Og Maestro Vs. Attack of The Muff - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Tim]

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@Attack of the Muff

VS
@OG Maestro

Check in's DUE THURSDAY , December 31st 11:59PM PST
Verses DUE SATURDAY , January 2nd 11:59PM PST

16 Lines min

20 Lines MAX

ALL FL RULES APPL

[Attack of the Muff]

20

you wont like this

[Attack of the Muff]

U beat me?



That notions significantly tragic
ull see me "Shatter that Reflection"
n watch the title "Change Hands" like the Villian from Enter the Dragon
60 wins beating NOONE. yet u brag like a star
If u got 70 on your Plate. -u at the gym looking like the frail faggot you are
God. this tranny's a prick. never seen such a faggot exist
Topical to Battling? not an easy transition like when u went from a man to a bitch
Joog'ns ur man crush. u sing him sweet nothings but bottle ur feelins
Coz soon as Baby came out ur Mouth. we knew ud rather Swallow his Children
Ill make my demands. my shooters came w/ a plan
Funny YOUR names Maestro. coz Pipes'll Blow at you w/ the Wave of my Hand
talm bout im on pills. LIES. cease the talkin, BITCH
if im raidin any cabinets. im findin ur fav cheese wiz so ur girl can suck it off my dick
u want to sit at the big boys table. but the man's a dork
Tryin to Prove urself Worthy. but the Evidence u display never Stands in Court
u not elevatin. plus u aint got much to brag
Truth is if og's Going Places. its cause I got his fucking head in a duffel bag
This corny ass fraud Champ?. WOMP WOMP , killa
coz I aint never seen such a Biter w/ the Chain since a Chomp Chomp , nigga
yoo. dont think shafi supports you. he takes ur work in jest
coz if joogn's got ur back. hes gently nudging u towards ur certain death

[OG Maestro]

Watch him want to edit his verse. fucking coward.

Check.

[Attack of the Muff]

gone @ this fgt starting 3battles against new ppl n bein scared to drop in this

my verse been up how long?

ur legit a fuckboy

[OG Maestro]

Amber has a child and he's still with the bitch...LMAO

Yo,
Muff'll have Kids On His Plate, probably gain custody from the guy at court
He'll Easily Digest that; after Holding Semen in his mouth he's familiar w/ Child Support
Faggot faker. I'll grab my Katana since I'm Plotting to attack this hater
Slice This Square in All Directions; now his body is as good as Graphing Paper
And if I grab the Remington you'll find his ass in the bushes or something
No Aerosol Can, but The Air Inside him Will Leave At The Push Of A Button
But to really kill you I'll wait for Christmas & you have a son; gotta plan ya loss,
So he sees a Fat Body In All Red Fall Down The Chimney & think it's Santa Claus
Blood'll be in his Trachea & Esophagus; anybody say it won't? then dudes lied
Watch me get Surgical On This Pussy, & twist his neck around until his 'Tubes Tied
You never been gang affiliated, so quick the tough talk you dirt whore
The Ground Fighting to not cave in is the only time you were involved w/ a Turf War
It's ironic that you work on Oil Rigs: it reflects ya childhood. but money is yo excuse
That's Drilling Off Shore you ain't seen since ya mom's Revlon Beach 'photo shoots'
You called out Letterman when YOUR shit sound the same? you're hyped, it's simple
W/ Lines That Point To You Going In A Circle YOU embody the exact Recycle Symbol
Ya weak ass references take text to ruins. it's wack & a lot's devolved
That bullshit Reaches For The Heavens so ya missed punches could Slap Box w/ God

shit once she found out that i was like right near her n i was willing to show myself

dawg her job is literally less than a mile away

btw she gave me her number coz the chat timer was running out. n we talked some more. i mentioned that prior. it didn't raise any flags but im very naïve at times yo so that's why im asking yall niggas. lol im too embarrassed toask my niggas

^never mentioned this again. shady as fuck.

Made a fake personal but it's about YOUR inner-demon. I'm not too rattled to see,
That to get past being Fucked Over By A Tranny you make-believe I'm one to battle it, b

[Punch]

One focused more on personals and had some funny lines, the other came with a lot more punchlines. Good drop from both congrats to the champ got my vote in.

This vote does not count, @Punch .

Redo it bar by bar or quote vs quote with an explanation and it will, thank you. -Meth

[A. Diction]

im not gonna break it down bar for bar, thats too much typing and why would i say who im voting for? that's swaying.

Lmao wow


I'll edit my vote here and clean the thread

[Meth]

70 on ur plate was a good pers
Dug man from a bitch
Baby out ur mouth/swallow his children was a pretty dope new smooth flip with a personal tie in on an old concept
Pipes'll blow was cool
Biter with a chain was roflz and my favorite bar in a while

Child support was another cool flip on the swallowing kids dynamic
Tubes tied was solid, overworded tho


I got muff bros

Og had a lot of stuff that was kind of a reach conceptually.

His other concepts were pretty much all almosts

Muff was on fire in the middle of his verse

Good batt

V/ muff

[slecht]

That notions significantly tragic
ull see me "Shatter that Reflection"
n watch the title "Change Hands" like the Villian from Enter the Dragon
----wordy but ok'----
60 wins beating NOONE. yet u brag like a star
If u got 70 on your Plate. -u at the gym looking like the frail faggot you are
---ok not bad---
God. this tranny's a prick. never seen such a faggot exist
Topical to Battling? not an easy transition like when u went from a man to a bitch
---nah---
Joog'ns ur man crush. u sing him sweet nothings but bottle ur feelins
Coz soon as Baby came out ur Mouth. we knew ud rather Swallow his Children
---allright, meh---
Ill make my demands. my shooters came w/ a plan
Funny YOUR names Maestro. coz Pipes'll Blow at you w/ the Wave of my Hand
---LOL yes----
talm bout im on pills. LIES. cease the talkin, BITCH
if im raidin any cabinets. im findin ur fav cheese wiz so ur girl can suck it off my dick
----decent---
u want to sit at the big boys table. but the man's a dork
Tryin to Prove urself Worthy. but the Evidence u display never Stands in Court
---yes, cool---
u not elevatin. plus u aint got much to brag
Truth is if og's Going Places. its cause I got his fucking head in a duffel bag
---nah----
This corny ass fraud Champ?. WOMP WOMP , killa
coz I aint never seen such a Biter w/ the Chain since a Chomp Chomp , nigga
---nah---
yoo. dont think shafi supports you. he takes ur work in jest
coz if joogn's got ur back. hes gently nudging u towards ur certain death
--lol ok---


vs


Yo,
Muff'll have Kids On His Plate, probably gain custody from the guy at court
He'll Easily Digest that; after Holding Semen in his mouth he's familiar w/ Child Support
---eh, ok----
Faggot faker. I'll grab my Katana since I'm Plotting to attack this hater
Slice This Square in All Directions; now his body is as good as Graphing Paper
---decent---
And if I grab the Remington you'll find his ass in the bushes or something
No Aerosol Can, but The Air Inside him Will Leave At The Push Of A Button
---nah---
But to really kill you I'll wait for Christmas & you have a son; gotta plan ya loss,
So he sees a Fat Body In All Red Fall Down The Chimney & think it's Santa Claus
--dont like this---
Blood'll be in his Trachea & Esophagus; anybody say it won't? then dudes lied
Watch me get Surgical On This Pussy, & twist his neck around until his 'Tubes Tied
---ok---
You never been gang affiliated, so quick the tough talk you dirt whore
The Ground Fighting to not cave in is the only time you were involved w/ a Turf War
---nah---
It's ironic that you work on Oil Rigs: it reflects ya childhood. but money is yo excuse
That's Drilling Off Shore you ain't seen since ya mom's Revlon Beach 'photo shoots'
-.---meh---
You called out Letterman when YOUR shit sound the same? you're hyped, it's simple
W/ Lines That Point To You Going In A Circle YOU embody the exact Recycle Symbol
---ok eh, execution was off-
Ya weak ass references take text to ruins. it's wack & a lot's devolved
That bullshit Reaches For The Heavens so ya missed punches could Slap Box w/ God
lol ook not bad here
Made a fake personal but it's about YOUR inner-demon. I'm not too rattled to see,
That to get past being Fucked Over By A Tranny you make-believe I'm one to battle it, b
---ok, light personal---




Good match. Both had dope bars... the punches IMO were pretty even, One had a slight edge in the concepts but this could go either way. After 3 reads I'm gonna go with the one that had the only edge I could see. mvgt muff

[Punch]

60 wins beating NOONE. yet u brag like a star
If u got 70 on your Plate. -u at the gym looking like the frail faggot you are
talm bout im on pills. LIES. cease the talkin, BITCH
if im raidin any cabinets. im findin ur fav cheese wiz so ur girl can suck it off my dick

vs

Muff'll have Kids On His Plate, probably gain custody from the guy at court
He'll Easily Digest that; after Holding Semen in his mouth he's familiar w/ Child Support

You never been gang affiliated, so quick the tough talk you dirt whore
The Ground Fighting to not cave in is the only time you were involved w/ a Turf War

Muff: I think you used too much filler, instead of trying to attack w/ punches every bar. Your had a lot of direct disses and
for a direct diss to beat a punchlne in a battle it would have to be super well done, which yours was not.

OG: Like one or two of your lines but you should try and set your punches up better. Ever hear of "themed concepts that relate to the punch?" You came w/ more punches overal and the ones you did bring edged your opponents personal disses and punches that he did bring.

Overall, both came pretty weak for a "champ match", nothing really had that "wow" factor.
But I chose OG with consistency. Seemed like he wanted it more. Fair vote.

[Ryno]

Opener
Man to a bitch
Pipes
Cheeze wiz

Vs

Opener
Tubes tied

V-Muff. OG kinda over did some of these concepts imo. They were tied in and hella descriptive but at the same time n kind of made the execution soft in spots, imo. Like the slap box with God. Muff took this

[Foul]

muff: You started off iffy, i wasnt really feeling the concept was lacklsuter, cuz you could of came at him harder than just making a statement. 2nd one was ight, i liked the third line flowed good, nice 5th line, 6th was corny lol, 7th wasnt feeling it, 8th nah, i was feeling the 9th line mad me lol, 10th was dope as fuck, 11th could of been harder

OG: 1st bar was ok i was feeling it, 2nd was ok, i think you could of worded that one a bit better, 3rd, 4th LOTB that shit was nice, 5th bar haha, you a funny nigga, 6th bar solid you keep hitting him 7th hahaha 8th was wgood 9th, bar, i liked that alot man 10th
was ehhh weakest line so far 11th thats crazy

overall og came harder man V/ og

[Greedy]

Muff-
Opener: a bit long winded but 4/5
Man to bitch:3.6/5
Pipes:wowzers 5/5
Evidence: 3.5/5
Closer:3.5/5

Vs

OG-
Opener:1.9/5
Graphing paper:3/5
Aerosol: attaboy3.5/5
Soapbox: 4/5


Verdict-
Vote muff. Less misses. Og had a fee stingers, but a lot of misses

[Tim]

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