacy

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    Re: Open Mic Chat

    @Jukon

    Collab? Probably just twelve.

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    For OM feedback as a suggestion not required, but should use categories to help sense where some writers lack in or what needs to be improved therefore.

    Flow:
    Multiples:
    Wordplay:
    Theme:
    Originality:
    Imagery:

    Nothing to major just the basis. Almost like critiquing a topical battle, but with help to improve. Just a suggestion. I might still use it though. Then finalize with your overall analysis.
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Re: Open Mic Chat

    Not a bad thought, Hypo. I have always done this in my word as it is without the clear differentiation between the topics.
    Last edited by whoami; October 19th, 2015 at 01:33 PM

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