10 lines due Monday
@Joe Boston
Meth
Joe Boston
10 lines due Monday
@Joe Boston
Check @Jonny Blaze stop giving dudes ur lunchables to write for you
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Let's Dance
You freaked at ur chick when u saw her w/ me
I'll forever keep tabs on ya girl like she bought me a drink
think that you'll win? It's a fib. This hick is so toast
Tell me a Tale or Swift lie?
I'll leave u w/ no meat on ya bones; that's the .gifs that I post
I'm the best there is and I'm stunting on queers
This battles a century match wouldn't be necessary for hundreds of years
You're in ya 30's and get no pussy. Player? Ur soooo not
If u having sex is senior forcing high school girls to take their clothes off
Ya girls a pig. If she was mine? I'd leave; banishment
That hogwash herself w grease and brush her teeth with ice cream sandwiches
lol
Last edited by A. Diction; November 28th, 2015 at 08:19 AM
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10 @Meth
Joes a party animal so to get drunk and fuck thats whats usually planned
Your Bae Route to my bedroom will consist of her cup filled and some balls in her hands
Your not a man stop bluffin gay fuck search the whole bakery for a stud muffin
As long as he got a tight end your quick to run in like Gronk and tear something(ewww!!)
Pushing Buttons Talking that hood shit youve never had a taste of gang affiliation
Before you see Meth n Redman id grow old as fuck waiting for another album collabaration
Theres no fascination with ya ur just putting on a show with no appeal
This isnt the place for actors but your pushing for that Big Screen like a Black Friday deal
Wanna keep it real and find that special someone you think married life is,good
See yourself as that father figure im shooting like Robert Dear if u Planned Parenthood
Will have links momentarily @Tim... open for votes
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One sided....
Flow: Joe, had the smoother verse to follow that wasn't that choppy. Meth your third bar or so wasn't forced fed beyond recognition. That will kill your wording on concepts tremendously.
Multiples: Tie, both equal on standards in thus area. More or less average.
Personals: Meth, only him because he described himself with those gayass gifs he post.
Wordplay:Tie, I honestly read both verses several times and didn't see any relevant wordplay. Besides that Meth and Redman bit, but wasn't that hard hitting for me @Joe.
Punch line: Joe, grasped this area more easier than meth attempts. His jabs were childish like he was giggling while writing a diss. Meth I seen better jabs I don't know what the heck you were thinking about.
Creativity: Joe, I enjoyed Joe's last 3 bars that held some leverage.
Meth: I think you keystyled this verse because it lacked creative edge. It didn't flow well only in certain spots then drifted off into oblivion. I expected more no offense regardless of our feuds.
Joe: Your verse wasn't as impressive either, but I witnessed enough ground control to order punishable wounds while getting the job done. Not bad.
Overall analysis: Joe gets the victory, yet I felt Meth slacked off this battle and needs to revise his wording along with creative concepts. Keep punching bag,fellas.
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
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Joes a party animal so to get drunk and fuck thats whats usually planned
Your Bae Route to my bedroom will consist of her cup filled and some balls in her hands
Tea bag that hoe. This is straight nun special but solid
Your not a man stop bluffin gay fuck search the whole bakery for a stud muffin
As long as he got a tight end your quick to run in like Gronk and tear something(ewww!!)
This is clever. Simple concept but u flipped it well and way to show his buddy muff some love too good shit
Pushing Buttons Talking that hood shit youve never had a taste of gang affiliation
Before you see Meth n Redman id grow old as fuck waiting for another album collabaration
This shit is awful
Theres no fascination with ya ur just putting on a show with no appeal
This isnt the place for actors but your pushing for that Big Screen like a Black Friday deal
Great concept but just not hard hitting
Wanna keep it real and find that special someone you think married life is,good
See yourself as that father figure im shooting like Robert Dear if u Planned Parenthood
Worded bad n set up lines aren't complimenting as good as they can
You freaked at ur chick when u saw her w/ me
I'll forever keep tabs on ya girl like she bought me a drink
Drink and me don't rhyme n I think if u woulda said pain pills n her purse or sumn it woulda hit harder but this aite
think that you'll win? It's a fib. This hick is so toast
Tell me a Tale or Swift lie?
I'll leave u w/ no meat on ya bones; that's the .gifs that I post
Meh
I'm the best there is and I'm stunting on queers
This battles a century match wouldn't be necessary for hundreds of years
Miss
You're in ya 30's and get no pussy. Player? Ur soooo not
If u having sex is senior forcing high school girls to take their clothes off
Below average
Ya girls a pig. If she was mine? I'd leave; banishment
That hogwash herself w grease and brush her teeth with ice cream sandwiches
Lol this is cool here
Joe edges this
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Joes a party animal so to get drunk and fuck thats whats usually planned
Your Bae Route to my bedroom will consist of her cup filled and some balls in her hands
[B]Pushing Buttons Talking that hood shit youve never had a taste of gang affiliation
Before you see Meth n Redman id grow old as fuck waiting for another album collabaration [/I]
Theres no fascination with ya ur just putting on a show with no appeal
This isnt the place for actors but your pushing for that Big Screen like a Black Friday deal
Wanna keep it real and find that special someone you think married life is,good
See yourself as that father figure im shooting like Robert Dear if u Planned Parenthood
vs.
You're in ya 30's and get no pussy. Player? Ur soooo not
If u having sex is senior forcing high school girls to take their clothes off
Ya girls a pig. If she was mine? I'd leave; banishment
^lmaoo!!!!! this is the laziest set-up of 2015 dawg. i'm CRYING lmaooo
That hogwash herself w grease and brush her teeth with ice cream sandwiches
Joe had long winded bars so his hits were always underwhelmed by 1 notch. it's all good though cause he had enough consistency to overpower Meth's verse which didn't have enough quality put into it beyond that senior bar he had.
Vote: JB Smoove
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The Meth n Redman bar is supposed to be italicized
think that you'll win? It's a fib. This hick is so toast
Tell me a Tale or Swift lie?
I'll leave u w/ no meat on ya bones; that's the .gifs that I post
--- nice........
I'm the best there is and I'm stunting on queers
This battles a century match wouldn't be necessary for hundreds of years
--- good wp........
Ya girls a pig. If she was mine? I'd leave; banishment
That hogwash herself w grease and brush her teeth with ice cream sandwiches
--- lmao jeeez that's tough.........
Vs.
Your not a man stop bluffin gay fuck search the whole bakery for a stud muffin
As long as he got a tight end your quick to run in like Gronk and tear something(ewww!!)
--- like the flip on tight end, even tho its a lil played u had a current event tie in. But the set up was pretty bad and its stretched........
Overall:
meths opener was played, seen tabs flips a good bit. Sex is seen you're/senior was worded weird to me. Wp didn't translate that well. And senior is played you'd need a fresh flip.
Jb had only one line I liked and it still wasn't a quotable cuz of the set up and it was over worded. Bay route is an old ass video game, not sure what u were going for with it. Meth/redman flips are super played. I like u was trying to do something with it, but its a miss for me. What exactly does "ur pushing for that big screen" mean? Lol. Miss. And I've seen a lot better flips on ur closer.
Basically, dumbass voting like this is why most vets never fucked with fl. Dudes who can't write a dope bar to save their life tryna critique ppl and saying their shit is wack lmao. Shits crazy.
Anyway
V. Meth
I see Joe taking this. One of the better verse s he's dropped. Meths opener was eh, didnt like how he executed taylor swift or senior either. Century was good. Joe had ok hits. redman, black friday, gronk i thought were all cool. Seems Meth didnt really try imo.
V/Joe
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